Reborn in Kindergarten, the Little Fairy Feeds Me Immortal Pills

My opinion is to reduce the emotional drama in kindergarten as much as possible. I have seen too many people who wrote too much emotional drama and were banned. Try to enter adulthood as soon as possible after 100,000 words, otherwise you won't live too long.

It's pretty good so far. The system is just a joke, letting the protagonist complain, and the fantasy stuff is just a golden finger for the protagonist. In fact, it just adds some physical fitness and IQ. The current progress is very fast, more than 40 chapters have been skipped to junior high school. Unlike the previous book that was written about childhood and then collapsed after writing for too long, the rhythm is well controlled. Come on, author 😘

The novel describes the sweetness of love and daily life well. 😘[Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] The interaction between Gu Zhan, Bai Lu and Chi Chi is naturally sparkling. The scene of the three of them eating and chatting together is particularly vivid. The male protagonist can take care of others, which makes people want to laugh. However, I feel that the growth line of the three people is a bit rushed, and the emotional changes are slightly abrupt. If there were more details about inner changes, the story would be more complete. Also, Zhan has changed so much. Except for Gu's father who has some doubts, no one else has any doubts. The protagonist covered it up in a dream. He can't be so stupid. A few days ago, the son was operating normally as a child. A few days later, he corrected the code for his father, which was a bit poisonous. 😅 Finally, during the reading process, there were some small details that were not found in the previous article. It seems that the author forgot to write them or did not write them, so he just wrote them in one stroke in the article, which feels like a patch. 🙂 However, overall it is just sweet enough, suitable for reading to put your mind aside and just read about love. I have read a book with sixty chapters, and I came across chapter 229. The two of them were going to change clothes for Gu Zhan to see, and then Xia Chichi took off Gu Zhan's glasses, and then the brackets on the back, if there were any, and if not, she was adjusting the collar. It felt a bit like it was written by AI.

If you don't add fantasy elements, it's quite possible to make it into a novel [Chigua] If there was no system, if fantasy was not added to modern cities, and if logic could be smoother, he would still be a good writer. 😄

The plot of youth love, from youth to teenager, is not long, it is fast-paced, but not bad. The only regret is that the protagonist has not cultivated to immortality until now. Maybe this is the regret of youth! It is estimated that there will be a happy ending in the future, that is, the end of old age and death. There is a high probability that he will not live forever

For me Disadvantages: 1. Xia is a bit human-machine, which is very different from the image in his previous life, and looks very fragmented. Moreover, who is a good person who talks about theoretical concepts every day? It is really stupid to say it, and the theory is not very accurate, which is very strange. There is no need to forcefully accumulate theoretical knowledge in order to become the character of Xueba. It really doesn't work. It can show her evil intentions and can be linked to the character of Little Witch. Now it seems that it is basically a personal computer. 2. Also, don't repeat the same adjectives and nouns. It's strange that the original image becomes very abstract if they appear too much. 3. Then there's dad, don't be so disrespectful, he's his dad after all. Become a servant Advantages: It's quite sweet. The two female protagonists have grown up together. The plot transitions quickly from childhood to daily life. There are no brainless villains and no misunderstandings. Come on, write well, it's better than others

The warmth between the three people is like the warm sunshine in the cold winter. There are no fancy words but it is the most sincere relationship. They are childhood sweethearts and childhood sweethearts. If you get one, the best taste in the world is pure joy, not to mention getting both.

At present, the first 20 chapters are actually a bit too toxic. So I really can't stand it anymore. Let's give some examples of poisonous points. Firstly, it is said that the protagonist's mentality is to bring his father and Qingmei's mother together. This mentality makes me feel particularly uncomfortable. As mentioned before, the stepmother protagonist should hate this kind of thing. At most, he can only take care of others. To be honest, I personally feel that this is not good. This is the main reason why I quit The second one is about the mother. As for the protagonist's mother, based on this kind of history and character background, he should not mention his mother very often, but as far as the plot is concerned, the protagonist will mention his mother every time he is miserable. To be honest, he will feel a slight feeling of not paying attention to his mother. Maybe the author didn't realize that, at least what I saw in the first 20 chapters was that the mother was simply highlighting the background. I don't know what's going on behind the scenes, so I won't give it a three-star rating. Maybe it will be less poisonous later on.

The writing is good, but unlike the last book I read of this type, it was written before I became an adult. It seems that the novels written by minors didn't get much traffic. It is recommended to reach adulthood before 100,000 words. It can be seen that the author is also very serious about writing. I hope it will not stop updating [Chigua]

Goodbye, author. I have no choice but to make this decision. I hope we can meet again by chance. Because I encountered some unexpected things, which had a greater impact and blow on me, I would like to formally say goodbye to you here. I'm really reluctant to let you go. I'm really happy to get to know you. I came across your book by accident and I feel it is a treasure. After reading this book for so long, the happiness and touch you brought to me are unforgettable, but there is no way, life is like this, full of helplessness and parting. I hope you can always stick to your original intention and keep going. Finally, thank you again for the joy, touch, sadness and anger you have brought to me. Thank you for staying with me these days. The main reason for leaving this time is that I have finished reading it and I am going to read something else. I will come back tomorrow and remember to read more chapters.