
Honkai: Star Rail: I Boarded the Train, and Pom-Pom Said I'm So Hot
星铁:踏上列车,帕姆说我好烧
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 691k Words
- Genre
- Sports
- Subgenre
- Gaming & Sports
- Updated
- 6mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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Are There Any Honkai: Star Rail Stories That Are Actually Readable?
I want books like *Honkai: Star Rail: I'm a Masked Fool, and Players Keep Going Crazy Over Me*.
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Anything from the MiHoYo games is welcome.
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Looking for stories like Her Northern Snow, His Swallow's Return. I want a really twisty plot, like A Different Boat and Joy of Life, with a large cast and both the main and supporting characters being smart. No mindless wish fulfillment! 🤗
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A Slightly Unhinged Honkai: Star Rail and Genshin Impact Story
I'd like to read something like *Honkai: Star Rail: Nanook Gets a Spinning Elbow in Chapter 51*. Anything suitably unhinged is fine.
Honkai: Star Rail!!!!!!
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Honkai: Star Rail 3.7 Is Out. Amphoreus Deserves a Happy Ending
Opharos 3.7 is out now. Are there any stories where Tie Mu is defeated once and for all and Xi Lian is prevented from returning to the past?
Genshin Impact and Honkai: Star Rail Fanfiction
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Looking for Honkai Impact 3Rd, Honkai: Star Rail, and Genshin Impact Q&A or Watch-Along Stories. Please!
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I think the plot of this book is really interesting. I looked at the negative reviews in the comment area, and they all said that the protagonist was weak in the early stage. I don't deny it, but I like the protagonist's character and style of doing things, and his strength is gradually improving. I personally also like the feeling of gradually getting stronger. Although the plot of Ompharos currently does not include the protagonist group, the author's characterization and daily life of the protagonist are very interesting, and I like it very much. This is purely a personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it, you are right whatever you say.
I can give it a 9.5 Rating, which is a very good book. I don't like books that forcefully add drama in the name of "whole work" or "fun person". Looking at it now, the humorous plot arranged in this book is quite appropriate. Seriousness and humor are both distinct and complementary, making the world depicted in the whole book more vivid and three-dimensional. Of course there are a lot of minor flaws, but this is a tomato. Generally speaking, this is a rare and "serious" novel. There is no work for the sake of work, no work for the sake of pleasure, and no torture for the sake of torture. Assuming that the author publishes the book on a paid platform and has more time to polish it, it should be able to sell well. But after writing so many words on this platform, the rating is unexpectedly low. I read it faster in the early stages, and the content in the early stages was indeed a bit bland, which may be the reason for the low rating. From the middle to the later stages, I can clearly feel the improvement. Now I'm about 2/3 of the way there. Come on!
The characters are well written. Regardless of the changes made to the original plot after the protagonist traveled through time, there are no big problems overall. There are only minor problems, such as the lack of Xing's plot. Of course, this is not a problem. After all, it is a fan work. Compared with other fan works, there are no extremely OOC or unreasonable plots. There are not too many ups and downs in the plot. It is a very smooth development, which is very good.
I think this book is quite good and the setting is quite interesting. In terms of plot, it doesn't completely follow the main line, which is better than some people have always followed. The main reason is that Starry Sky gives too much in reality, which is a bit nonsense. Some people say that the protagonist is too cowardly. This is because you have never seen a more cowardly character. I have been reading novels since 19 years old, and I have read everything I see now. Compared to those poisonous ones, this is considered good. And besides, what other good books do you want, Tomato? I really want to see someone with brains go to the starting point
Hao Chi😋, ten or even nine points of deliciousness, the author will update quickly. Ounegai, if there is no update, Vadasi will be broken [cry][cry][cry][cry]
After reading so many fan stories, I learned one thing: the first thing an ordinary protagonist does when he travels to Bengtie is the first thing he needs to do when his life is not in danger. That is to call the mythical star god and step into the mysterious destiny. If there is no myth to cover it up, otherwise the secret of this world traveler will not be kept at all. Aha, he can see it in an instant, and the other star gods can look at the protagonist's memory at will.
I think it's pretty good. I caught up to date all at once. I think the overall score should be 8.0 Or above even if it's not 9.0. I'm a little confused. Anyway, I think it's pretty good-looking. The protagonist is weak in the early stage but it's okay. I like Xiao Sanyue, but Xiao Sanyue doesn't know. I talked to Xia Die in Ompharos. The explanation is a kind of self-evasion similar to self-destruction. I think it's okay. You can watch it. If you don't like it, skip the next link and watch it. It won't be a big problem.
Has the author rested enough? Get up and continue writing.
It's pretty good. It makes me feel that this is what real ordinary people look like when they enter the game world.
I think this book is pretty good, because I just enjoy reading novels. As long as it's not too brainless, I can accept it. I have also read everyone's comments. How should I put it? I can only say that my thoughts and opinions are different. I don't think there are many bad things. I have been reading this book, and I just feel that the protagonist's improvement in strength is quite reasonable. After all, you shouldn't take novels too seriously. This is purely a personal opinion, and not the comments before these, please don't comment.