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The subject matter is quite novel (I have been looking for this for a long time). I hope the author can focus more on the subject matter and central description, which is a bit too much for daily life. The writing is novice, there is no description, and the words are not powerful enough. The few lines that the supporting characters sometimes throw out are quite good, so please improve them more. Regarding character creation, the protagonist is not given much attention, and the supporting characters are more three-dimensional (even if they only appear for a while). More information about the protagonist needs to be described and explained. The plot is relatively bland, with few ups and downs, but still quite heartwarming. The pace is fast, the events end before they are in-depth, and the connection may be a bit abrupt. The plot is somewhat idealistic and beautiful, the protagonist's face is exposed, the information is given directly, without much hiding (of course, it may be that I am too conspiratorial), and the logic needs to be self-consistent and not conflicting. For example, the protagonist had posted a photo before, but was told that the photo was not explosive. The above are my personal thoughts and may be inappropriate. I hope the author will write better and better, come on! [Learned]

You can take a look at it if you want to kill your boredom. It was okay at first, but until Chapter 17, I suddenly felt like I was reading a running account, but I have been too busy reading recently. I continued to read it again today, and when I reached Chapter 68, a book friend mentioned the problem of too much description of the plot related to the heroine's friends, which gradually became a bit toxic to me. I don't know if the author is a newbie or still changing his writing style, so I'll give him 4 points to encourage him.

Progress: Chapter 136. I think it's okay. The author must be a newbie (not sure, just guessing) and his writing style is relatively new. It's still very good to read when I'm in a book shortage. As for what everyone said about the second female lead having too many plots, that's true, but maybe I watched the group portraits before. Personally, I think it's okay and within the acceptable range. The biggest shortcomings are that there are a lot of typos, missing punctuation marks (which affects reading somewhat) and sentence breaks (this is a bit uncomfortable for me) All in all, for me this book is still very good. Good luck to the author! Looking forward to your better works!

I like to read this kind of daily life. There are very few daily books like this. I really haven't seen many books. It would be better if there is content about going to college. The most important thing is that the work is a bit like a beast in the beginning, and then it turns to my own work. It is really dreamy. It is a turning point in my life. I must thank my former boss [laughing] It feels really cool if I take it in [laughing] The rating is so low, and there are no major problems with the writing. There are a lot of minor problems, but it's really good to watch [grieved] However, the plot is basically a plot within a plot. There are too many repetitions, and it's just a cliché [face covering]

The novel is quite good, but I haven't finished it yet. To be honest, this is the first time I want a non-CP novel with a male protagonist. It's not that the female protagonist is incompetent, it's mainly because her best friend is acting like shit, which makes me anxious [eating melon] [like]

Ah ha, I finally finished reading this novel. This novel is very good. I recommend everyone to read it. The author's writing is also very good, very atmospheric, and the extra chapters are very interesting.

You should get a pass to go to Hong Kong, right?

The subject matter is very good👍🏻I have read more than 90 chapters so far, so please give the author a boost.

The writing is more interesting and can be easily decompressed.

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