Near Heaven

The writing is really good, the writing is good and logical, the characters are vivid, and the plot is also very attractive. However, the male protagonist has not yet revealed his martial arts skills, which may not be so enjoyable, so this is a good book that not many people have read yet, but it is actually very well written.

It still feels like the problem of most novice writers: they have a lot of words but very little story. The core of the novel is always the story, the succession and transition, and the rest is the modification of the story. I hope the author will find the right focus and keep up the good work!

I have read more than a hundred chapters. The author's writing is flawless. The protagonist is a widower and has a very novel perspective. The description of the investigation and autopsy is very professional and the details are well handled. The heroine has the strength and brains to be real and not artificial. The only shortcoming is that the plot advances too slowly. I personally feel that there are too many foreshadowings before each key plot, which is specifically reflected in various foreshadowings, especially the background of the male protagonist. In some major events that are key to the plot, the male protagonist's behavior makes people think that he has a huge background, and there are also very unclear hints in the foreshadowing. To be honest, sometimes it makes me a little annoyed. But overall it is a very good work and should not be buried like this

I have read the latest chapter. Hey, why are the stories between the male and female protagonists always so sadomasochistic? When will they recognize each other? Is it still serialized? Why didn't I find this book when it was finished? It would be nice to have some sweet plots. I don't know what the plot is going to be like and how many words I need to write. The author has worked hard.

I read more than 200 chapters in one go. It was very exciting and I liked it very much. The foggy atmosphere created by the novel was very enjoyable to read. It is still in the preliminary stage, the world view is just unfolding, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is beginning to take shape.

I have read 6 chapters so far. The author's writing is good and the characters are very distinct. I can rank it in the first echelon among the authors I have read as a bookworm in the past ten years. I just don't know if I can stick to it until the end and continue reading. The novel is good, but it suffers from the same problem as Jianlai. The protagonist always relies on various bosses to solve problems and is himself weak. This makes it boring and lacks the desire to continue.

In fact, the writing style is very good, but if you write about solving a case, you can solve the case first, and then write about the plot layer by layer. It always feels like too many other plots are interspersed before the case is solved, which is a bit confusing, but in fact, the middle plot is also very interesting, which is a pity.

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Why does such a beautiful novel only have a score of 6.2? Did the author do something bad [note]

It's great and I love reading it. I'm looking forward to the bigger second book. It's as good as ever. Come on, please update.