
From the Beginning of Danjiamei to the Same Life as Heaven and Earth
从疍家妹开始到与天地同寿
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Explore more →9.9 Points, Worth Two or Three Times!
I want to watch something similar to "The Miracle Doctor's Abandoned Daughter Returns Again". The plot is exciting, compact and engaging, and the more you watch it, the better it gets!
I Pray That Mortals Can Become Immortals and Have Taoist Couples Support Each Other and Pursue Immortality Together.
Books like Immortal Rebellion and Mortal Cultivation of Immortality have been in short supply for a long time. Recently, I have become obsessed with this kind of novels. I beg you all fellow Taoists!
Don't Be Too Exaggerated When Looking for Novels About Mortals Cultivating Immortals. .
Don't become a god as soon as you come to it, combine it into one, and make it longer. Thank you fellow Taoists.
Is There Any Book About Gaowu Where the Main Character Is a Girl?
As the title says, I can't find such a book. Let me see if anyone can recommend it.
The Heroine Is a Martial Arts Master in the World
There are a lot of fighting scenes, don't be too brainless, don't travel through time, have internal strength, have light skills, it doesn't matter whether you have a male protagonist or not.
Looking for Novels with No Cp, No Ambiguity and More Than 9.5 Female Videos! !
I want to read a book like "Quick Travel: Black Lotus She Has a Forty Meter Sword". There is a shortage of books. I am looking for novels with a female channel, no cp, no ambiguity, and a rating of 9.5 Or higher! ! High quality novel! ! It can be anything from quick rebirth to funny revenge! !
Orthodox immortality writing! ! ! No CP! ! ! The heroine shouldn't be soft-hearted, don't be too ruthless, and don't have a systematic time travel or anything like that! ! The qualifications are better, but the training speed should not be too outrageous.
Is There a General Worldview Infrastructure Article to Improve One's Territory Step by Step?
Looking for a Novel with One Female Protagonist and Multiple Male Protagonists
Want to watch something like "Damn it!" Why are the princess's fish everywhere? (Thousand Years of Joy)" book. The female protagonist should not be abusing women, and the male protagonist should be willing to be good-looking and have a good figure without being too aggrieved, and he should be coaxed back and forth, like this one, don't have any
Are There Any Male Novels Where the Protagonist Is a Girl?
Whim
Poor People Cultivate Immortality
From an unknown person to kneeling down to gods, Buddhas and demons. What have you experienced...
Are There Really No Books with Shocking Content, Beautiful Language, and Good Writing?
Asking for the World of High Martial Arts/spiritual Recovery + Heroine Article!
I want to read a book similar to "It makes sense for me to have stronger S-level powers at the beginning." Please read something similar to The World of Gaowu or Resurrection of Spiritual Energy! I want the protagonist to be a girl! (Don't want a man to change into a woman! Don't want a man to change into a woman! Don't want a man to change into a woman! Say important things three times! I want pure
The Heroine's Strength Is MAX! !
To give some examples: Sister Yap (Rebirth: I pretended to be a pig on campus and ate the tiger) Lord Huang (The abandoned daughter is frivolous: The poisonous concubine is ruthless and arrogant) Sister Yuan (The boss in Fast Travel is crazy again) Sister Yin (The cute beast against the sky: The peerless witch conquers the world)
Are There Any Newer Gold Finger Writings?
Looking for novelty, special golden finger articles, I'm tired of reading these, only the ones I haven't read can make old bookworms interested like this
In a World Where Female Channels Are Fiercely Contested, the Heroine Crushes All the Geniuses. It's a Cool Article.
Want to watch something like "The Saint is cold and kind, how can she be a villain?" (The Altar of Sin)" book. After a wealthy family, there is a story about a kind-hearted villain, a story about a genius who dominates, a story about creating a powerful force, a story about upgrading the flow of the great emperor, the heroine is uniquely beautiful, her beauty is unparalleled, and her strength is above all others.
Mortals with a Score of Nine or Above Do Not Need a System to Cultivate Immortality
I Beg the Heroine to Be a Normal Novel About Cultivating Immortals, and Don't Push It Like a Charlatan or a Group Favorite.
Orthodox Immortality Writing! No System! No CP! Female Channel! Don't Be Born Again!
