[Dragon Raja Fanfiction] [Building Wealth] [Sharp-Tongued] [Everyday Life] [Lighthearted] [Multiple Heroines]
Name: Lu Mingfei
Identity before transmigrating: Bronze rank in League of Legends' Zaun server (100,000 matches)
Age: 29.
Abilities: Super keyboard warrior, master of making people lose their cool, unbeatable trash-talker.
“Lu Mingfei! You came in last place in the class again!”
“You’ve brought shame on the whole class!”
Facing his homeroom teacher’s fury,
Lu Mingfei lifted his chin.
“According to the ranking system, somebody has to come last. Why can’t it be me?”
“My grades have been this consistently bad for all three years of high school. As my homeroom teacher, shouldn’t you look for the problem in yourself?”
“You... you...” His teacher instantly lost his cool.
[You successfully made your homeroom teacher lose his cool. Intelligence +1]
“Lu Mingfei! Why did you delete me from your QQ friends?”
Facing Chen Wenwen’s accusation,
Lu Mingfei tilted his head and smiled.
“I delete whoever I want!”
“Come to think of it, you like keeping so many simps around. Is your skin dry?”
“You’re always wallowing in melancholy. Were you Lin Daiyu in your past life?”
“You... you...” Chen Wenwen’s eyes reddened, and she turned and ran.
[You successfully made Chen Wenwen lose her cool. Looks +1]
“So you betrayed me too?”
“Lu Mingfei!”
Norton roared at Lu Mingfei!
Lu Mingfei’s mouth twisted into a smirk!
“You’re terrible at playing the human race in StarCraft!”
“Your scouting game at the start is awful!”
“Your unit compositions fall apart in the midgame!”
“And your late-game micro with large armies is a mess!”
“I could play with one hand behind my back and still beat you at StarCraft!”
The King of Ice and Fire, Norton, heard this and spat out a mouthful of blood!
[You successfully made Dragon King Norton lose his cool. Reward: world-ending Word Spirit, Zhulong!]
It's a cool story based on the dragon clan, but the characters are a bit OOC. There are too many poisonous points, Karun. Summary: There are some typos, but they do not affect reading. Mainly in terms of plot, the characters are seriously OOC. I suspect that not only the protagonist but also the author has not read the novel. In the end, this article looks like it was run by AI, but the typos don't look like it.
Overall it's pretty good, but there are still some flaws in the data description. It feels like it just needs to be copied and pasted. After adding some values in the later stage, no modifications were made.
The Dragon Clan fan's cool writing is awesome. Zu An/bloody/reverence for life/turning back against the wind despite laziness, very similar to INFJ, haha Many girls Tasty character design The mixture of urban drama
There is one problem in the early stage. Chen Wenwen is a bit OC, and Chen Wenwen does not care about Lu Mingfei that much. Su Xiaoqiang is also a bit, but okay, basically consistent. However, her father is a mine boss and is very rich. There is no living expenses, it is just pocket money.
Don't say it. Don't say it. Although the writing is still a bit green, it's okay so far. The more I read it, the more I feel something different [laughing]
The writing is good, it's an excellent dragon fan fiction, I look forward to the follow-up
How come there are still people who write fan fiction without understanding the original work?
When did Lu Mingfei become an adult?
Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch
It's so beautiful. I, the King of Tang Dynasty, like to watch it.