
Honkai: Star Rail: The Jade Balance of the Xianzhou Luofu
崩铁:罗浮仙舟的玉衡星
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- 935k Words
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- 12d ago
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Explore more →I've Read Every Gender-Bender Novel on Tomato, So Don't Tell Me There's One I Haven't Read
Bring me something with transformation, a little girl protagonist, and no System.
Any Honkai: Star Rail Stories With Girls Getting Close and Cuddly?
Any Good Honkai: Star Rail or Honkai Stories? I'm Starving for More~
Are There Any Honkai: Star Rail Stories That Are Actually Readable?
I want books like *Honkai: Star Rail: I'm a Masked Fool, and Players Keep Going Crazy Over Me*.
The Protagonist in Honkai: Star Rail Must Be Female
Looking for books similar to Honkai: Star Rail: So What If I Like Making Money? The protagonist has to be an Aeon, too.
Please, I'm Begging for a High-Quality Transformation Story....
Looking for books like Transformation: She Wants to Become Him Again at the Transcendent Academy. Gender-bender romance with a bit of angst.
Looking for Good Gender-Swap Stories
Looking for books like Good Thing I Almost Turned into a Catgirl. Any good gender-bender stories rated above 9? Especially ones with a white-haired little girl. Please, and preferably something long. Anyone?
I’m So Done With Playing a Loser. Give Me Something Decent
High EQ: Honkai: Star Rail Has No Masterpieces Left. Low EQ: Recommend Some Good Honkai: Star Rail Fics
Looking for books like *Honkai: Star Rail: Is This Spirit Cat an Emanator of Abundance?*
Looking for a Masterpiece About Honkai: Star Rail, Not a Joke of a Story
I'm looking for something like Uncovering the Blanket of Memory, Carrying Away Ripples of the Past. I want Honkai: Star Rail stories, but no simulators or watch-along stories. Single protagonist, multiple protagonists, or no protagonist preference, all are fine.
Honkai: Star Rail Fanfiction!!!
Looking for books similar to *Honkai: Star Rail: Me, the Number One Fan Favorite Across the Galaxy*. I’m looking for Honkai: Star Rail fanfiction.
Please Recommend Some Honkai: Star Rail Fics With Two Female Leads! I'm Starving Here
As the title says, preferably with an original female lead who ends up with Feixiao, Jingliu, or Acheron. Don't recommend male-lead stories! Genderbent male characters are out too! I used to be curious about them, but after getting fed too many awful stories, I really don't like seeing men paired with my favorite character.
Genshin Impact or Honkai: Star Rail Stories with Two Female Leads or No CP, Female Leads Only
I don't need anything else, ✧⁺⸜(●˙▾˙●)⸝⁺✧, ヾ( ̄▽ ̄) Good people may live a safe life
Seeking Honkai: Star Rail Stories!
Are there any Honkai: Star Rail novels? Getting stabbed in the back was rough, but the story is still really good, so I want to read some! *٩(๑´∀`๑)ง*
Looking for High-Quality Honkai: Star Rail Fanfiction!!!
[Honkai: Star Rail] [Mi] Want to Read a Truly Interesting Story?
Looking for something like Honkai: Star Rail: From the Start, I Finished the Space Station in Three Minutes. You, come here. Yes, you. Have you had enough of the same old tired formulas and started looking for a truly fresh novel? Well, you've found one. Go ahead and read it.
Sigh, I'm Really Baffled. Give Me Something That Truly Follows Its Path of Destiny
Where are all these miracle-working pharmacists coming from? Most novels about Abundance have characters inexplicably receiving blessings, then doing nothing to uphold Abundance. Come on, do you really think you can get something for nothing? Without a guiding belief, you wouldn't even get to meet the Pharmacist, let alone make a request.
Any Good Honkai: Star Rail Fanfiction? I'm Out of Books to Read. Please Recommend Some.
Looking for books similar to Original Honkai: Star Rail: I Became a Stellaron Entity, and My Online Handle Is Zuowang Dao.
Any Honkai: Star Rail Fanfiction with a Female Protagonist? No Gender-Swapped Men
Looking for books similar to Honkai: Star Rail: Becoming a Star God from the Start.
Any High-Quality MiHoYo Fanfiction?
Looking for books similar to *Zenless Zone Zero: Reborn Charming Rabbit*. Please recommend high-quality ones.
Give Me Some Highly Rated Genshin Impact Fan Creations, I'm Starving
Anything from the MiHoYo games is welcome.
