【Just launched: transmigration + talents + revenge at every slight + masculine man with feminine beauty + adored by everyone + clingy】
Mo Mo, a pure-hearted male college student, transmigrates to a high-martial world overrun by demons with the strength of a hundred-ton truck.
After being harassed by his manager and fired from the night shift, Nan Niang steps into a deserted alley, and everything changes...
He awakens a strange talent called 【Demon Seed】, which feeds on fear!
As long as he makes someone afraid, he earns Fear Points.
Rare items, breakthroughs, skill enhancements?
None of that is a problem!
And on top of that, he's so delicate and adorable that it's practically against the rules.
Beautiful older sisters everywhere dote on him and look after him.
Though he's officially a proper Demon Suppression Envoy in the Dragon Kingdom's Sixth Demon Suppression Division,
his talent is sinister, his aura feels demonic, and his fighting style is downright bizarre and horrifying.
He also possesses an utterly overpowered authority that suppresses demons, and levels up at an absurd pace.
When he becomes the Dragon Kingdom's seventh Demon-Sealing General, the Great Demon Immortal, both humans and demons are left stunned.
“Listen, let me explain. That extra bone between his legs grew there naturally. It's part of his constitution, and has nothing to do with me, I swear!”
“How does losing dozens of tons of blood and still not dying prove I'm not human? I'm young and healthy. Don't talk nonsense if you don't understand.”
“I'll protect you. All you have to do is offer up your fear.”
Humanity has gained a “good” person, while the demons have gained a troublemaking demon...
Rocket-fast advancement.
A talent that grants an authority that heavily suppresses demons.
A bizarre, sinister, and terrifying fighting style.
Mo Mo becomes a refreshing outlier in the Dragon Kingdom's Sixth Demon Suppression Division.
Sure, other girls can easily push him down, but it's no big deal!
Faced with the accusations, Mo Mo's stunning face is full of innocence.
“I told you, my talent is just a little weird. I'm really not a demon!”
He was soft-hearted to the officials but did not kill them. Then he was ignored by the officials and was forced to sign the Overlord Treaty to join.
There are also classic super talents pretending to be weak.
My own book must be given a five-star rating! !
(♡>𖥦<)/♥
Dear handsome men and beauties, since you passed by and saw this review of this book, you are destined to click in and take a look ~
Thousands of people have different preferences.
What doesn't suit someone else's taste may not suit your taste.
It is inevitable to judge the quality of a book based on other people's evaluations, which is not as true as seeing it yourself.
The young author writes the story carefully and does not rush through the plot of each chapter.
Give young authors a chance to help others and cultivate themselves.
It's all so delicious! ♡(.◜ω◝.)♡
Also, Happy New Year everyone! ! !つ♡⊂
I also read it all night long, and I thought it was okay. The protagonist's gradual change from the beginning of his disgust towards the official power of the Demon Suppressor to the present is quite well written. It feels like the foreshadowing is a bit too extensive, I think it could be written more concisely and clearly.
Now that I see it, I still feel like it's not too poisonous. However, I feel that when writing fighting scenes or other plots, I feel that it is a bit over-descriptive (I don't know how to say this because I am stupid). I sometimes want to skip this plot description (see other people who do the same). I think it can be optimized.
Mo Mo Miao is still too cute, hehe, Xiao Nan Niang is the result of me being the king of cats in the North Dynasty. I want a [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] I hope the author will work hard.
Oh, and the author thinks that the introduction of the book can be changed to make it easier to write. Why? Well, the main function of the book introduction is to let readers know what you are writing about. It is not bad if you write it this way, but it is recommended to separate it. It's also good to write a synopsis of your book at the front and add a little plot at the end to attract readers.
Speaking of which, this is actually much better than those AI/Tangren/slobber novels. In the era of gold mining in tomato stones, there are not many novels like this.
The writing of the system is quite good, it is not too boring, and it is very helpful. It is not like the system in some novels that chats with the protagonist every day (we need Dayu to control the floods)
I feel like what I said is not very comprehensive. I hope everyone can add to it. After all, I won't write much seriously, so I still need to encourage you.
[My personal thoughts are not to criticize cats, the cat king will cry [almost crying]]
But author, I took a look at your data, and I think it's normal for the book to be in the quiet period after its debut or in the book beta stage.
The first thing to check for traffic is whether there are contracts and stable updates. Then the first show data, the completion rate of 100,000 words and the follow-up rate are not qualified. If it is less than 10%, I think the official will not push it. What's more important is the title, cover and introduction! ! After all, if these don't work, no one will watch it. I think you need to change your introduction to let readers know what you are writing about. The more literary, slow and foreshadowing you write, the fewer people will get it. To put it bluntly, when I first saw the introduction, I actually didn't want to read it. If it wasn't for the book shortage, I would have missed such a good book [Thoughts]
Try to write 200,000 words, prepare for the book test, change a few sets of writing and covers, and update 4,000+ words per day during the book test. The platform should be re-streamed on a small scale, right? You pay close attention to the reading rate, update rate, and bookshelf ratio, and you fail to make adjustments. I think there is no need to cut the book [thinking] (My personal opinion is for reference only, you can ask Tomato Writer's customer service)
It's a good book. It's a good book, but there are a few chapters. There aren't any major flaws or problems. There aren't too many chapters at the moment, but the content seems to be unfinished. I'll look at it later and make more comments.
