After Living for Billions of Years, I Stole the Immortal Emperor’s Opportunity

This is really well written. My impression of "immortality stories" is that all your friends and family are dead, leaving you all alone 🤭🤭 At least this is an unconventional, somewhat happy ending 👍👍👍 It's like achieving immortality together with your loved one.

It's a pretty good book. Although it's a novel about immortality, it doesn't focus too much on life and death. The emotional storylines in each stage are very rich, and the author has also created a hodgepodge of novel elements. What's most commendable is that this book actually has a female lead, and it's a single female lead.

If I could steal the King of Hell's pen, I would grit my teeth and weep as I judge myself. I would drink ten bowls of Meng Po's soup, forgetting the bitterness and sorrow of my past life. Even if I leaped into the River of Oblivion, I would forget my past life and forget you. I would sever all three thousand threads of love, kneeling before the Buddha, never to be reincarnated. I would rather be a wandering ghost in the underworld than set foot on the mortal realm again in my next life.

It's quite interesting, above average. The plot development is decent, at least it's watchable. Unpredictable plot twists are what keep you reading. The author could be more productive and maintain this pace for 400,000 words. I just wonder how you'll handle the story after the Nascent Soul stage. If handled well, it'll get at least an 8.

After my harrowing journey through time, I was overjoyed and sang "The Blood Song of the Three Realms." The Lord of the Stars discovered me and took me to the "Journey of the Misty Heavens," where I entered the "Myriad Realms." There, I encountered the "God of Slaughter," known as "Cataclysm," who sat on the "Throne of Divine Seal" and tried to kill me.

It's a good read, the descriptions of parting are excellent, and it perfectly captures the loneliness of immortality. But I'm not sure if it's a single-female-lead story.

Not bad, it's a good longevity novel, but not the solitary kind. It has a touch of everyday life, human relationships, and more about the path to immortality, haha. Wang Teng, Wang Lin, Han Er, Li Feiyu... A transmigrator... [Staring][staring][staring], it's practically a hodgepodge of protagonists! 🍉 It's quite unique among the longevity novels I've read. I hope the author writes more, the story gets more and more interesting, and it has a good ending! 👍

Yes, it's great, but the rating is too low. The character development and some details are well done. I feel that if it had another hundred or two hundred chapters, it would have a rating of over 8 points. And it might even reach 9 points when it's finished! 😄

She was originally at the peak of the Foundation Establishment stage, just one step away from breaking through to the Nascent Soul stage. Does the author think this writing style is reasonable? Also, the author's train of thought is very disorganized, often resulting in incoherent sentences. 🙂

So far, it's written quite well! Deserves five stars, keep it up! 💪