I want to read a book like "Continuously pretending to be dead, I became the heart-throb emperor".
A Long Article About Begging the Heroine to Become an Immortal, No Cp
Looking for a Heroine Who Is Transparent, Has High Emotional Intelligence, Is Proficient in the World, and Has a Thorough Understanding of Human Nature.
It's best to be a fairy tale, completed, with a male protagonist with a low sense of presence (preferably no male protagonist)
I Want to Read Articles About Women with Many Men and Strong Women! ! Don't Create Exaggerated Personas
I want to watch something similar to "The Shocking Beast World!" She was raped by the beautiful male beasts again" book. Do you have any similar recommendations, sisters?
Primitive Cultivation.
Qi training, foundation building, elixir formation, golden elixir, Nascent Soul, transformation of gods, distraction, integration, Mahayana, transcending tribulations, scattered immortals, heavenly immortals, true immortals, golden immortals, and mysterious immortals. Do you have any recommendations like this?
Why is it that the first half and the middle half of a martial arts book are both superbly written, but the second half is written in such a way that it's not as good as it is (out of touch with the theme), and it's written in a way that's supernatural?












































































































I've only read a few dozen chapters and I can't help but praise it! ! ! In fact, there were many girls in ancient times who were smart and refused to admit defeat, but their stories were not written down in history books. The Sanniang in this book really made me see a vivid life. She is rude and mischievous and does not understand etiquette, but she is born with the kind of spirit that refuses to admit defeat or suffer losses. So much like a living person...! I felt like vomiting halfway through watching it. The heroine's achievements, which she had worked hard for, were revealed to almost everyone! Everyone! Do you think it was given to her by a man? ? What's the point of not writing it like this? ? ? ? Is it cool to be mistaken for a concubine? ? ? ? ? I never understand what's so cool about the Dihua flow of my God's frequent posts. This reverse Dihua flow is really annoying. -------------------------------------------------------- After reading some more, there was only one sentence: Run! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The food is poisonous! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! What follows is even more ridiculous. This guy really has a crush on the heroine. Isn't he worthy? A villain princess suddenly appeared and wanted to marry him, but he didn't agree, so he hated the princess, and even the heroine also hated the princess. This is a typical drama with a gentle male protagonist and a vicious female counterpart. In order to discredit this female supporting princess, she did everything possible, saying that she still punched baba bala when the people were in dire straits. No? Do you really like to draw a target in the void and hit it yourself? Isn't this a social background where men are superior to women? In this context, it is said that emphasizing women's rights is not good, so why are you writing about a female protagonist? Just write that the male protagonist has no cp.
The heroine is so cute (づ ̄3 ̄)づ╭❤~The article portrays the image of the heroine very well, overall it's pretty good Um... I thought I got something good.
Once you open it, you can't put it down! The writing is sophisticated, the plot is compact, and the pace is excellent. The most rare thing is that the author has "translated" a large number of hard-core textual research into the story, so that there is no sense of redundancy in reading. The grand scenes are magnificently arranged, the details are described with ease, the military strategy is logically rigorous, the worldly human feelings are clearly described, and the various complex elements are mastered in a simple and easy-to-understand manner. It is a hearty read, which shows the depth of the author's skills. Ps: Judging from the current plot, more than a thousand chapters can be written. According to the routines I have read before, it can be divided into upper and lower volumes, the upper volume is the mortal world, and the second volume is the immortal path. If possible, the title of the book should be concise, similar to Broken Gold. After all, this is a book that is intended to be handed down from generation to generation. The writing skills are as deep as those who have been killing fish at RT-Mart for 20 years, and she has the skills of an ancient ace master. However, the core of the heroine is the most trendy independent and sober heroine. The overall structure has begun to take on a "divine and literary" atmosphere. If we can learn from the setting tension of works such as "Cyber" in terms of world view, and focus on portraying a few unforgettable "highlight female characters" (allies or rivals), it will be a phenomenal blockbuster booking!
