Don’t Move, I’ve Got You in My Sights

The author's writing style is really, really good [shy] I really like it! I just finished reading it in one go. The only drawback is that it is serialized [crying][crying] Come on, I will watch it every day [shy][shy][shy]

It's a very good book. The writing is okay and there's a lot of room for improvement. However, I feel that the plot pace is too fast. Even if it is close to the compactness of a short story, it can be slowed down appropriately. Then there is the character design. I feel that the characters at each stage are somewhat different and very similar. I was stunned for a while. I guess it is because of the fast pace. Slow down the pace and bury some foreshadowing. I guess there will be no such problem. The author has great potential. Come on!

It's very beautiful, especially the description of details, and the details of the game are also very good!

It's really good-looking, and the words really make me feel bad. The baby Lin Nuo in it is like an angel. Gong is too duplicitous. Whenever you think he has changed, he starts to commit suicide again. I want to say, "Lu, stop it. You will cry when your wife runs away with someone else." (I have only read more than 30 chapters. I don't know if Gong will change in the future [laughs] Don't scold me [laughs])

It's really good to read, and if you think it's not good, please find someone who specializes in playing games to write it. If you can't write it, don't say it. Competitive games are inherently difficult to write about, and it's not your turn to comment [smile][smile][smile]

Very good, but the game content could be more realistic

Already finished reading. It looks good, mutual redemption, it can be said that the main CP and deputy CPs (Su Yang and Lu Junyan) also have mutual redemption. Lu was a little forced to love her in the early stage, but there was a reason for that. He was afraid that Yan would disappear again. Because Yan was threatened and then disappeared from the competition, he had a bad life for 4 years. In the four years since Lu Zaiyan disappeared, he suffered from severe depression and stress disorder, and the only people he hurt were himself. Therefore, he was threatened by Ye to separate from Yan in the later plot. Fortunately, Yan insisted on choosing Lu, and the rest was sweet. In the early stage, Lu didn't have a big mouth and just used his actions to make fun of his words. It was very painful for me to watch, but I slowly got better afterwards. It's quite uncomfortable to watch from the front, but it gets better and better the more you look at it from behind. Deputy CP, go and find out for yourself, I won't say more, it's redemption anyway. It's also very sweet, but the content is too little. Please come up with a side story of theirs. The e-sports elements are okay. Well, I'm not very familiar with Honor of Kings either. But it still feels a little lacking. It feels like most of the latter is describing how they (both the principal and the deputy) help each other deal with things (things that cannot be recalled, haze) It's a pity. The original idea was for the two of them to compete together and win the trophy together, but something happened to Lu's father. Lu couldn't take over the family business, and they couldn't compete together later. However, he watched Yan compete in the audience and won. Well, one competed with peace of mind, and the other sat at the back to make the competition fair. It's pretty good, but it's a bit of a pity. I wanted to give it four stars, but after thinking about it, I'd rather give it five.

It's pretty good, but the e-sports part needs to be strengthened. The emotional line is really great, I really like it so much, although Lu's dialogue in the early stage is not very good and a bit forced. I kind of hated Lu's behavior when I first watched it, but after I got the explanation in the middle and later stages, I really felt distressed. The two of them were struggling in the whirlpool of pain before they met again, which made me feel really distressed and distressed. . Lu and Yan, these two little bitter gourds, if Yan hadn't been set up four years ago, they might not have been like the beginning. Yan would not have chosen the future of his lover and left Lu, and Lu would not have suffered from depression. The two of them were still high-spirited teenagers, and they might have won their championship together earlier. But it all happened, but it didn't matter. They all survived, they were still by each other's side, and they also got the supreme glory that belonged to them. Finally, I wish the young couple 99 [love]

The writing is good, and many details are well described, but there is still room for improvement. The plot is also good. Overall, this book is very interesting. I recommend it. If you think the game content is not good, you can ask professional players to write it and see how well they write it. Can the author write extras? Looking for Lu Junyan and Su Yang online

Reading this novel is no less than reading 188 [laughs]