My Little Pony: The Demon's Awakening

Give me a five points and encourage you😊 Since this is my first time writing a book, it's pretty good. The creativity of this book can be given full marks [Chigua], but the author is still very inexperienced and has some minor flaws, including but not limited to the lack of detail and detail unique to AI polishing, and the setting where the devil's real name is directly read in the dialogue many times. The translation is mixed with 20% of the colloquial language, which sometimes looks awkward. But the character design is really restorative and the logic is relatively clear. I hope the author can stick to it. [Sending Hearts] However, there is very little foreshadowing and foreshadowing so far, and I feel that this book may not necessarily be too long🥲

I want to watch Rivers of Blood [laughs] and regain the excitement I felt when reading comics.