It is a real and beautiful novel about martial arts and immortality. The heroine is a serious and savage heroine. She is ruthless and will not be brainwashed by others. She thinks that what is hers is hers. She is a tenacious little weed that makes people feel comfortable watching. Moreover, the author's description of the life of the Dan family is very realistic, and it can be seen that he has put great care into it, but it is also true that he practiced martial arts in the early stage. Anyway, when I read it, I didn't cultivate immortality at all. But if you can't see it being too real, don't try it, because the heroine is really eclectic, she basically doesn't care about anything, the heroine is not perfect, she will make people wet their pants, and people will be so scared that they beg for mercy, but she will grow step by step. In the early stage, the heroine would use degrading words to curse others (she was scolding the male protagonist's mother, she had uterine prolapse due to childbirth or something). The female protagonist was not aware of the problem, and the male protagonist said that it was wrong for her to use such words to curse his mother (it felt like she was trying to charm the man), but the content of it was very, very masculine. I had read 100 chapters before, and except for the female protagonist, they were all high-profile men. There were very few female characters, and there were not many descriptions of them. When I read it before, I thought it was a reality flow (it gave me a very uncomfortable and depressing feeling), but after reading the book reviews and the author's remarks, I felt like I couldn't hide it secretly.
Not bad, not bad. The heroine is very energetic, determined in her heart, and has a stubbornness and unwillingness to admit defeat. She also has great ideas and ideas. She is a little person at the bottom, working her way up step by step. But I think there are not many outstanding female characters with distinctive highlights, while a bunch of male characters have some memorable points. I hope there will be some changes in the future, otherwise it will be really easy to be abandoned. It is a female channel, and the audience is still female strong without CP. Some readers still hope that the female protagonist has the thoughts and pace of the female protagonist, and the female protagonist has the charm of the female counterpart. Even if the female antagonist has a moment that is fascinating and makes her fall into a trance, even if most of the characters are female, as long as it is well written, it will be a classic. The author's writing, story, plot, and emotions are all very good. It would be better if there were more female characters later on.
The heroine is fierce and can handle things, and she has the feeling of a natural woman. I really like this kind of coming-of-age story about a female protagonist, and it's very enjoyable. In other novels, a story about a younger brother would usually work hard to make money and send him to learn martial arts. The female protagonist thinks that she earned all the money, and she wants to learn it for herself, so that she can truly be the head of the family. The younger brother's situation inside is like that of a woman. The brother and sister have real feelings but are mixed with secular concepts that emphasize boys over girls. The heroine is a bit like "Cui Cui" in the works of female writers. She was born and raised without being disciplined. She has her own reasons for dealing with secular concepts. I don't know if anyone understands the feeling I am talking about.
This is a rare piece of good writing, with a real sense of life. The author has really worked hard, the writing is smooth and natural, and the characters in the text are all full-bodied. I like Sanniang's character very much, she is very tough and full of vitality. I finished reading it all at once and started to live a life of catching up on updates again ( ╹▽╹ ) 7:5 is still too low. Such a beautiful article deserves a higher score.
It looks good. The heroine is a dragon king who fought hard from the torrent of the deep sea. She carries a wild nature that has not been disciplined by society. She is innocent and cruel, sharp and reckless. She waits patiently for opportunities and bravely seizes them. Her vitality is vigorous and she is born to compete. After tying up, I remembered that she had been in the green for many years. The heroine of a novel "Please Call Me God of War" that Jiang has read is a fierce beast that fights hard among jungle beasts. She has the belief to be reborn again and again. No one will doubt whether they have the possibility to soar into the sky, because they believe in themselves more than anyone else. This sense of high-quality should be found in female channels! Ps: It would be better if he could change the verbal habit of insulting women to his father's
At present, it seems that the author's writing skills are very good, and the characters are flesh-and-blood and three-dimensional. If the main heroine keeps writing mindless and exciting novels, what is the difference between it and daydreaming? Just like some people fantasize about three wives and four concubines every day, so they read harem erotic novels. If you really don't like it, it means this book is not suitable for you. I don't like to be criticized either, but I feel comfortable now. Although there are difficulties and difficulties, there are directions and solutions to solve them, and I don't feel any aggrieved. How did he become "Naruto" later on? I was so surprised. I didn't read books at the beginning, but I was young and very smart and smart. But after I read books later, I turned into a warrior with clear ideas and only knows how to fight. Looking back, I don't seem to be at ease in what I do. Is it a problem with the author's writing skills? I saved the manuscript in the early stage and didn't have that much time to adjust it in the subsequent serialization.
