Adoptive Mother's Daily Life

This book is the first one I wrote. I mainly read it based on what others said about writing a fanfic first. I read a lot about HP fanfics, so I decided to write one myself and give it a try. As I was writing it, I realized that it would be impossible without an outline and a detailed outline. It felt like a story was finished very quickly. It needed to add supporting characters, add ups and downs to the plot, and it also needed to be logically consistent. Your own shortcomings really need to be discovered and solved by writing first. Look forward to my next book. Mainly because I wanted to complete the book review task given to me, but it actually asked for 100 words [laughing awkwardly].

The rhythm is a bit chaotic at the beginning, but the overall plot is pretty good and reasonable later on. I don't know if the bad reviews above are intentional. I was adopted when I was 6 years old. I left home and went to Hogwarts when I was 12 years old. Then I went into a rebellious period. Then the child grew up and separated from his parents. It's quite normal. I don't understand why it seems that the adoptive mother doesn't have a mouth behind her [laughs awkwardly]. During the rebellious period, parents have to listen to what they say, let alone boarding.

It is a relatively novel angle. At the beginning, ordinary people were still thinking about how to suppress the famous indescribable person. Later, it developed into another direction. Although it was a bit deviated from expectations, it can be seen that the author worked hard to improve it, and judging from the story line, many of his inner thoughts did not feel particularly natural. Come on

A different perspective, it's a very interesting Riddle fan fiction [I learned it], but I feel that the story of three generations jumps a bit too fast.