Honkai: Star Rail: The Jade Balance of the Xianzhou Luofu
崩铁：罗浮仙舟的玉衡星
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- 935k Words
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- Honkai: Star Rail: The Jade Abacus General of the Xianzhou Luofu星铁：罗浮仙舟的玉衡将军Alternate title on Fanqie
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This book is truly excellent, especially the part depicting Lu Bu's battle with Sun Wukong over Diao Chan. They fought for hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai was incredibly strong. If it weren't for Darius's outer-range attack and Noxus Guillotine, that M4 6x scope spray would have been fatal.
I personally think it's pretty good, but how should I put it, it keeps making me unconsciously compare it to Keqing from the neighboring 🐱 series 😂 You two are the only characters I've really impressed with in Honkai Impact 3rd and Honkai Impact 3rd Keqing series, you're really great. It's a pity there aren't enough updates 😏
This isn't the Keqing from Teyvat; it's similar to a reincarnation story, but essentially a parallel universe Keqing. Other characters rarely go out of character (OOC). The protagonist isn't entirely the same as the Keqing from Teyvat, as their environments, choices, and personalities differ.
So far, it's going well; the logic is clear and the plot is reasonably arranged. The romance is also okay, with a reasonable amount of close interaction, not too ambiguous. However, I personally hope it doesn't go too far later and turn into a lesbian relationship; the current single status is quite good. I personally prefer pure friendship between girls, their playful daily lives. If it really turns into a lesbian relationship, then forget it.
The plot is quite interesting, and it's a book I searched for a long time to find; it's definitely high-quality. Although some settings are inconsistent with the game, it's understandable, considering the limited amount of information available about the Xianzhou storyline. 🤦 Nine keys, a few typos, please forgive me.
I finished it in one go, it was quite good. I initially clicked in to see what kind of life a character like Keqing would have in the Immortal Ship, but how far Keqing would develop wasn't something I initially thought about. At first, my attention was actually focused on her daily work life.
Not bad, not bad. I just hope the later plot doesn't involve the protagonist fighting the boss and then disappearing and being picked up by a train. I'm getting a bit tired of similar scenarios. Even being personally ordered by Lan is more interesting (personal opinion). Overall, the book is quite good. For readers who aren't nitpicking, there aren't any major flaws, making it worth reading. 💕
It's unusual that it didn't follow the main storyline, but the control over Keqing was also very good.
The book is quite nice, but the cover looks a bit familiar 😏
This is one of the few fanfics featuring Keqing that focuses on romance; most others are just about love, which is exhausting to read. Although the protagonist is Keqing, it's not out of character at all. I feel like if Keqing were in the Celestial Empire, she would be like this...