It's good-looking, and the writing is concise and not laggy. It's rare to read a novel at night and still want to continue reading during the day. The author is very skilled. I see that there are basically no surprises now, and it is already tied. Although it only has more than 100 chapters, the plot is not good.
Come in and see, there is no time travel, no rebirth, no spiritual roots. We are at the bottom of the world. How can we climb up little by little (don't think it's slow in the early stage). We are different. This is creation. Don't follow the example of a blind man touching an elephant. If you don't see the whole picture, you won't comment with wisdom @ in the wall. Just write the outline how you want it to be customized. Don't listen to those trolls. Some people are not here to eat fish, they are here to pick thorns. As long as you don't mess up ("I can give you four days off every month"), I will give it to you. Gold will always shine. I discovered this book very early and knew it would take time. I really liked it and kept following it, but there was no comment. I accidentally discovered that something was wrong in the comment section. So many people complained about it. I knew it was a book that was being updated. Do you still say that a fake strong woman knows what it means to be blind and touch an elephant? If you don't like it, you can go around it. Don't give it one or two stars. Writing a book is not easy. You can get better at it. You can write whatever you like. You can write whatever you like.
The non-travel heroine has no cp. The introduction says that she practiced martial arts in the early stage and cultivated immortality in the later stage. She is currently in the stage of martial arts training, but it is not purely about martial arts. From the introduction, she is now learning power skills at the same time. I personally feel that there are no logical problems or bugs. It is a very good article. There are not many articles like Tomato. I recommend it. It's just that the word count is a bit short and for some reason there's not much promotion, so not many people read it and didn't comment too much. To comment more in detail, the protagonist is not an innocent person, he is ruthless and has a high level of mutual commerce. The four members of the family have distinct personalities. The eldest sister is honest, the second sister is smooth, and the fourth brother is a heartless person (a pure child, but at present, he is not bad in nature). Except for a few people the protagonist encounters in the early stage who are directly killed by the protagonist, they can be defined as villains. The other supporting characters who bully the protagonist in the early stage and do not really do anything are not considered villains, but have a good relationship with the protagonist later on. From this person, I feel that the protagonist is not only befriending pure and kind people. As long as it is not a life-or-death matter, the protagonist can let it go (when he was bullied in the early stage, the protagonist thought about killing the other person, but later on, as long as his attitude towards the protagonist improves, the protagonist seems to forgive, I personally think this part is not abrupt and acceptable). Personal recommendation, some plots are not in mainstream style but I think they are quite good. I caught up with the latest one, which is four stars. I personally feel that the most exciting part is the Tongtianhe part at the beginning, and the end of the Ninghua part is pretty good. After arriving in the capital, the viewing experience dropped significantly. The latest plot is about Yanshan Mansion, which should officially start the immortal cultivation part, but the plot in the capital part has made me tired of watching it. Let's talk about the plot that I am most dissatisfied with. Pei Zhong's plot. At first, I thought it was just a noble promotion. I thought it had no love factor (pure admiration and brother-sister relationship). However, in the later part of the capital chapter, Pei Zhong fell in love with Pei Zhong. Yes, the protagonist wants to cultivate immortality. As long as the author doesn't give Pei Zhong more plots, the two people will definitely not be able to be together. But the problem is that now Pei Zhong has so many scenes that he will be Bai Yueguang's status regardless of whether he appears or not. From the beginning of the capital chapter, I always thought they were simple siblings. However, after it was revealed later that Pei Zhong loves the protagonist, I now have a violent opinion. Pei Zhong is a standard romance novel with an infatuated male protagonist. If this is not a female protagonist, it will be a classic virtuous male protagonist. Even though the plot of this book is about the female character Pei Zhong, it has already made me less interested in this book.
