[Ensemble cast] [Chaotic] [Mid-level magic, high-level martial arts] [No System] [Multiple heroines] [A sweet little story with no angst. Just kidding, there will be tears and sweetness] [Not a fast-paced power fantasy] [Lots of worldbuilding, revealed gradually]
If a lifetime were compared to a single day, the darkest night would be an infant's ignorant innocence; dawn would be a young person's bold ambition; the noonday sun would be the fierce passion of one's prime; the evening glow would be the wisdom and integrity of old age; and finally, the still moon would be like an old person nearing the coffin, quiet and at peace.
Such is the span of life for all living beings.
But the life of the Deathbird is like endless polar daylight or an eternal polar night, existing alongside the alternation of sun and moon, yet forever out of place.
A life that bears witness: the Deathbird.
A life that is eternal: the Deathbird.
A life that proclaims death: the Deathbird!
In this world, heroes rise from every direction. In the central lands, the Rain Emperor slays gods and establishes a nation, declaring: “Rain gathers into pools, pools flow together into rivers, and rivers carry boats. Thus, this land is called the Heavenly Marsh, the Land of Heaven.” In the far north, the Machine God overwhelms the gods with sheer force, divides their bodies with endless weapons, declares himself extraordinary, and proclaims himself the god above all gods. The Curtain Trade Guild follows the path of wealth, reaps the riches of forty-six nations, and crushes the heroes of every realm with its might, allowing no one to rise beyond its borders...
There is no end to such tales.
Only the Deathbird sees it all. Its wings cover the sky screen, its cry shatters the heavens, and its form stretches from ancient times into the present.
Look, everyone, look! The Deathbird first spreads its wings in a humble place, then rises aloft with the flames.
Look on, everyone, and follow the passing years. The world may forget, but the Deathbird never will.
I think this book has a platinum status, I can't sleep at night, so I'll update it soon!
I highly recommend reading this book! Elements: "The Godfather" + Western/Eastern fantasy (combat power system, partial settings) + fictional world (similar to modern Western society)
It can be seen that this book is deeply influenced by "The Godfather", and some plots also have its shadow (or is it a replica?). The plot currently revolves around the three states of fog, rain and snow named after "water". The combat power structure combines the characteristics of Eastern and Western fantasy (the Eastern one is more urban with supernatural powers) The author's worldview setting has his own ingenuity, which can be seen to be different from the formulaic application of other assembly line works. I particularly like it🥰, not to mention that the settings of the three states of fog, rain and snow are "a bit" "referenced to the three big G's of reality" hahaha.
In terms of plot, it is currently a fusion of "The Godfather" + what the author wants to write. It is a bit cool (the protagonist's golden finger is very straightforward, like the old man with the ring), but standing on the shoulders of giants, it is still exciting enough. The author's writing style is good and not a novice. It can be said that he stands out in Tomato, a software where anyone can write novels. Unfortunately, no one reads it and there is no traffic. Why? Damn foreign persimmon! There is also Chekhov's Gun-style foreshadowing recycling, and the plot design is simple, but it is a pity that because it is currently a shell of The Godfather, it has not yet shown the author's ingenuity in plot design. I am still looking forward to what the author's plot will be after finishing The Godfather. After all, the shell of The Godfather is just a tool to expand the world view for readers, and the big one is at the back! The big one is coming!
I hope that the subsequent author can write more of his own stuff (there are some problems with the expression, it should be said that it is more of a wild imagination of this fictional world), because now it can be seen that many designs are more or less obvious references to something, but it is also like the Cthulhu novels "because it is mixed with reality, so it gives people a sense of reality." It is very good, very to my taste, although the plot feels bland due to familiarity because of reading "The Godfather 1".
Let's talk about the setting of the protagonist. It is easy to fall into the cliché setting. If you upgrade too quickly, you will fall into the routine of mindless and cool writing. At the same time, it is inconsistent with the tone of the current plot. At the same time, if you upgrade too fast, you will also sacrifice the flavor of shaping the world view. But at present, the tendency to upgrade quickly is obvious?
