Myriad Worlds Dragon Talisman

As a new author, although I have been a reader for more than ten years, I only realized that writing a book is not easy when I started writing by hand, including ideas, creativity, ideas, writing power, etc. If there is anything bad, you can tell me directly. I can't change it, but I will absorb improvements in the future. If you have any ideas, creativity, or regrets about the future plot, you can tell me! If you have any ideas about the world you want the protagonist to go to, please let me know! I will make it happen for everyone! The urban chapter in the second volume is not satisfactory. I originally wanted to write a variety show, but I didn't have enough writing skills and couldn't control it. I will try my best to finish writing this world. What do you think about the third world?