I Didn't Train the Dogs, They Put on Collars Themselves

In fact, the subject matter is quite good, and the writing is very attractive at the beginning, but in the past two months, there have been a bit too many descriptions of the female n. The female protagonist is actually very charming, and it is okay to slap the fans in the face, but if there are too many females who are dragged into the lower ranks, it will seem a bit cheap. The female protagonist is not comparable to ordinary people. If you really want to set off the female protagonist, the love rivals can be more diverse, and there is no need for everyone to be pretentious and use tricks. Come on

It's good to watch, but when will the rumors be clarified... It's very uncomfortable to watch 😣 It feels good and uncomfortable at the same time. The VIP ticket guy didn't slap that lemon in the face at the front. I hope there will be a pure and refreshing article without ink in the back.

It is a very nice book, but of course there are still some minor problems. I will talk about them in two parts: planting and weeding. The emotional scenes and male protagonists are both delicious 😋 I usually don't like athletes, but if you say that the family husband is a tennis player, it is very delicious 😋 There are also the dark crawling genius dream boy, the fake and arrogant really cute e-sports guy, and the enthusiastic vr game genius puppy boy are also delicious... And the puppy boy seems to be married by a serious boss. Although he has not appeared yet, but I look forward to it. The uncomfortable part is that I feel a little aggrieved that the heroine has been rumored but has not been slapped in the face. It has been so many chapters and there is no explanation... But the proportion is not particularly large... I hope the heroine can be slapped in the face as soon as possible. It is clear that the heroine is not at fault, but it is still too unpleasant to pay 8 million liquidated damages.

It looks good, but the part with Xiang is a bit uncomfortable. If Xiang opens his mouth and takes the initiative to ask, or takes the initiative to inquire about the situation, he will not recognize it for so long. But! ! ! The kiss smells so good hehe [shy]

How can I put it, overall it's okay, but I feel that the plot of "Slap in the Face" is not very superior, and it always feels a little strange, but the interaction and emotional lines between the heroine and the male protagonists are very smooth, and the emotional atmosphere is well written. I recommend [Blow Kiss]

It's so beautiful, but the writing is too new. It would be great if it had a normal ending. It's not enough to watch! ! ! Each male protagonist's life is very different and three-dimensional. I'm curious if the heroine can include them all in the harem! ! !

It's actually quite good-looking. It's not a vulgar system-based story about getting rich. The setting of the female protagonist's men is also very good. I really like the athlete male protagonist~ The only problematic points are two that you can skip if you don't mind. The first one is that the heroine has been looked down upon when she buys a car or a house after she returns home (she already has money at this time, and the heroine spent a long time in the process of buying it before she was satisfied). The second point is that one of the male protagonists is a singer, who operates the lottery winning places for the heroine backstage, and also transfers the gifts given by fans to the heroine, etc. Although there is no definite relationship, it is actually the same behavior towards sisters-in-law, and those who are chasing entertainment can also skip it [crying]

It looks really good so far, and I like the tone. Every male protagonist is very good to the female protagonist. However, when the new male protagonist appears, the author will spend a lot of ink describing it. It will probably last more than ten chapters. The other male protagonists will not appear for a long time (maybe some will appear once or twice to make their presence felt). When the relationship between the new male protagonist and the female protagonist is stable, there will be the same number of scenes, and everyone will enter a fair stage of competition and competition. , I don't care about the new male protagonist having too many scenes in a short period of time. After all, if the writing is not deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, how can he compete with the old characters? Moreover, the author has not ignored that the old characters will add new settings and interactions to the first few male protagonists. The old characters will become more interesting as they get better, and the new characters will become more interesting as they come out. Everyone has a bright future (applause). Finally, I support all the male protagonists and female protagonists to be together at the same time. I think it will be fun to form a big family.

The rhythm of the plot is well controlled, there is no messy plot, the setting is imaginary but very reasonable, the motivations of each character's behavior can be explained, the characters are three-dimensional, the details are well prepared, and the writing is delicate and not perfunctory, which is quite good.

Can the author write some normal female characters? The male characters are all excellent and lovable. There are so many types. If the female characters are decent, they are not excellent. If they are villains, they just love female characters. I really have no choice. I have delicious rice on one side and daddy on the other. What should I do?