A reborn Fangfeng Yiying story, with Xiang Liu. Happy ending. [Sweet and doting at first, angst later, healing each other]
This time, Fangfeng Yiying lives only for herself.
After being reborn, Fangfeng Yiying is like someone who has awakened. She sees through the forces shaping the world of the Great Wilderness and does her best to stay out of the fray, seeking to protect, save, and free herself.
She draws close to Xiang Liu as family, and they look after each other. Then, when they meet again in another capacity, their feelings quietly begin to change...
Fangfeng Yiying's gradual awakening spurs Xiang Liu to awaken as well. In the end, they both break free of the fates laid out for them.
This is just a story, one that belongs only to Fangfeng Yiying and Xiang Liu. It may not be dazzling, but it has a little warmth.
[Please note: In this story, Xiang Liu is in love with Yiying without realizing it, and he has ties to Xiao Yao. He only recognizes his feelings after the poison bugs turn on him. If that bothers you, please don't read!
In this story, I want to portray a tender, nuanced kind of love. This “love” isn't limited to romance. The story builds through small details, so please be patient as you read.]
It's well-written, but the later parts about Xiang Liu and Xiao Yao's interactions were really uncomfortable. They were hugging and cuddling without any sense of boundaries. It even says that Xiao Yao was moved after the hug, saying it was different from Yi Ying's hug. Sorry, I'm petty and possessive, but maintaining distance from all girls except Yi Ying is the best way to feel safe.
Overall, it's pretty good. It was my first time seeing this pairing, and I gradually accepted it, but the character design definitely fell short. I read this fanfic because of Xiang Liu, so I had high expectations for the accuracy of Xiang Liu's portrayal. However, after reading it, I was able to convince myself to accept some of the character discrepancies.
Thank you to the author for persevering and giving Xiangliu and Yiying a happy ending. I really love these two characters. Since the original work is like this, I hope that in this parallel world, these two love-struck fools (in a good way) can live happily ever after. 💕
It's very well-written; I followed it from beginning to end. There might be some parts that don't quite fit the romantic or emotional portrayal of both characters being virgins, but as the author states in the conclusion, this story doesn't explicitly state that both characters are virgins, so these minor flaws don't detract from its overall quality. The writing style is also quite good, making it a comfortable read. There are no major plot holes throughout, making it a great fanfiction.
I really enjoyed the author's character development; each character has their own distinct personality, and there's no idealized plot. Yi Ying loves Xiang Liu, but she knows how to put herself first. Xiao Tian and Xin Yue's ending is much more satisfying than in the drama.
It's very beautiful. As the fortune teller said, Yi Ying has fought for a good fate for herself.
The logic is sound, and the pacing is smooth. My word choice might be inaccurate, but this book is indeed a normal fan fiction; there are no inexplicable emotions, words, or actions. It's acceptable.
It looks great. Not out of character at all.
It's well-written, with a good balance of pacing and rhythm. I can't imagine how happy I would be if it could be made into a TV series.
It's very good, and the characters are very well-developed.