Sequence 01: The Prophet. The Nation Wants Me to Become Invincible First

The writing is very good and has the style of a boss, but if you say you want to be popular, you have to change the part about sex. At least if you have this part, a large number of women will not read it. And if he wants to be popular, both his male fans and female fans are indispensable. And when reading this article, it is easy for readers to think of you as a loser. It affects the perception very much. Then there is the fact that you don't grasp the rhythm very well and write things too slowly. You wrote so many pictures when the protagonist killed the first monster, and the protagonist was completely brainless at the beginning. Now there are only about 10 pictures. It is still very easy for you to change it. The protagonist is not said, at least he is an ordinary person. The first thing you wrote is relatively realistic, but the later part is a little strange. The protagonist is in daily life It's easy to mobilize this elemental energy in life. It's been so long, but why haven't we found out how to use it? Moreover, the ability to predict is not a simple ability to predict. If it has lethality, doesn't it mean there is something wrong with this world? If it is a pure ability to predict, it can only know what will happen in the future, then this world may be an ordinary world, and then he has something different. But this precognitive ability can control others. This is the biggest problem. Why did the protagonist not think of the previous character design? It is that the protagonist has not developed this thing. How to say it? That's all. I hope the author can change it if he sees my comment. I won't say it anymore. Five-star support. And you have a bit of a running record. The first few pictures are fine, but I don't know why the last two pictures start to run smoothly after such a short distance. My writing skills still need to be polished(ง •̀_•́)งCome on

This novel is really well written. In other novels, countries and countries have almost become background versions. However, although the protagonist in this novel is said to be a bit useless, if you bring in ordinary people, do you think the protagonist is actually quite normal? But is it super reasonable for the country's scientific researchers and the like to show extraordinary IQs?

The content of the plot is very interesting, there is nothing unreasonable, but when does the protagonist strengthen, he has always been so weak, and his original power has not been restored from the beginning to now [laughing and crying] This power bank is very qualified.

The writing is quite good, but the author can speak pornographically anytime and anywhere regardless of the situation. The author looks like a middle-aged man!

From what I've seen so far, there's nothing bad about it, the plot is compact, the world view is grand, it's a bit funny, and it's also very realistic. If you like to watch the kind of protagonist with a country behind you and strong combat power, you can watch it. Anyway, it's a bit addicting. The scientific concepts here are all current subjective scientific concepts and are very real. These authors must have done their homework on things like wormholes and energy.

The subject matter is also very good, but it gives me the feeling that the global IQ has dropped a hundred times [smile] I thought I was assisting the protagonist in killing, but I didn't expect the protagonist to be the energy source. I couldn't stand it, so I withdrew.

Beautiful (♥∀♥), great potential! ! ! The world view is also very large, and the characters are well drawn and have distinct personalities└(＾ω＾)". The plot is attractive. The disadvantage is that the volume is too small now. If you can stick to it, it will definitely be a good book (＾3＾♪

Author, who are you? The Guinness record is set every minute 807 letters, each Chinese character requires six letters, each The clock can knock out about 134 words, because you are not the holder, So let's calculate it based on 100 words per minute. According to organizational standards, a person's healthy sleep time is eight hours And it takes you about two hours to eat every day, and another 20 minutes Come to the toilet, 40 minutes to wash up, and one hour to exercise Body, two hours to get inspired, then one hour to peel off the hair Moyu, you should have nine hours to type, Linyi type 435,780 words, based on 2,000 words per chapter, there should be 36 chapters Why do you only post so much content every day? Laozi Tell me, is it withholding? Even the donkeys in the production team dare not do this Rest, the author quickly gets up and writes.

It looks pretty good so far, my type. There's nothing sinister about it. In fact, the protagonist's behavior is the true behavior of most people when they encounter this situation. Much better than those mindless cool articles, come on, author!

Chapter 85 No heroine The realms of sequence ability users: spiritual realm, bright realm