I like it very much. The heroine is never indecisive and the pace is fast. I watched it last night and stayed up late to watch it. I finished it today. I like Sanniang very much. Among them, Zhou Yang thought that he would stumbling between the heroine and Mr. Pei later, but he didn't. In the later period, he treated the heroine sincerely. Although there were differences of interest, they also put the heroine on the same footing. In the game, there are not pure bad guys, some are just forced to do so. Among them, the heroine is willing to give up the interests of those who salvage big goods and monster fish, represented by herself, for the benefit of ordinary people. She is very courageous, and the characters are very distinctive. There are no bad guys, and the bad ones all go to see the Dragon King. I like this setting very much, and I have added it to my bookshelf. I look forward to the follow-up [Blow Kiss]
Immortal product, so beautiful! The current chapter of more than 180 chapters tells the story of how a little girl from the Dan family fought her way out of the Tongtian River in six years, and through martial arts and dealing with various parties, she led her family ashore, and protected the Dan family members in the four bays from being exploited (but they were not allowed to come ashore completely, because the heroine was not strong enough). The author's writing style is sophisticated, describing the different appearances of the people at the bottom, cowardly, ferocious, and honest. He also describes how exploiters are exploited, and each has his or her own power and last resort. The growth of the heroine can also be seen with the naked eye. From the initial appearance of a savage growth without cultural influence, to the tense of semi-illiteracy, to the dialogue with the Caobang after she completed her studies and dissatisfied her for dragging articles, she has always evolved from a tenacious and struggling grass to a high-spirited... Little tree. What remains unchanged is her strong perseverance and a fighting heart. After her father's death, the second uncle wanted to seize her family property, sell her and kill her brother. The younger brother was too protected and couldn't do anything. The heroine struggled and decided to send her second uncle to see the Dragon King. The eldest brother-in-law was not a good man and finally had a better life. The eldest brother-in-law maliciously hurt the eldest sister and the younger brother. He also wanted to steal the heroine's money. The heroine revealed where the money was hidden and lured her eldest brother-in-law to meet the Dragon King. Brother Zhou oppressed the people and the heroine couldn't beat him, so he went to learn martial arts. She repeatedly tried to send Brother Zhou to see the Dragon King, but failed. Since learning martial arts, Brother Zhou has been too protective of the heroine's family. What I like to watch the most is the scene where the heroine fights against the Tongtian River. It's so cool. There are also several small conflicts on the river that are also exciting. My sister is so handsome too! From the author's article, I suddenly realized the meaning of education. Without education, the weak will eat the strong, and you can only survive if you are stronger; with education, you can be faster and stronger, and you can also make more people happy. Meibao never utters a word or shouts slogans, but what she practices is that there is endless joy in fighting against heaven and endless joy in fighting against others. I love her vitality so much!
It's really beautiful. The character creation of the protagonist and the supporting characters are very vivid. The characters seem to appear on the page, and people can't help but be affected by the joy, anger, sorrow and joy of the characters in the book. Looking at the whole story, the protagonist is a tough and rational heroine with growth potential. Every conflict is just right and quietly advances the plot. The length of each event is also well controlled, with tightness and looseness, so that people will not feel bored. I read it in one go. After reading the latest chapter, I realized that I had been reading it for a long time. It is really good and highly recommended.
The heroine is one of the most eye-catching among the novels I have read so far. She is tenacious and courageous, with vigorous vitality. She will never admit defeat and will always move forward, but she can see hope in her body. She is a very charming heroine, which makes people yearn for her. Moreover, it breaks the traditional image of a heroine. She looks very strong and tall, and she is eight feet tall, which is in line with our expectations for powerful women in the new era. In addition, the pace of the plot of the novel is also very good. It does not drag on, and the writing is smooth and dynamic. However, there are not enough descriptions of other women, especially outstanding women. I hope there can be more stories about other outstanding girls and see them grow together! I have already recommended the novel to my friends. Good luck to the author!
It's very beautiful and great. In the later stage, I hope that she will be powerful enough to change the world, so that there will be less insulting words about women. The strong will be respected, and she will be the most powerful. Then equality between men and women is the most basic. Let more girls in the book live, let girls have more unlimited possibilities, women in power is the most friendly to the world!