Any High-Quality Honkai: Star Rail Fanfiction?
Looking for stories like *Honkai: Star Rail: There's No Way I'm a Scumbag, I'm Her White Moonlight!*. The protagonist should be normal, not hypocritical or repulsive. The characters and worldbuilding shouldn't have any major issues, and the Trailblazer shouldn't be so bizarre as to be incomprehensible or only care about seeing pretty women...
Amphoreus Has Wrapped Up for Now, but Something Still Feels Missing. Give Me Some Honkai: Star Rail
Looking for content similar to *Honkai: Star Rail: In Amphoreus, I Save the World with Mobile Games*. I'm mainly looking for books about Amphoreus. I really want to save them, but in the face of the waves of destruction, we can't even save a single person.
There Are No Good Honkai: Star Rail Books Anymore
Are there any books about Amphoreus?
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This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are spot on! . ~Meow
Personally, I feel pretty good, but how can I put it, I always compare myself unconsciously with the Xianzhou Keqing next door🐱 [Laughing and crying] You two were the only ones who impressed me deeply in writing about Beng Tie Ke Qing, which is really good. It's a pity that there are few updates [laughter]
It's not the Ke Qing of Teyvat, it's similar to a fetal transmutation, but it can basically be regarded as the Ke Qing of the parallel world, and there are very few other OOCs. The protagonist and Keqing in Teyvat are not exactly the same. After all, the environments are different, the choices are different, and the people are different. But the protagonist doesn't have any big hangups. He basically comes through it step by step. It feels like it comes naturally. The writing is also good. It's not a holster, it's not a system, it's not a hanging silk performance, it's not 5678 vests. Although there are no particularly passionate scenes, the author writes many scenes very smoothly (the protagonist also goes to the battlefield and commands the Cloud Cavalry, and is even the key factor in the victory of the Immortal Boat). There are no invincible scenes, nor does it highlight any particularly firm beliefs (but this is also one of the advantages. After all, this kind of scene seems too abrupt in the style of this book, and it is easy to collapse if it is not handled well) All in all, the biggest advantage of this book is that it is smooth and not OOC. To be honest, I was so touched that I could find such smooth fan fiction on Tomato. I hope it can be maintained.
So far it looks okay, the logic is clear and the plot arrangement is reasonable. The emotional line is okay, and the proportion of stickers is also good. It's not too ambiguous, but I personally hope that it won't be too linear in the future and become a hundred. At present, this kind of change is quite good. Personally, I prefer the simple friendship between girls and the daily life of having fun. If they really become gay, forget it.
The plot is quite interesting, and it took me a long time to get to the level of this book. It's completely fine. Although some settings are very inconsistent with the game, it's understandable. After all, there isn't much plot in Xianzhou [face covering] Nine keys, some typos, sorry
It's quite good to read it in one go. I clicked in at the beginning because I wanted to see what kind of life a character like Ke Qing would have in Xianzhou. As for how far Ke Qing would develop, I didn't think about it at the beginning. At first, my focus was actually on my daily workplace life. The daily part at the beginning was really okay, and most of it was about the life of Keqing, who had integrated into Xianzhou, which was interesting. Very few, minor issues are acceptable. It's just that the section about the War of Fertility that is about to jump into feels a bit too long, and the whole section is a little out of touch with daily life (after all, you really can't take any time off from fighting). The plot is somewhat thoughtful, and it gives Keqing an interesting position, but it's been written for too long, and it's still a bit tiring to watch. However, I have already finished the chapter of War of Fertility, and I just happened to watch the return to the Fairy Boat after the battle. The overall impression is not bad. I actually look forward to more daily interactions in the future, but writing daily routines is really laborious. Just think it's for the sake of readers and five stars, please do more daily life, the author [sending heartfelt wishes]
Not bad, not bad. I just hope that the subsequent plot doesn't really involve the main character fighting the boss and then disappearing and being picked up by a train. After all, it's really a similar situation and I'm a bit tired of seeing it. Being kissed and ordered by Lan is better than this (personal opinion). Overall, the book is quite good. For readers who don't look for faults, there are basically no obvious poisonous points worth reading [Sentiment]
The book is quite nice, but the cover is a bit familiar [laughs crookedly]
It's rare that he didn't follow the main plot, and his control over Keqing was also very good.
Xing Tie Fan is a rare fan, the others are almost all about romance, and it's exhausting to watch. Although the protagonist is Ke Qing, it's not OOC at all. I feel like Ke Qing would be like this if she was in Xianzhou.