Demonized Qingque: I Can Do Anything!

Specifically, it can be seen that the author is a novice. The plot of Kongque thinking about herself feels too cumbersome. In fact, it is not necessary to give the memory all at once. It is better to gradually revive the memory and collide with itself in the struggle. Now it feels more like Kongque has taken away her body and Taibu Qingque has her memory. It's not quite like the cosplayer Qing Que. When Belloberg wrote his memories, most of them were "from Tairen Qing Que's memory." The plot can be more heartwarming to fill the void of Qing Que as a time traveler. There is no need to be so bitter, grudged, and philosophical. Is Bi Jing a space comedy [smile] Overall, it has great potential. It's just a constant update and brain-teasing. It's a good book.

It is already very good among novels of the same type. The setting and characters are all very good. There is no sense of separation of the same type as other books (the one about Yanqing kept repeating that he was confused by other people's sympathy, that he had no memory, and that the injuries were fake. He wrote basically every chapter, and also created a team, and whoever uses the ability will be replaced in the team). This book is quite good.

Writing style: The writing style is excellent and the language is logical and smooth. Characters: The description of the characters is consistent with the performance of the characters in the original plot. Poison point: None yet All in all, it is a work with great potential, and its novelty is good. Although there are examples of pioneers, it is still a relatively rare type in the scope of Bengtie's second-generation novels. I hope the author can keep updating. If you run out of ideas or are tired, it doesn't matter if you postpone the update, as long as you can keep updating. I have seen many excellent works, but it was a pity because the author did not update them in the end. I hope the author can continue writing. Your work is well written. [Love]

Come on, it looks pretty good [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] So far, it's much better than the cos that have been made up in your head or forcibly assimilated.

Very good story, made my combat skill points rotate. Hopefully it's not a space cleansing drama.

Good-looking, really good-looking The writing is also very good But... That kind of naked calculation and malice that anyone with a discerning eye can feel... It's really annoying...

Let me talk about my personal opinion first. I have read a lot of this kind of subject recently. Although it is a bit disconcerting, my personal understanding is that this book is more immersive than those cosplays and the appearance in front of the main protagonist. Then let's talk about the ingenuity and setting of this book that I like. The demonic Yin body of Qingque in the future was stuffed into a memory due to the influence of Aha, causing a bit of mental schizophrenia? (Doubtful) Then there are some methods for Jing Yuan to confess and then deal with it. For some people, most of what they see in this game or in life may be relatively innocent, making them unable to accept this relatively depressing writing. But if this is a real world, the memory that the protagonist has been stuffed into makes her feel that she has really experienced it, and then she goes back to the past to save it all, force "himself" to grow up, force some people to become less naive, let their innocence and innocence converge, and then go to a stable place where most people can accept their existence. It is safer and more real than having to face those painful things alone or with a few people in the end. Let's talk about the author's writing skills. I think it's very good, and it's not too plain-spoken to cause drama, nor is it too rigid to be understood. Although it's a bit simplistic (some parts are similar to classical Chinese), you can understand it, and the emotions you can understand are more real. (I haven't read the Beroberg chapter and I won't comment on it.) Let's just talk about Xianzhou. So far, the protagonist I have seen has experienced the destruction of Luofu. Elderly friends have become memories of the past. Compatriots are killing each other. Demonic bodies are everywhere. The whole Luofu has fallen into madness. In this case, I think I can describe the protagonist's urgency and slightly paranoid behavior in a um... Reasonable way. Also, the author's writing style is very good. I would also like to read more about Boss. Wow, Darcy can do anything [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Star, undisputed five stars. I commented immediately after reading Chapter 53. Whether it's Kong Que's struggle, Huo Hao's cowardice and bravery, or Qing Que's pretense of being strong, they all really come alive, as if two people in time and space are really communicating with each other.

Invincible! Just after reading the first three chapters, I understood that this is an absolute treasure! Ninety-nine percent! The writing style is really good, and the character development is also very good (at least Aha is very good). It can be said without hesitation that it can be called the pinnacle of this kind of writing! [Cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's a very good work. I won't elaborate on what's good about it. I'll just talk about the poisonous points I feel. 1. Jing Liuchu can avoid the high probability of killing the protagonist in the follow-up. 2. The overall feeling is quite depressing. The personalities of many characters may change or grow in the follow-up (this may not count). 3. It may be completed quickly (it feels like the main plot is to rectify the fairy boat). , Fight against abundance, it is estimated that it will be between 100 and 200 chapters, the follow-up depends on how the author writes), 4 people who want to see the interaction between the protagonist and the three little ones (anyway, there is no interaction so far, this is mainly because of Belloberg, I don't know how the follow-up will be), it is just for reference, it still depends on how the author writes, if there are any problems, please help to correct them, don't be too naive Also, when I saw Moyu, I thought it was some kind of heart-warming, casual article, but I was really tricked into boarding a pirate ship!