Anime Crossover: Working Hard to Make an Ordinary Life Happy

To Chapter 23. This kind of feeling has only been seen in Mao's "Daily Life in Zongman" and the writer's book. With a touch of warmth and the smell of a flowing stream, the author has worked hard, and you can feel it between the lines. If you are looking forward to it, please click in and take a look. You will not be disappointed. This is an everyday masterpiece. May you and I both live the ordinary and happy lives we dream of.

I watched the end of the current chapter in one breath, and it's rare to express my thoughts. Bad news: It took a lot of sewing, and visually there may be more sewing. Good news: The sewing is good. At least when this review comes out, it can be said that it is top-notch among the books I have read. Of course, the above comments are purely subjective opinions, plus everyone has different views (for example: The God of Destruction, Ten Days End, and Lost City, which are known as masterpieces, are just like that to me [PS: There is no slander intended, purely subjective feelings, if you are still dissatisfied, you are right], after reading it, I came to my conclusion I haven't read it yet), so it may not be to your taste, but as mentioned above, it is recommended to read it, and it is not too late to abandon it when it doesn't suit your appetite. After all, they are all here to read the book. If it is good, then follow it, and if it is not good, then abandon it. The most important thing is that you can maintain a good mood while reading the book. Finally, I wish the readers a happy reading and the author good health and longevity.

Calm and melodious, like a light piece of music, it breaks into your world on a bright afternoon. You rub your eyes, yawn, and swallow them all together with the taste of sunshine. You feel satisfied, squint your eyes, and listen to the wind singing the story softly in your ears. Cool

The author's daily writing is very good, and the character design is also maintained well. The heroine Okja is also well written. But I personally feel that there are a few points that affect the perception. 1. Maybe it's because after watching the latest one, I feel that Okja accounts for too high a proportion of the plot. In some chapters, it's even higher than that of the male protagonist, which makes her take the lead. In the plots of the two monster girls at the end, the main focus is on the monster girl being attracted to Okja. 2. The author said that this is a novel with multiple female protagonists. There are too few descriptions of the bond between the other female protagonists and the male protagonist or similar descriptions. Most of them are just one incident and then disappear. The subsequent feeling is almost like a supporting role, and the sense of existence is not strong. 3. The more you look at the back, the more you feel that the protagonist is more of a tool. The heroine Yuzi is the core of the story. In subsequent stories, the heroine or other characters encounter problems that are difficult to solve or cannot be solved. The hero takes out a prop to solve it, and then it is nothing. However, overall it is a good novel, and it is relatively comfortable to read. It would be better if the male protagonist was given more space in the story and the bond with other characters was written more. Only personal opinion

It's a very good comic. It doesn't have many bad points. Maybe there are some far-fetched ways to promote the plot in the early stage. For example, when the protagonist just learns how to make magic props, he makes Yuzi fall to the ground and tear open the protagonist's pocket to expose it. But it only used it this time. Later, the protagonist is asked to mind his own business. Anyway, the protagonist is very free. The protagonist's setting is that he can understand 60% of the knowledge of a thing for the first time, which is only to a qualified level. However, since he picked up the dragon treasure from another world and unlocked the dragon language and magic technology tree, he feels that the knowledge ceiling of the earth has been reached. He knows everything and can build anything. The only point I can complain about is that the author's selection of materials is a bit niche. Even though I consider myself a minor two-dimensional person, I only know half of the characters in this novel. This is because the friends I met behind the protagonist are relatively new animated characters. I don't recognize any of the people in the shopping street. I hope the author can indicate the origin of the characters.

It's a very nice daily manga, with a well-controlled rhythm. It's very comfortable to read now. But let me ask a question, this is probably not a harem story. When I searched for daily manga, all I saw at a glance were harems. If this was a harem I would leave

It's not the first time I've written a long review, but there really aren't many long reviews that I enjoyed reading so much (Xiao Xiaodiangejia has read a lot of books on Tomato for 1000+ times, and I've read all kinds of books, so I have a certain amount of experience and the ability to judge good and bad works) Advantages: ①First of all, the author's entry point is very clever. You can clearly see the life arc planned by the author for each character. It is not a flat and direct love like a deus ex machina, but a convergence of time, energy and highlights. ② At present, there are less than 100 chapters of updates. I think the identity of the protagonist is quite clever and can be cut. If the relationship between multiple people is not good in the later stage, it can be changed to a single line with Tamako, but I still hope not to do this. ③It's really good that Mochizo, who can only achieve a passing score of 60, scored a HE score of 100! If you watch too much anime, you will start to fantasize about another if line. The anime is very integrated but obviously not complicated. It just serves as an entry similar to a small easter egg, setting the stage for later participation. ④The author's update speed is very fast. As a half-novel author, I clearly understand the value of two updates a day. Moreover, writing becomes more and more difficult in the later stages. Come on, author! There are still too few updates so far. I can't see more and later developments. I will keep following updates and hope that there won't be any poisonous points that I can't accept in the later stages.

When I first read it, I really thought I had found a nugget of gold. Comprehensive comics written in this style are very rare and very satisfying. This thought continued until the author's original characters appeared. Like most original characters, the author insisted on shooting arrows first and then drawing targets. This kind of development is no longer able to attract current readers. This kind of poison is very uncomfortable in comprehensive comics. If the length is too short, the characters will not be three-dimensional, and if the length is too long, the characters will take over the main role. Such characters have such shortcomings, but the author's writing style is still very good.

I rarely post reviews because I think the novels on Yangshizi's recommendation list are only readable, and some of them can't even be read. When I found this novel I really felt like I had unearthed shining gold from shit. Reading this book gave me the same warm feeling as listening to the rain outside the window and watching TV on a day off when I was a kid. The male protagonist is one of the rare truly gentle protagonists. This book is not as good as a book that should appear in foreign persimmons. I hope the author can insist on writing it down

A very everyday novel, very suitable for those who want to change their taste after reading too many refreshing novels. It is very relaxing. However, there are also shortcomings. On the one hand, there are too many characters and the stitched world view is too complicated, which will inevitably limit the author's ideas. On the other hand, the update speed is relatively slow. Compared with one page a day when I first started chasing it, now it is basically one page every one to two weeks. It is disturbing. I am very worried about whether the author will cut it off directly. After all, according to the current description speed, it is estimated that more than 2 million words will be needed for the protagonist to reach adulthood. I am really worried that the author can really write it by that time.