Genshin Impact, You Call This a Romantic Story?

It's a very novel subject matter, but I feel that there are too many descriptions and praises for the heroine's beauty and talents in the entire article. It feels like a male-centric novel. I feel that the author can reduce it appropriately. It's ugly. Let's avoid lightning. Forget about men wearing women's clothes. Throughout the whole story, they talk about how beautiful the protagonist is. In almost every chapter, someone praises the protagonist's appearance. It's from Long Aotian's script.

It looks good, but the book could be better (referring to Dao Teivat readers). You can write a book like "Pseudo Love", where you love each other but can't be lovers, but there is no death. Now those readers know that all the protagonists will be "living" in the future. If this gives some hope, they will think "What if the ending is like "Pseudo Love", at least they are still alive?", And then find that they are all "living" as before. [Laughing evilly][like]

It looks good, I want to laugh when I see the scene of being stabbed [laughing] The identity of the protagonist seems to be the end of the world [smile]

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It's really good to watch. I'm scared to death if the author dares to make a sudden revelation. When I think about them eating Ompharos's knife, I feel like I've eaten the elders of the Soul Palace. I look forward to them seeing Xiao Bai's 33550336, and also looking forward to them seeing the ending😃😃😃😁 And the part about Xiao Sanyue coming back to form a lifelong train made me cry😁

I've read more than 170 chapters, so I'll talk about the pros and cons for those who haven't read it and whether they should start reading it. It involves spoilers, so if you mind, please don't read further. Advantages: Daily life is very dull, and it is interesting to watch others being stabbed by novels. This is in line with the theme of writing novels, which is not about killing. The protagonist is very charming and almost everyone thinks he is beautiful. Disadvantages: The protagonist is in a state of basic amnesia (he only vaguely remembers things related to the plot of Genshin Impact, and remembers that he is a time traveler). After waking up, he was picked up by Hutao, and he has very little participation in the development of the plot. Those who want to see the prophet change the plot may be disappointed. The protagonist's force value is very weak, but he has many backers. If you want to see unrivaled force, you can leave it. The author probably just writes whatever comes to mind, so occasionally he writes more on a daily basis. Those who just want to read the knife novel Knife Teivat may be impatient. Other characteristics (it's hard to say whether it's just a shortcoming or an advantage, it feels like the conclusion will be different for different people): The protagonist was reborn on Teyvat many times and experienced many deaths, but she didn't remember it. At present, when I posted this comment, I saw the friends of Gui Zhi and Wendy (due to the existence of the protagonist, the Wendy here is female). The protagonist is not a setting of seizing the body. The author's setting is: this is a story because of the protagonist, which means that it is a substitute nature. In the setting of this novel, there is no original Teyvat's Ending and Wendy's Friends. There is only the protagonist. Although the ending of the story is similar in the end, and the author hints that this will happen again later. The protagonist has been reincarnated many times. If you don't mind, don't read it. Although the protagonist is a man dressed as a woman, except for her sexual orientation, she can be viewed as an ordinary girl. Maybe it's because I don't know anything about those plots. I feel that the plots other than the Heroes of Ompharos are not very attractive to me. Now I am more curious about what the protagonist did in Teyvat to make her a veritable patron king. The overall development is a bit slow. There are more than 600 chapters in which Ying has not yet completed the main plot of Xumi. It seems that the author has no intention of writing the plot of Nata and Nodkale. It also lacks a sense of immersion in allowing Ying to push the main plot alone. The daily writing is okay, but the description of stickers can be less dense. Too much would be bad. Overall, there are a lot of problems, but I can still accept it. I hope the author won't write a bad ending. Judging from your current content, the ending is not easy to write. The main difficulty lies in how to end it naturally. It depends on the author how to complete it.

The writing is good, but I think romance novels don't have much profound meaning. People like to read this kind of thing, and they mistakenly think that the three views follow the facial features because they are popular because of their appearance. I think the really meaningful ones, such as "Coco", have deep meaning. This is also the reason why I hate Japanese comics. Putting aside the appearance, there is really no meaningful reason.

Four points for encouragement. 1. As the author himself said, if you want to write too much, you won't be able to write anything. 2. It is mentioned over and over again in the two books that the protagonist "writes" too slowly. Is writing the book the main story? Or is it the main line with Hutaotie? Or is revealing the identity the main plot? 3. Every character who has appeared in the game will say a paragraph after receiving the protagonist's book: "Is the author's name Luo Qing?" "Isn't it a coincidence?" And so on. Finally, I recommend the author to read the book "Genshin Impact: An Ordinary Scholar". Writing the book, developing Liyue, and following the original plot are three intertwined and parallel lines, so you won't have this problem. You can also watch "Genshin Impact: Seven Elemental Demon Gods". The main plot is clear, which is to make friends with the Genshin Impact.

Author, you are great. Not only did you let me watch the new series, but you also allowed me to successfully eat another piece of Omphalos' knife. I thank you. I also want to send you blades like those Luo Qing readers. @The Witch's Bride The Heroes of Ompharos The first volume should contain 3.0~3.1 In Bengtie Volume 2, including 3.2~3.3 Volume 3, including 3.4~3.5 Volume 4, including 3.6~3.6