Forced Marriage: Cowherd's Husband Is an S-Class Wanted Criminal

It feels like the author is digging a big hole. I don't know what kind of identity and background the heroine will have. I'm really looking forward to the follow-up plot. It's just that the golden finger was used a little less in the early stage. I hope to use it more in the later stage. Also, the relationship between the male and female protagonists develops very slowly. Will these two slow-moving people be able to be together in the finale [laughs] After reading Chapter 62, I found that this book is not the main line of romance like traditional female comics. It seems to be more about the investigation and revenge of the male protagonist, intertwined with the life experience of the female protagonist, and is more inclined to the story line than the emotional line. It's rare on the Tomato platform. I also found that the author is very active and often interacts with us in our comments. Especially when I saw a book review that suggested a group portrait, I immediately arranged the plot of Aze [Like]

This book is my first attempt at writing an original novel, the first time I wrote an outline, created characters, and created a background. There are many imperfections, but readers are very tolerant of reading and point them out thoughtfully. Love you all so much! I've been learning while writing. For example, after I understand how to write the opening chapter, I feel like it's crappy when I read my first chapter! I went back and forth, changed it over and over again, and finally decided to delete it all and rewrite it! So what you are seeing now is my revised first chapter. If you have any good suggestions or comments, I hope you will give them your advice! I will read everyone's opinions, and I will try out the parts that can be adjusted and adopted in real time (that's the only good thing about naked updates, haha~) However, some of them involve the core settings of this book and cannot be adjusted, so I will write them down first and take them into consideration when I design the next book! Finally, I will show you my feelings and be cute. I hope my writing level will improve by leaps and bounds, ( •̀ ω •́ )y~ Yeah

It feels pretty good, except that the character setting of the heroine feels a bit fragmented in the beginning (emotions, words and deeds), but the further you go, the more it feels like opening a blind box. The separation in the front can be understood as a disguise, and slowly integrating into the interstellar and the male protagonist's team is like finding a sense of belonging, and gradually releasing your true temperament. Although the relationship between the male and female protagonists is slow and slow, they are both sincere babies. There is no suspicion or misunderstanding. They say what they have to say, which is very good. I will add some descriptions of my teammates later (it would be better if the missions and life are more permeable), that is, the teammates should not be too much like NPCs. A sense of group portrait will make the article fuller. What you have written so far is pretty good, and you are performing steadily.

A very normal love, very normal, so normal that it feels like it shouldn't appear in a Tomato novel, it's a long and steady flow

I'm a bit confused, brothers and sisters. Although I have read five thousand hours of books, this book gave me a feeling that it was difficult to understand and there was no logic. It should be a new author and a new book. Please support me. I'll take a step back first. I'll come back when the update is almost done [laughs]

The author's unconstrained imagination is really beautiful. I was attracted by it from the beginning🤩Now I can't wait to lean on the author's ear to urge updates, haha😄