I don't know what to write anymore. As mentioned before, the shell of "The Godfather" and the steady narrative rhythm make it nothing worth picking at the moment. Except for some key points that don't make sense, my rating dropped, but I still think it's worth reading this book. (Don't read the content in brackets if you don't want to be spoiled) (For example: The son of the deputy city lord had no reason to leave the city. He clearly had his own power in the city but was killed when he went out of the city. Although it can be explained that he would not reveal his half-vampire identity, this is far-fetched. It can be solved by going to the sphere of influence of the city lord and the mafia. This is obviously to create a scene for the protagonist to come into contact with the new police officer. It is too deliberate)
Finally, thank you to the author, I hope your work will get better and better! Don't stop updating! It can be seen that it is a novel written out of interest (¿) I hope I can stick to it!
Well, it's a good book. From the current point of view, the world view is good. I like the author's characterization and some plot connections. I am still a little confused about the protagonist's "death". It is obviously a death announcement. Why is there an opportunity for survival after the established fact "beside others' predetermined ending" , outline a possible life path for yourself." This sentence clearly made me unable to understand clearly. I initially thought that Jacob's "Gale Wind" was the second magical power left to the protagonist by the author. I felt that Jacob's death should be unrestrained and heroic and memorable, but later on I felt that the author could not bear to part with this character. The following colleges are obviously paving the way for the future worldview and systematic learning. Then there is the incomplete combat power system, which gives me a strange feeling anyway, and the protagonist improves very quickly, with a total of nine prices. I am very curious about how to write it later. Although it seems that the author may not write anymore, I will finish it and take on the next one. I can only continue to complain about Tomato. Talented newcomers simply cannot get ahead in their novels. This is already the most comfortable novel I have read recently.
The plot progresses very naturally, and the characters are more comfortable to read than some of the sacred books on the rankings. However, it may also be a matter of personal taste. It is very suitable for Japanese fantasy and dragon-flavored baby physiques. There are basically no too many bad points, and the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine is very cute (I hope it is a single heroine)
Finally, I hope the author understands what he is writing. The number of words is too small and it is not enough to read. I am also afraid that after updating, I will suddenly be lost in everyone. It is not good to read.
The world view is grand, the setting is awesome, the characters are well described, and the writing is also good. It can be regarded as a masterpiece in Tomato. If you don't believe it, read other book reviews, they are all five-star reviews.
I have now finished reading the first chapter, which is where I catch up on the novel. I really think this novel is well written, and the characters in it have very distinct personalities, which is in line with my expectations for the subject of group portraits. The author is also very good at making things happen, and I like it very much. I'm looking forward to the next academy chapter, and this novel must not be unfinished. Ah Kou Ya [cry] [cry] [cry], I really like it
The logic is clear, the writing is very good, and the setting is rigorous. It is a rare good book. I hope the author will continue to persevere and it will definitely become popular.
The setting is very good, and the characterization of the characters is also fair. I like it very much! [Praise]
It's a good book, the writing is really good, and the setting is quite new.
This book has the potential to score 9 or more. I hope the subject matter is very novel and I hope the author can stick to it.
The background of the novel is a bit like Blood Blockade Battlefront. There are vampires and they are very powerful. They are all set in a foggy city.
The best books on the bookshelf plus one, for contemporary readers [currently in progress]
I think this book has a platinum status, I can't sleep at night, so I'll update it soon! I highly recommend reading this book! Elements: "The Godfather" + Western/Eastern fantasy (combat power system, partial settings) + fictional world (similar to modern Western society) It can be seen that this book is deeply influenced by "The Godfather", and some plots also have its shadow (or is it a replica?). The plot currently revolves around the three states of fog, rain and snow named after "water". The combat power structure combines the characteristics of Eastern and Western fantasy (the Eastern one is more urban with supernatural powers) The author's worldview setting has his own ingenuity, which can be seen to be different from the formulaic application of other assembly line works. I particularly like it🥰, not to mention that the settings of the three states of fog, rain and snow are "a bit" "referenced to the three big G's of reality" hahaha. In terms of plot, it is currently a fusion of "The Godfather" + what the author wants to write. It is a bit cool (the protagonist's golden finger is very straightforward, like the old man with the ring), but standing on the shoulders of giants, it is still exciting enough. The author's writing style is good and not a novice. It can be said that he stands out in Tomato, a software where anyone can write novels. Unfortunately, no one reads it and there is no traffic. Why? Damn