Aotu World: Say Goodbye to Your Sun!

It's really beautiful ( ˉ͈̀꒳ˉ͈́ )✧! ! ! There is no OOC in the author's bold version of Paius, it is exactly what I thought he should be like, and the fact that he has no cp is too friendly to me! The whole article reads very smoothly, the protagonist's growth looks very comfortable, the emotional line is also very well written, and the battle scenes are even more exciting, exciting, exciting to read! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] Moreover, the author is very attentive to his own daughter, and has drawings of all kinds of combat clothing and weapons. Reading the full text is both a bit funny and refreshing, and there are no embarrassing plots or shocking settings found in other concave and convex fanfics. The anchor point of the protagonist is also very clear. She has a bit of a fighting maniac and a bit of arrogance. When exposed, she failed to catch a fish, and her ears will turn red. Hehe, it is really cute (*￣3￣)╭♡❀ What's more important is that she does not have awe, fear, or fear of angels and gods because she is a human being. She always treats the relationship between them equally. The emotional scenes make me warm. Wuwuwuwuwu, what on earth did I eat before I met the author? ˃ ˄ ˂̥̥ And when I first saw the cover, I was a little shocked. The design of this cover is really great. Li's sassiness and pressure were immediately revealed. When I clicked in, I was even more surprised. Don't worry, author, I will always follow you! ✧(◍˃̶ᗜ˂̶◍)✩

There are few heroines who are not in love, plots that are not embarrassing, and protagonists who have ideals and beliefs and cognitions that belong to ordinary people in the current society. The protagonist's portrayal is very full, the original character is not obtrusive, and the sad plot is not forced to steal the scene. It does not feel stiff like other patterns, just like it is in the original plot. It is lighthearted and funny but also has the humanism that I prefer (I really like those related to the righteousness of family and country and human civilization). Overall, the plot is evenly distributed. It is a rare article that suits my preferences. I have not played the games in it and I don't understand it, but it does not affect the reading. The related settings do not play a major role, and it is very friendly to those who don't know. It feels quite comprehensive. It does not blindly display the settings and knowledge created by itself or imported from other places. It not only retains the color of the original world view, but also retains its own characteristics and concepts, which is very valuable (in addition, the name of the protagonist is really very affectionate). If I remember correctly, Li Yuan refers to the people, so I like the word Li very much. If you look into it carefully, I really like this article, so keep up the good work! Wadasi will definitely make people around you highly recommend your article. Good articles should be seen by more people.

It's really awesome. This book is not the routine of normal concave and convex fan fiction, not the normal kind of novel that saves the plot characters of the concave and convex world, but saves civilization and saves those mortals, and the plot characters are just one of these valued people. Qin Luo is raised by civilization. I feel that Qin Luo is really awesome. It is the kind of ideal society where the thieves are high in the technology tree and are awesome. Moreover, communism has been realized, and there is a sense of déjà vu in our country. It is a very beautiful society, the protagonist is also very strong, and overall it is quite enjoyable. At that time, it was directly blasted to pieces by the God of Power. Later, he was basically invincible and had high authority. However, the protagonist likes equality, has racial mysophobia, and firmly believes in the supremacy of human beings. Human beings can rely on their own strength to succeed instead of relying on the power of divine authority.

I really like this work, I read it in one go in half a day I particularly like the character of the protagonist in it. He is sad because of the departure of his friends, but he will not be decadent. He will get angry because of the civilized moth. He regards all beings as equals. Even if he has strong strength, he will not like killing and will not change his views. He always sticks to his own ideas. The author's writing is very good. I have read a lot of books. This is the first time I have written a review of a work. I can't express what I want to express in words. I really like [Love]

It's simply a fairy tale in concave and convex writing! It's been a long time since I've seen such a strong and capable article. I will always follow you [blowing kiss] The heroine, the great judge, is simply in love with her. She is so handsome and beautiful that I feel at ease. The story is also very good. The characters are three-dimensional and the interaction with the angels is also very loving (family is to be together). The stars and humans are supreme. I hope the author will write better and better as he writes. The only drawback is that he can't update a hundred chapters in a day (a pity~) and the few stars are just for the sake of scoring points.

The hesitation when we first meet is the confusion of the time traveler; the transparency of "here you are, let's play first" is the freedom and ease of mortals; the determination when rejecting the mission of the Creator God is the rebellion against the "fate of cattle and horses"; the embarrassment when being called "star destroyer" and "the most severe mother of decadent civilization" is the most vivid human fireworks under the aura of divinity. She knocks on the door of gods with her ordinary heart and uses her complaints to break the illusion. In a world where the stars are the order and the gods are the shackles, she sticks to the obsession of "not traveling in vain" and turns all the imposed auras into self-mockery of digging her toes into the ground. This article is a love letter to all souls who don't want to be defined - even if they are pushed to the altar, they can still say "shut up" to all the shackles with a smile and the warmth of the world.

At first I thought I would read the book review first, but I was a little surprised later. Most of the otome BLs I have read before were otome BL-oriented ones, and those without CP are rare. Without the packaging of love candy, the interactions between the characters no longer have that sticky and tugging feeling (I personally like it very much) The concave and convex world written by the author did not start with the concave and convex competition. How should I put it? I am looking forward to another possibility of the concave and convex world written in big letters (Infrastructure lovers are ecstatic (≧∇≦)). I am really curious about what the world will become by the time of the concave and convex competition. (✧∀✧)

It looks really good from the beginning. There is no scene that feels OOC, and it is also very consistent with a person who has engraved the red five-star education in his mind. It also explains that the protagonist has a different view of this universe. All in all, it looks very comfortable, and there is nothing illogical.

Super nice, logical and organized The characters are not OOC, creative, and the plot is novel At least every character I read and know in the book is not OOC, I can guarantee this. The CD-less setting in the book is really friendly to me. I was really happy afterwards. It feels better than every other book on my bookshelf. This is the most beautiful convex and convex fanfic I have found this year. Love it so much. The less points are just to keep the score low, so as not to get too high a score and seal the author's book. What should I read then?

I think the rating will go up later. If you see a negative review, please check the reading time. Why do I always see reviews that haven't been read for 30 minutes? There are a lot of red elements, and the writing is still a bit green at the beginning, but the progress is getting bigger and bigger! His narrative ability is first-rate, he is truly a rare fan! There is a little frustration in the front (this is a description based on other people's comments, but I think it is the heroine, as an earthling, growing up in the concave and convex world, a transformation, becoming stronger, and this is only when she becomes stronger, the training is It doesn't mean that I haven't learned anything later. I feel aggrieved when I hit others. You and I can only say that there is no other way. I want to see the kind of human beings who can punch and kick in the concave and convex world as soon as they come up. Give me some tricks. Let's read your cool articles. It obviously has a human-centered/centered core (I love to watch it), concave and convex worlds, and the victory of man over nature. I think it is normal to be hostile (referring to a certain plot when the heroine expresses her views on God and angels are relatively hostile). I have seen some people say that they are frustrated, Le, I think this is a normal thing. Many things in red are metaphorical. In my opinion, they are relatively natural and connected, integrated, and appear.