Luckily I didn't miss this article because of the low rating. Why is the rating so low? This should definitely have a rating between 9.2 And 9.5. At first, it was because the subject matter was relatively new and I had never read "Yu Jia Mei". The more I read, the more I realized that the author's writing was very objective and delicate. The heroine is a growth type, not very powerful at the beginning, but I can see her growing up a little bit, from knowing nothing and only being a timid girl to killing people to forming a power. Although with the help of noble people, the heroine went from knowing nothing to learning to use her brain to think little by little. It's really nice to see growth through learning from events.
The writing is OK, and the characters of Sanniang are also fine. I have always been very enthusiastic, but I actually wanted to watch Cultivation to Immortality. I only watched it after watching Cultivation to Immortality in the later period, but I think Cultivation to Immortality may be later and slower, and the martial arts part is more delayed, so I don't want to read it anymore. I wanted to give it four stars, but I saw that the rating was a bit low. I thought it would be okay to go up to 8.5, So I gave the author a five-star rating. The character is still very attractive to me. I will save it on the bookshelf first. If I can continue to read Cultivation of Immortality later, I will continue to support the author. Come on!
I love you so much, author, you write so well! ! ! Finally, there is a book with a real heroine, and each one is written very distinctively. Moreover, every chapter of your book is impeccable, with a lot of words, and it seems very solid. Author, you must finish it, I love you! The heroine is super good-looking and resilient, and it also combines the features of "I Want to See Cultivation of Immortality" in the later stage, and it has no cp, and it doesn't look greasy, it's amazing!
It's a good book, the author's writing is good, and the characters are well created. I like the heroine very much, and the other supporting characters are not stereotyped, they are more real, and their attitude towards others changes according to their positions and identities. I like to see an ambitious and dynamic heroine with a grassroots background. I hope the author will do more!
It is a very rare masterpiece. If you keep writing, it has already surpassed most of the golden writers. Very real, full of life, and uniquely humane! Not routine at all. A breath of fresh air in the novel! Come on! Come on!
The writing is very good. If you follow it, you can tell that everything else is fan fiction. I saved dozens of chapters and was ready to enjoy them. The more I read, the more and more something felt wrong. I wanted to continue reading but it was like eating a fly. I couldn't get up and down. After browsing through the comment section, I didn't think much about it, so I gave up.
She is super good-looking. The heroine is smart and hard-working. She never asks for anything from her subordinates, benefactors, teachers, and fellow disciples. She always maintains her original intention, pursues greater strength, and leads the people around her to develop in a good direction. She has no official match, but the relationship, friendship, and teacher-student relationship are very clear. The characters are very distinct. The heroine is not the only one who is strong. People around her also have their own strengths. They do not all rely on the heroine alone. They will do their part. The story line is also very complete and grand. I look forward to the heroine becoming more and more powerful. I look forward to the article becoming popular. I look forward to many updates. I really can't get enough.
This is a pure heroine novel. The heroine is thoughtful, capable, decisive, and works hard at all costs for her own goals. However, some people say it is too masculine and disagree. The men appearing now are based on the historical background of this article. The image of the heroine He is a person who resists and grows up with brute force. He only sees that Han Nan is tall, but he does not see that killing men is also tall. He does not see that Jiang Li, the leader of the Cao Gang, is in a high position, and he does not see that Pei is also facing a wife. In this era, the productivity is low and the education is serious. The ancient background is referenced in a large part. Naturally, men will definitely occupy the There are more, but the women in the article are also outstanding. The eldest sister and the second sister are tenacious and hardworking, Song Zhilan is also working hard, and all other women are also working hard. Every woman is living hard by herself in the cannibalistic society. This book is more realistic. If it is simply based on the level of male content, it will not It depends on the background of the times. If you want to create a utopia for women, then it is a cool article. This is the national condition of ancient my country. Based on the low productivity in the ancient background and most men in power, women can only rely on hard work to get ahead. The judgment of words that insult women also depends on the background of the heroine? Anyway, I am recommending this article. I am very realistic and resist thinking that Sanniang is the best in it!
