Master Pei, Your Daughter Is Sweet and Adorable

(Personal thoughts, don't comment if you don't like it) The author's writing style is actually quite good, and the emotional descriptions are delicate. However, the progress of the article is too slow. In the early stage, the other heroine did not appear in two chapters until more than 50 chapters, and the real contact between the two heroines was only in chapter 190. When I read the article, I found that many descriptions were repeated in a short period of time. I personally feel that there is no need to emphasize them all the time. Overall, the writing is indeed very good. The heroine's character and the emotional changes in the Luo family are all well written. The slow pace is also beneficial, which can make the characters more fleshed out and the story more three-dimensional. (Personal thoughts, don't comment if you don't like it)

Nice! The writing is good, I really like the master who created it, and Xi's emotions are written so naturally and handled very well! Super pretty! ! ! ! ! ! The master really seemed infinite and gentle. I really felt again that "the great soul is androgynous."

The author's writing is very nice. Today I updated 14 chapters. The update is very fast.

It's really good to watch. Now that I've read a little bit about the beginning, the character image that the master gave me is simply a father among fathers, a man among men, and a husband among husbands. Then our heroine is so adorable. 😇

It's super good-looking, the writing is delicate, the plot is neither fast nor slow, every aspect of life is clear, and the connections between life are appropriate without giving people a feeling of disconnection. Master takes good care of Xixi's life and feelings, and tries his best to let Xixi live a good life in this unfamiliar world. Master is not only Xixi's master, but also Xixi's life mentor. I like this setting very much; Xixi is a very hard-working girl, whether in the world of immortality or in an unfamiliar world, she is You are trying hard to accept, learn, and do your best in things. She relies on her master but also feels sorry for him and is afraid that she will bring trouble to her master. Xixi is an innocent and kind girl, and a proud girl. She does not understand the emotions of the outside world very well, but she uses her truest feelings to experience the outside world. Although I just started reading it not long ago, this novel is the one I have the most patience to read so far. I am looking forward to Xixi's future life and hope that our lovely Xixi will always be safe and happy. I really like this novel! ! ! Nice! ! ! More push! ! ! The author is really great and can write such beautiful articles! Dad, I have decided that I will definitely follow your article!

I have read more than 100 chapters now, and the plot is okay, but I still don't understand where the heroine was picked up, and some of the descriptions are very similar. I just read the previous chapter, and the next chapter is here again.

What kind of crematorium method is it? I'm quite curious. After all, it has been exchanged twice, which means that it is not a biological child, so why is there a crematorium plot? And currently Suning's perception is really good [Thoughts]

Author, when will the other heroine come out [crying]

It's very beautiful and peaceful [Eating melon] This is the timeline, and where is our dear other heroine [I'm about to cry]

The two-way redemption is so exciting, and the love between Hui Shengxi and Qin Xuzhao is so heartbreaking!