Honkai: Star Rail: The Jade Balance of the Xianzhou Luofu

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on! . ~Meow

Personally, I feel pretty good, but how can I put it, I always compare myself unconsciously with the Xianzhou Keqing next door🐱 [Laughing and crying] You two were the only ones who impressed me deeply in writing about Beng Tie Ke Qing, which is really good. It's a pity that there are few updates [laughter]

It's not the Ke Qing of Teyvat, it's similar to a fetal transmutation, but it can basically be regarded as the Ke Qing of the parallel world, and there are very few other OOCs. The protagonist and Keqing in Teyvat are not exactly the same. After all, the environments are different, the choices are different, and the people are different. But the protagonist doesn't have any big hangups. He basically comes through it step by step. It feels like it comes naturally. The writing is also good. It's not a holster, it's not a system, it's not a hanging silk performance, it's not 5678 vests. Although there are no particularly passionate scenes, the author writes many scenes very smoothly (the protagonist also goes to the battlefield and commands the Cloud Cavalry, and is even the key factor in the victory of the Immortal Boat). There are no invincible scenes, nor does it highlight any particularly firm beliefs (but this is also one of the advantages. After all, this kind of scene seems too abrupt in the style of this book, and it is easy to collapse if it is not handled well) All in all, the biggest advantage of this book is that it is smooth and not OOC. To be honest, I was so touched that I could find such smooth fan fiction on Tomato. I hope it can be maintained.

So far it looks okay, the logic is clear and the plot arrangement is reasonable. The emotional line is okay, and the proportion of stickers is also good. It's not too ambiguous, but I personally hope that it won't be too linear in the future and become a hundred. At present, this kind of change is quite good. Personally, I prefer the simple friendship between girls and the daily life of having fun. If they really become gay, forget it.

The plot is quite interesting, and it took me a long time to get to the level of this book. It's completely fine. Although some settings are very inconsistent with the game, it's understandable. After all, there isn't much plot in Xianzhou [face covering] Nine keys, some typos, sorry

It's quite good to read it in one go. I clicked in at the beginning because I wanted to see what kind of life a character like Ke Qing would have in Xianzhou. As for how far Ke Qing would develop, I didn't think about it at the beginning. At first, my focus was actually on my daily workplace life. The daily part at the beginning was really okay, and most of it was about the life of Keqing, who had integrated into Xianzhou, which was interesting. Very few, minor issues are acceptable. It's just that the section about the War of Fertility that is about to jump into feels a bit too long, and the whole section is a little out of touch with daily life (after all, you really can't take any time off from fighting). The plot is somewhat thoughtful, and it gives Keqing an interesting position, but it's been written for too long, and it's still a bit tiring to watch. However, I have already finished the chapter of War of Fertility, and I just happened to watch the return to the Fairy Boat after the battle. The overall impression is not bad. I actually look forward to more daily interactions in the future, but writing daily routines is really laborious. Just think it's for the sake of readers and five stars, please do more daily life, the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

Not bad, not bad. I just hope that the subsequent plot doesn't really involve the main character fighting the boss and then disappearing and being picked up by a train. After all, it's really a similar situation and I'm a bit tired of seeing it. Being kissed and ordered by Lan is better than this (personal opinion). Overall, the book is quite good. For readers who don't look for faults, there are basically no obvious poisonous points worth reading [Sentiment]

The book is quite nice, but the cover is a bit familiar [laughs crookedly]

It's rare that he didn't follow the main plot, and his control over Keqing was also very good.

Xing Tie Fan is a rare fan, the others are almost all about romance, and it's exhausting to watch. Although the protagonist is Ke Qing, it's not OOC at all. I feel like Ke Qing would be like this if she was in Xianzhou.