It's good to watch. The story at sea is very attractive. The fight between dragon whale and dragon shark is called the big fish graveyard. There are turbulent undercurrents on the seabed and there are beautiful pearls at the same time. Danger and opportunity coexist. Fishing and pearl hunting also face the oppression and exploitation of people on the shore... I'm really tired. It's not that good since I left the novice village. The heroine in the front is still flesh and blood and has emotions. She dares to think and have sex and refuses to admit defeat. But in the back, she starts to be ordinary. During the battle in the Immortal Mansion, I feel that the heroine has very little emotion. There is another scene in the capital where the eldest princess humiliates the prince. I don't want to say whether it is reasonable or not. People who watch it are physically uncomfortable. It is disgusting whether it is a man oppressing a woman or a woman oppressing a man. I sympathize with a situation, not a gender. And then the heroine who has been rejected in the early stage is because of the prince. The girl got dirty, and she suddenly wanted to be with him. She was very nervous, very much like a male video. The noble lady suddenly got dirty, and then the poor boy hugged the beauty. In this episode, the heroine's feelings for the heroine were revealed to the young man. He was as brainless as a reckless man. He just thought of fighting in the side mirror. The end Guo is still very tired. It seems to be a traditional article about cultivating immortals, but in the end there is a Cthulhu-type monster. It is too long, and it is too tiring to follow up. I suggest you write it shorter and divide it into three parts. The novice period, one from Kyoto to Yanshan Prefecture, and the world of cultivating immortals. The free article is not suitable for writing a long article.
Nice. The pace is bright and not lagging, the language is smooth and natural, the writing is capable, and the characters are vivid. You can feel that the author writes carefully The map of the capital collapsed when I wrote about it. The combat power, rhythm, and villain design are full of flaws. The classic villain setting is awesome, but it is a paper tiger that is vulnerable to the protagonist [face covering]. He has little talent, but he wants to dominate. You have to do things that are harmful to others and not beneficial to yourself. You are just a tool to promote the plot. In the past, the bandits were not as powerful as the heroine in terms of military force and military strength. They were reduced to a lower dimension and attacked more with less. This is understandable and enjoyable to watch. But if the capital city is at this level, is it too childish? If this is the level, then what on earth are the seniors who boast so much about? And the portrayal of a number of important supporting characters is too superficial, with basically no personality charm, and the good and bad camps are clearly divided, which is not interesting. I think Pei Zhong, the male supporting actor who is the least attractive, has to waste a lot of pen and ink to write about it. I think the more I write about him, the more he stretches his hips. However, it is indeed a benchmark for male videos. It plays the role of a rimmed vase. It has no subjectivity and cannot steal even half of the limelight from the female protagonist, but it is too boring... It feels like the writing style has also declined. Che Zhuglun said it over and over again, and for three consecutive chapters he had to write about how easy to bully this Pei was. He was a 30-year-old veteran who was older than the heroine and had a better background. The Zhongming Dingshi Family was cultivating him with all his strength. Is this kind of behavior really appropriate in the plot? It's not interesting to save Feng Chen, but the two heroes, the heroine and the eldest princess, start a fight over this thing, which looks very classy. In my opinion, apart from casting a good child + being kind and obedient, how can a rather mediocre character be used as a show?
It's really awesome. This is called a real heroine story. My admiration is like a torrential river. The author is amazing! ! ! ! At least I see that now, it ranks high among the books I have read.
The writing is particularly good, and the characters are very distinct. Although the heroine is young at the beginning, she is very smart and can be cruel when she should be cruel. She was almost betrayed by her relatives at the beginning, but when she found out, she turned around and sold her relatives. She has always had a fighting spirit. Others said that there are no women who learn martial arts, but the heroine refuses to accept her fate. I recommend everyone to take a look. It is really good! !
I finished reading it in one sitting the day before yesterday and am currently catching up on updates in the past two days. The writing is very good. From the previous chapters, we can see that the heroine Sanniang is brave and resourceful. Each character in the book is definitely not one-dimensional. Sanniang is also very good at dealing with things. When encountering dangerous people or things, she can always turn them into something beneficial for herself in her own way. Both the eldest mother and the second mother-in-law have changed their lives through the heroine Sanniang. When I saw the three of them on the shore together, my eyes turned red. But my current favorite is the fishing and fighting on the water section. The author's Sanniang is really powerful and good. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]