Finished it, it's worth watching. At least it's not too homogeneous. Those about Shennong and the like didn't seem to be a good read, or they were skipped. Anyway, it's okay to watch them normally. Come on, author, and update quickly.
The protagonist is a god whose abilities were suddenly discovered by the official. The official also joined in for no reason. He thought he was behind the scenes and felt like a puppet.
It's okay. You can read it when you're short of books.
Very good, I hope there won't be a female protagonist [Like][Like][Like]
The protagonist is male and female! Very good! Heartthrob! Best!
Come on, come on, no knives
Oh my gosh, I like this setting so much. Although I have only read Chapter 13, I have already decided to follow you. Don't let me down, Haji-chan [shy][shy][shy][shy]
He was soft-hearted to the officials but did not kill them. Then he was ignored by the officials and was forced to sign the Overlord Treaty to join. There are also classic super talents pretending to be weak.
My own book must be given a five-star rating! ! (♡>𖥦<)/♥ Dear handsome men and beauties, since you passed by and saw this review of this book, you are destined to click in and take a look ~ Thousands of people have different preferences. What doesn't suit someone else's taste may not suit your taste. It is inevitable to judge the quality of a book based on other people's evaluations, which is not as true as seeing it yourself. The young author writes the story carefully and does not rush through the plot of each chapter. Give young authors a chance to help others and cultivate themselves. It's all so delicious! ♡(.◜ω◝.)♡ Also, Happy New Year everyone! ! !つ♡⊂
I also read it all night long, and I thought it was okay. The protagonist's gradual change from the beginning of his disgust towards the official power of the Demon Suppressor to the present is quite well written. It feels like the foreshadowing is a bit too extensive, I think it could be written more concisely and clearly. Now that I see it, I still feel like it's not too poisonous. However, I feel that when writing fighting scenes or other plots, I feel that it is a bit over-descriptive (I don't know how to say this because I am stupid). I sometimes want to skip this plot description (see other people who do the same). I think it can be optimized. Mo Mo Miao is still too cute, hehe, Xiao Nan Niang is the result of me being the king of cats in the North Dynasty. I want a [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] I hope the author will work hard. Oh, and the author thinks that the introduction of the book can be changed to make it easier to write. Why? Well, the main function of the book introduction is to let readers know what you are writing about. It is not bad if you write it this way, but it is recommended to separate it. It's also good to write a synopsis of your book at the front and add a little plot at the end to attract readers. Speaking of which, this is actually much better than those AI/Tangren/slobber novels. In the era of gold mining in tomato stones, there are not many novels like this. The writing of the system is quite good, it is not too boring, and it is very helpful. It is not like the system in some novels that chats with the protagonist every day (we need Dayu to control the floods) I feel like what I said is not very comprehensive. I hope everyone can add to it. After all, I won't write much seriously, so I still need to encourage you. [My personal thoughts are not to criticize cats, the cat king will cry [almost crying]] But author, I took a look at your data, and I think it's normal for the book to be in the quiet period after its debut or in the book beta stage. The first thing to check for traffic is whether there are contracts and stable updates. Then the first show data, the completion rate of 100,000 words and the follow-up rate are not qualified. If it is less than 10%, I think the official will not push it. What's more important is the title, cover and introduction! ! After all, if these don't work, no one will watch it. I think you need to change your introduction to let readers know what you are writing about. The more literary, slow and foreshadowing you write, the fewer people will get it. To put it bluntly, when I first saw the introduction, I actually didn't want to read it. If it wasn't for the book shortage, I would have missed such a good book [Thoughts] Try to write 200,000 words, prepare for the book test, change a few sets of writing and covers, and update 4,000+ words per day during the book test. The platform should be re-streamed on a small scale, right? You pay close attention to the reading rate, update rate, and bookshelf ratio, and you fail to make adjustments. I think there is no need to cut the book [thinking] (My personal opinion is for reference only, you can ask Tomato Writer's customer service)
It's a good book. It's a good book, but there are a few chapters. There aren't any major flaws or problems. There aren't too many chapters at the moment, but the content seems to be unfinished. I'll look at it later and make more comments. Finished it, it's worth watching. At least it's not too homogeneous. Those about Shennong and the like didn't seem to be a good read, or they were skipped. Anyway, it's okay to watch them normally. Come on, author, and update quickly.
The protagonist is a god whose abilities were suddenly discovered by the official. The official also joined in for no reason. He thought he was behind the scenes and felt like a puppet.
It's okay. You can read it when you're short of books.
Very good, I hope there won't be a female protagonist [Like][Like][Like]
The protagonist is male and female! Very good! Heartthrob! Best!
Come on, come on, no knives
Oh my gosh, I like this setting so much. Although I have only read Chapter 13, I have already decided to follow you. Don't let me down, Haji-chan [shy][shy][shy][shy]