Longing for You: Yi and Liu

The writing is very good, but it was really uncomfortable to get along with Liu Xiaoyao in the later period. There was no sense of propriety at all. Xiaoyao was moved after the hug, saying that it was different from Yiying's hug. Sorry, I am petty and possessive. Except for Yiying, keeping a distance from all girls is the best way to feel safe. A distance without a sense of propriety will only make me feel that Yiying is not important in his heart and can be abandoned at any time.

The overall feeling is very good. It was the first time I saw this combination and I accepted it after seeing it. However, I was really disappointed in the character design. I came to read the fic for Xiang Liu, so I still have requirements for Xiang Liu's restoration, but after reading it, I can convince myself to accept some differences in the character design. At least my core hope for Xiang Liu is to live, be free, and be happy, and he has them all, as well as more family love. Fangfeng Yiying had never thought about this route of hers. It was very good and very satisfying! But maybe my heart is unconsciously biased towards Xiang Liu, so I don't have a perfect score, but it's already considered a good one among Tomato fans! After reading the original work, every fanfic I write will be obsessed with the character design. Because I don't like the drama version very much, so I try my best to pursue the character design and plot that are consistent with the original work. Xiangliu here does not meet expectations, but the plot is really attractive. Overall, it ranks third among the Xiangliu fanfics I have read on Tomato! It's a pity that I only saw it now. I'm glad that I chose to click on it and read it. I hope the author will continue to work hard! Have a happy day everyone!

Thank you to the author for persisting in finishing the writing and giving Xiang Liu and Yiying a happy ending. I really like these two characters. Since the original work is like this, in the parallel small world, I hope that the two inhuman love brains (commendations) that were originally entrusted to them can live happily [Sending Hearts]

The writing is very nice, from beginning to end. There may be some settings that are not very suitable for Shuang Jie emotionally, but as the author wrote in the conclusion, this article does not indicate Shuang Jie, so the flaws cannot be concealed. The writing style is also very good, it is very comfortable to read, and there are no major flaws throughout the story. It is a good fanfic.

I really like the author's character creation. Everyone has their own personality characteristics and there is no idealized plot. Yiying loves Xiang Liu in her heart, but knows how to put herself first. The endings of Xiaotian and Xinyue are relatively more comfortable than in the show.

It's very beautiful. Just as the fortune teller said, Yiying has given herself a good life.

The logic is rigorous and the rhythm is smooth. My wording may not be accurate, but this book is indeed a normal fanfic. There are no inexplicable emotions, words, or behaviors. That's okay.

Very nice. Not OOC at all

Well written and relaxed. If it could be made into a TV series, I can't imagine how happy I would be

Very beautiful, the characters are full of personality