[Loli + sword + ruler-shaped + no transformation]
The good news: I transmigrated and was taken home by an adorable white-haired loli.
The bad news: I'm a useless sword made of scrap metal that can't move, and she's an utterly broke miser who'd sell her soul for money.
When she discovered I could talk, her first reaction wasn't fear.
Instead, her eyes lit up. “A talking sword! It must sell for a great price!”
Me: ...
She took me to an underground fighting ring and finally won a hundred thousand yuan.
I thought we could finally eat better, but she held the money and calculated all night, then decided to spend it on the entry fee for a more dangerous tournament because the champion's prize was bigger.
Me: ...
She finally got into First Military Academy and received the top scorer's reward.
I thought we'd be on the road to a bright future at last, but when she saw the sturdy testing pillar at the school, the first thing she asked the examiner was, “If I break it, can I take the pieces and sell them?”
Me: ...
Help! I don't think she wants to be my master. I think she wants to use me as the toughest piggy bank around!
One of these days, she'll sell me just to buy a limited-edition meat bun!
The progress is very fast, there is no foreshadowing, and the pace even jumps a bit. The big problem is that there are so many small problems. It's not like AI, but it's also not like humans. It feels like a pseudo-human being imitating humans to write novels. I really have too much free time, and I don't have any books to read, so I listened to it while playing games anyway. 😏
Although it feels a bit like AI, does the daily relationship between the male and female protagonists feel a bit warm? Bai Zixuan thought that there was going to be a scene where the power of the big family threatens the heroine, but it didn't appear later. It avoided a big poisonous point, which is quite good. There was no big poisonous point later, so it was watchable.
There are currently no very big poisonous points, the pace is relatively fast, and some are inexplicable and nonsensical. It can be read as a relaxing novel. Compared with the current tomato environment, Fengli Gold Rush can be considered a good one. You can read it when you are bored.
I think the rating is about 7.8. First of all, the style of writing feels a bit like a pure narrative. There is no sense of involvement, just like a bystander. My writing is okay, I can write things clearly, but I can't write what I want perfectly. As for the main outline, the number of words is not enough, so there is no evaluation. However, I still give it five stars because I can feel the possibility of improvement and hope the author will work harder.
Yunli and Lao Tie, that's interesting
666, You can read it as half a book of Liu Bei
So far, there are no poisonous points. The author uses a novel perspective. Pure Sword Spirit is a story about a time-traveled sword spirit and a genius girl who directly redeem each other.
Yes, the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine is very enjoyable to watch, but I don't know if I can write it to the end. After all, the flow is too poor.
It's not a bad first time watching a sword movie
It looks good. I love watching it. Please order more.