Dragon Warrior: Child of Lightning

I read this book by chance and spent a whole morning reviewing it. Generally speaking, I feel that the writing is thick and durable. Some of the sentences are very long and some short sentences are not very fluent. If you watch it for a long time, it may be a bit tiring. As for the plot, I think it is average. If you watch it for a long time, you may feel a bit boring. Ouyang Xing and Bailuo can interact more. I think the development of the emotional line is better. The ratings are all excellent, and the character design is basically not broken. Most of the characters have not yet appeared to be fully developed, but Luo Xiaoyi's character design is very good, and he has a sense of responsibility for his elders. When watching it, I couldn't help but feel sorry for such a young child who has such a sense of responsibility. The others are pretty good. I have a good impression of the author after reading the comments and replies. This book is one of the best in Tomato Dragon Fighting fan fiction, and it is of high quality. I don't know why this book is not popular. I only saw 3 reviews. Also, I would like to ask which one is stronger, the protagonist or Benro? Is there a deputy cp? The above is my personal experience and suggestions. Stacked Armor: I have two parents, but I am not in good health and often stay at home, so I have read a lot of books (including fan-original unlimited streaming literature, etc.). I went to school almost eight days a month and still managed to get the first place in the exam (my brain and intelligence are fine, except when I transformed into a body). I am an omnivore and have read almost all the Dragon Fighting fandoms on Tomato. I am also a writer and have written a total of six books (three have been removed from the shelves). Personally, I think my quality is pretty good. As long as you don't scold me, I won't scold you either.

It's okay, it's good to watch, but it's just a bit sparse, but it's being serialized. I haven't watched this animation for a long time, but I remember there were many seasons. Even if it follows the shortened main line, there should be about a hundred chapters that can be followed. In the early stage, the emotional relationship with Beno is not very explicit (in my opinion, they are all 13 or 14 years old, is it normal?), You can wait, it's good!

The characters are basically not broken, the plot is quite interesting, and the writing is good. It doesn't have that rigid feeling, which makes people want to read more. I have read a lot of dragon fighting fanfics, and this one is really good.

How to say it? This is my first completed novel. Although the main story is not finished, I will insist on finishing the remaining novels. Cp Bailuo will never change! I love dual heroines! I personally feel that the writing is good, at least there are no holes that are difficult to fill. I recommend reading it, because this may be the first epic novel in the dragon fighting circle where someone has written the first, second, third, fourth, fifth, sixth, and seventh stories with self-created characters. I have started writing the first season mainly to complete the character setting of Ouyang Xing. You can wait patiently for the next one! I will use the next book to complete the content of the remaining seasons, and you can also look forward to the finale. I sincerely hope that readers who have not read it will be patient enough to read this book. I also thank all readers for their comments. I am very happy every time I read it! I hope you can leave your thoughts after reading it! Thank you all!

It's good to watch. I want to see the protagonist rebel in the end, kill all the elders, and then fly away with Bairuo.

Thank you very much for the recommendation that allowed me to read this book. I have been looking for this type of book on Tomato for a long time. Thank you to the author for his output. At present, my personal opinion is that the characters are basically not broken. The plot is also good. The occasional different sentences are not harmful. It is just that the chapters are a bit short now. Author, you must write it to the end. I really love reading [crying]

After reading this, I really cried several times, it was so beautiful! ! ! Highly recommended! ! ! !

It's very beautiful. Keep taking pictures. Come on! I think this future work will be very popular and awesome, so keep up the good work!

It's very well written, it makes me feel like my childhood is back, I'm looking forward to Dou San I also re-read it several times and found that there are many foreshadowings about Ouyang Xing's identity. I hope to see them filled in in the next book.

Come on, the author is great, it looks great [like][like][like]