One Piece: Miss Shinobu’s Grand Voyage

Good review, the pacing is well controlled and not draggy, but the transitions feel very stiff. For example, where the protagonist fights Hawkeye, I personally feel that it is very stiff. Finally, this is a very good novel. Although it only has 22 chapters, it is much better than other novels with 100 chapters.

The protagonist doesn't even try to hide it. When Nami gets on the boat, she says she's going to save the village. When she meets Red Nose, she says she knows Shanks. There are many plots like this. It looks much better to retain some of the feeling of the protagonist's group adventure.

They all came to see the Butterfly Ninja. Later, Sanji's original plot was rewritten, and it seemed that the protagonist had less role. It's okay to watch while jumping.

There are three colors of domineering in Donghai, but they are too super models.

I haven't watched One Piece, and I've gone to read it later. Overall, I feel pretty good, not that unbearable, and at least I don't think the character of Ren is broken. I give it four stars because I'm worried that others will say that I'm a fake reviewer [eating melon]

It's very interesting, but can the author write more about it? I saved it for several weeks at a time, but ended up finishing it all in one sitting [crying] [crying]

I hope there will be more plot for the protagonist in the future, maybe no cp or...

Not bad, it would be nice to describe the main character moreヾ(´∀｀.ヾ)

Very interesting plot, Xiao Ren is in another world [please update]

Why do Luffy and the others still call Shinobi by his full name?