My Brother Insists on Starting a Bad-Guy Organization

It's pretty good, just a bit short. The sweetness is a bit awkward at times. Author, please update more frequently and strengthen the female lead's abilities. I hope she's not always the passive one; it would be better if she improved in either physical strength or intellect.

Excellent! The story is unique and doesn't blindly follow the original work. It also effectively portrays the emotional changes between the characters, preventing the story from feeling too abstract. What I liked most was the author's depiction of the protagonist saving her brother; it wasn't a sudden, swift rescue. It seems simple, but you can always sense her helplessness.

It's a good read, with delicate emotional descriptions (I love 🦴). The character interactions are natural, breaking away from the "perfect saintly white moonlight" image of Shinichiro in most of the stories I've read (naive and sweet). The characters are more three-dimensional. However, I really didn't expect that Mirai's first love would be Shinichiro...

I hope the female lead gets a stronger role. It feels like a normal adult (like the female lead) would give up on Izana, but she seems to value family ties highly, so it's understandable. You could check out other good Touhou Project fanfics written on Tomato.com.

It's so good! Future Baby is resilient and sunny, guiding Isona throughout the journey, and the plot flows very well! Actually, I ship them as siblings more 😏😏 I wonder what will happen next. Author, please keep it up, and make sure there's some sweet moments!

Actually, I feel this story is quite well-written. The female lead is moral and kind, and thinks about saving people. Although she lacks fighting skills, she at least has principles and is brave, not coldly refusing to help those in need. While her actions are sometimes accompanied by naivety and recklessness, it's true that not everyone can handle such situations with exceptional skill.

It's well-written, but the daily life storyline feels a bit thin, and the characters are also rather underdeveloped. However, the female lead's character is well-developed; several times when I almost didn't understand her actions, the reasons for those actions were immediately explained. It just feels like there are a few too many descriptive words.

This book is really good. I've practically worn out all of Tomato's fanfiction. The scene with the female lead in the latest chapter made me scream!! There are a few angsty parts though, and I feel so sorry for everyone. The Touhou Fukei manga is just a tragedy (in my own opinion). I can only find some solace in fanfiction (the happy ending for everyone is a bit forced).

It's alright, quite good. I've watched some Blue Screen dramas, and I noticed something: the female lead always tries to redeem them, yet she never has any companions of her own. The female lead should arrange companions herself; why is the author writing this? Why is the brother always surrounded by people burning discs? Coco is always with that guy making money?

Putting myself in the female protagonist's shoes, I felt like I was on Earth during a period of tectonic plate expansion. A tiny person reached out and grabbed the hem of the person next to them, but a crack slowly appeared between them. Pulled apart by a powerful force, no matter how hard they tried, they couldn't stop it.