The Errand Shop in Gensokyo

Pretty good, for daily use. The character of Ermei is a little OOC but it's innocuous. The development process of the protagonist is a bit crude. There is not much logic in the selection of modules. The daily life is also quite chaotic. It feels like the author doesn't know what to add and just writes it first to deal with it. It seems that there is no outline 🤦 If you are still confused, your writing will become slower and slower every day, and you will get stuck every day. I suggest you think about what you want to write first and what enrichment you need. For example, add an achievement system, the kind that even though you don't know what the sink bag is doing, a bunch of useless full-screen prompts pop up 🤦 Like holding a concert? Mc's discs, redstone music, and my versatile wine fox For example, have your own mutation? Daily life is difficult to write, and this weak plot and weak main line test the author's understanding and shaping of characters. There are many extra chapters similar to the previous radio extras of Parousie Mizuhashi, and small extra adventures from the perspective of non-protagonists can also be done. In short, encourage ❤️

The subject matter attracted me, but after reading about half of it, I found a lot of problems, which is a pity. I hope the author can work harder! The detail processing is average, the description is strange in some places, the prerequisite knowledge is too much, and it is a bit unable to resonate with the author's high points. It is not suitable for readers who have not played MC and Gensokyo.

It's okay, it's a good Gensokyo fan, but it may be a little unfriendly to people who are single-player. For example, I know more about the Touhou side than the MC side, so apart from watching videos of drawing swords, I am quite familiar with other people playing this mod. What else is like a farm? Or I just don't understand the magician and other modules at all, and the author doesn't explain it in detail, so this part of the content feels a bit vague. For people who only watch Dongfang, in the same way, for those who mainly play MC, the feeling of watching Dongfang should be unfamiliar, right? But the story is very touching, so overall it's pretty good (≧∇≦*)

There is basically no poison in this book (if you like a peaceful life) But the same shortcomings are also obvious. The block world and Gensokyo are a bit disconnected, but overall it's not bad. The story is told very well. I hope it can be completed.

The writing is quite good. Although it is about daily life so there is no fighting or anything like that, it is not bad. Come on, author. It is the most pleasing to my eyes among the My World novels in Tomato. Is there a female protagonist? 🤔

It's not bad, but the writing style feels like I've seen it somewhere before. I remember reading a MC and Gensokyo book before, but it's gone, but the author doesn't have any other books.

It's interesting, but the setting of the pig-footed MC cube man is not very good. Steve follows some rules of other worlds when he enters other worlds, but most of them are still the rules of the MC world, and Steve has no concept of time. Unless a module like the original cultivation is added that specifically refers to Steve having the concept of time, it should not work if he stops in time. Steve is not affected by time stop.

A good daily article, with some potential, please give it a good review and support first, and then finish the serious review 👍

The author seems to be gone again 🤦

It's a meaningful book that covers daily life without being boring. The last book that was so good-looking was The Little God of Gensokyo.