foreign persimmon! There is also Chekhov's Gun-style foreshadowing recycling, and the plot design is simple, but it is a pity that because it is currently a shell of The Godfather, it has not yet shown the author's ingenuity in plot design. I am still looking forward to what the author's plot will be after finishing The Godfather. After all, the shell of The Godfather is just a tool to expand the world view for readers, and the big one is at the back! The big one is coming! I hope that the subsequent author can write more of his own stuff (there are some problems with the expression, it should be said that it is more of a wild imagination of this fictional world), because now it can be seen that many designs are more or less obvious references to something, but it is also like the Cthulhu novels "because it is mixed with reality, so it gives people a sense of reality." It is very good, very to my taste, although the plot feels bland due to familiarity because of reading "The Godfather 1". Let's talk about the setting of the protagonist. It is easy to fall into the cliché setting. If you upgrade too quickly, you will fall into the routine of mindless and cool writing. At the same time, it is inconsistent with the tone of the current plot. At the same time, if you upgrade too fast, you will also sacrifice the flavor of shaping the world view. But at present, the tendency to upgrade quickly is obvious? I don't know what to write anymore. As mentioned before, the shell of "The Godfather" and the steady narrative rhythm make it nothing worth picking at the moment. Except for some key points that don't make sense, my rating dropped, but I still think it's worth reading this book. (Don't read the content in brackets if you don't want to be spoiled) (For example: The son of the deputy city lord had no reason to leave the city. He clearly had his own power in the city but was killed when he went out of the city. Although it can be explained that he would not reveal his half-vampire identity, this is far-fetched. It can be solved by going to the sphere of influence of the city lord and the mafia. This is obviously to create a scene for the protagonist to come into contact with the new police officer. It is too deliberate) Finally, thank you to the author, I hope your work will get better and better! Don't stop updating! It can be seen that it is a novel written out of interest (¿) I hope I can stick to it!
Well, it's a good book. From the current point of view, the world view is good. I like the author's characterization and some plot connections. I am still a little confused about the protagonist's "death". It is obviously a death announcement. Why is there an opportunity for survival after the established fact "beside others' predetermined ending" , outline a possible life path for yourself." This sentence clearly made me unable to understand clearly. I initially thought that Jacob's "Gale Wind" was the second magical power left to the protagonist by the author. I felt that Jacob's death should be unrestrained and heroic and memorable, but later on I felt that the author could not bear to part with this character. The following colleges are obviously paving the way for the future worldview and systematic learning. Then there is the incomplete combat power system, which gives me a strange feeling anyway, and the protagonist improves very quickly, with a total of nine prices. I am very curious about how to write it later. Although it seems that the author may not write anymore, I will finish it and take on the next one. I can only continue to complain about Tomato. Talented newcomers simply cannot get ahead in their novels. This is already the most comfortable novel I have read recently.
The plot progresses very naturally, and the characters are more comfortable to read than some of the sacred books on the rankings. However, it may also be a matter of personal taste. It is very suitable for Japanese fantasy and dragon-flavored baby physiques. There are basically no too many bad points, and the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine is very cute (I hope it is a single heroine) Finally, I hope the author understands what he is writing. The number of words is too small and it is not enough to read. I am also afraid that after updating, I will suddenly be lost in everyone. It is not good to read.
The world view is grand, the setting is awesome, the characters are well described, and the writing is also good. It can be regarded as a masterpiece in Tomato. If you don't believe it, read other book reviews, they are all five-star reviews.
I have now finished reading the first chapter, which is where I catch up on the novel. I really think this novel is well written, and the characters in it have very distinct personalities, which is in line with my expectations for the subject of group portraits. The author is also very good at making things happen, and I like it very much. I'm looking forward to the next academy chapter, and this novel must not be unfinished. Ah Kou Ya [cry] [cry] [cry], I really like it
The logic is clear, the writing is very good, and the setting is rigorous. It is a rare good book. I hope the author will continue to persevere and it will definitely become popular.
The setting is very good, and the characterization of the characters is also fair. I like it very much! [Praise]
It's a good book, the writing is really good, and the setting is quite new. This book has the potential to score 9 or more. I hope the subject matter is very novel and I hope the author can stick to it.
The background of the novel is a bit like Blood Blockade Battlefront. There are vampires and they are very powerful. They are all set in a foggy city.
The best books on the bookshelf plus one, for contemporary readers [currently in progress]