Nightmare Cleaner: Is My Partner a Bratty Little Girl?

Plot: 4. Characters: 3. Writing style: 4.5. Worldview structure: 4.5. Overall impression: Excellent. The pace is fast, and the plot itself has no problems, but the continuity is a bit broken. The writing is good, surpassing most of the novice articles on Tomato. The worldview itself is not new, and has many overlaps with novels of the same type, making it more mature. The author can add daily life as a plot transition, otherwise only 20 chapters will be comparable to the 200 chapters of similar novels. This is also the reason for the low characterization score. The writing style can be described as sophisticated, the rhythm is very unified, well-proportioned but not thin, but it is too fast. The worldview setting is not novel, but the structure is mature and there are no loopholes. The poisonous point is not obvious, the protagonist is determined to be greedy for money and self-interest, and there will be no serious Madonna plot of the same type, so you can eat it with confidence.

Overall, it's okay. The introduction is unattractive. The main theme is clear and the narrative logic is clear. Although some details still lack polish (the protagonist's life story is unclear), the author is a novice and there is still progress to be made. Keep up the good work.

It's okay, I can write more daily routines to make the plot more coherent.

The protagonist's mood is stable, and his partner's mood is also stable (Stable Secondary) Very well written about the chemical reaction between two people with extraordinary backgrounds. If I have to say it, the description of the protagonist is too deep. Many details have been mentioned in one stroke The story generally favors copy flow I still hope to add some humanity to the protagonist. Of course, this faint sense of death is also very welcome.

Good-looking and relatively novel

Nice work,

I read it all in one go, it's great, I'll wait for the author to update it soon.

It's very good-looking. I didn't expect that a book I found randomly at night would be so good-looking. The world view lit up my eyes as soon as I saw it, and I kept reading it all night long. 😄

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It's a good book, but it's a pity that there aren't many people there.