A Crumbling Temple, No Immortals!

What can I say? Overall, it is a good book. It is a rare good book in Tomato and is worth reading. But it seems that some of the plots in the middle are a bit unreasonable (but it is more likely that I read too quickly and some plots were not connected. In fact, the author's writing is reasonable. If this is the case, I apologize): For example, the scene where the holy son of Xuanshui Taoist Temple uses the family's artifact to pretend to be the new temple master is really not good to the viewer. Of course, having the protagonist try to save the heroine in a crisis and pretend to be a bitch is a very common writing routine, but this section is very strange. The holy son stole the artifact, and the family must find out at the last moment, which is very strange; and then the entire sect listens to the fake new concept leader and doesn't care about her. It is also very strange whether the order is reasonable, because it is known that the saint is the Taoist companion of the protagonist, and now the protagonist is one of the highest-ranking young people in the world. It is really strange that Xuanshui Taoist Temple forces the saint to marry the saint and the vast majority of the elders obey this order. But the overall flaws really outweigh the flaws and it's worth reading.

Thank you all for your support in reading, and please forgive me if the writing is not good. This is my second attempt at writing a fairy tale. I hope everyone will like the characters and stories I write. If you want to make a guest appearance, you can leave a message in the backstage comment area and arrange it one by one.

The traditional fairy tale is well written. Not all the people around the protagonist are good people. Everyone in the micro-group portrait has a very distinctive personality. It's just that the female protagonist can't keep up with the development of the male protagonist. I hope that the female protagonist can have some roles in the future.

Practicing Qi to kill the Nascent Soul, super beautiful, highly recommended

The progress of the plot is not intense, but it makes people excited. Growth is achieved step by step, and so is reading books. Life has levels, so so are books. So this book is the pinnacle of books I read now. It's a pity, it's a shame, I also want to write what's in my heart, but I don't have the talent. I didn't learn Chinese well in elementary school, I'm not a good singer, and I don't know poetry. In short, I have a lot of intentions, but I can't express them. I can only give praise to the works in my heart.

Very good, the ideas are clear, the writing is not sluggish, and the setting is unique and innovative. The characters are not very cliched either. Come on✊

The plot of the story has ups and downs, and the logic is quite reasonable.

So far, the writing is pretty good. The plot unfolds slowly and the story is told eloquently. It gives people a very comfortable feeling when reading it. It is my favorite style, but it is a bit unreadable! The author needs to work hard and don't be lazy.

It's twice as refreshing, so addictive and exciting It's a bit interesting. Oh, it's good. Wang Yang's unbridled romanticism Broad, majestic, bold and elegant [like]

Maybe it wasn't amazing enough at first, but the more I read, the better. I've been reading Tomato novels for 5 years, and I've been short of them for almost two years. This is one of the best novels I have read in 5 years. The rating is only 7.2. I hope more people will give it higher ratings so that the essence can continue. I also hope the author can work hard! Continue to write the infinite excitement in the book