Quick Transmigration: System Malfunction, Black-Moonlight Heartbreaker, Save Yourself

This is not a story where the heroine is a heartthrob and she completely abuses the man and dotes on the woman. It feels more like a story where both sides hate the sea and love the sky. The female protagonist is still a type who focuses on tasks and supplements her emotions with growth. I prefer this type. The various characters I write are also my xp. They look beautiful to me. It would be nice if they were more contradictory and forced to love them more.

I think Changxing should be witty, brave and powerful, and should not be used to highlight the male protagonist. There are long stars in each plane to constrain the male protagonist to lower his body to cater to him, as if it is just a foreshadowing to create a strong image of the male protagonist. Is the death of Changxing the greatest revenge for the male protagonist?

It's very beautiful. I felt sour when I watched it. I really liked the male protagonist's moist and airtight love. I like the character of the heroine, she is strong and independent, like a tenacious grass. It's a bit sadistic for the female protagonist, but even more sadistic for the male protagonist, sour and sweet. What I like most is the system. I like the relationship between the system and the heroine, especially when the original system died, I cried. I feel that the system and the heroine are companions beyond friendship [crying] [crying]

The abuse of the female protagonist was all a tragedy directed and performed by himself. While he felt that the heroine liked him because she was controlled by a spell, On the other hand: "Even if she doesn't love me, I will still pester her." He didn't listen to the heroine's personal words about liking it at all, and lived in his own logical closed loop. The one who tortures is the heroine, and the one who enjoys it is his own affectionate character. There's also the heroine, it's only in the last two pages that she realizes how powerful she is, and the first few pages look so aggrieved🙅 The reason for giving high marks is that the subject matter is novel and the length is not long, so you can follow it and read it.

It's very beautiful. I originally thought it was the same routine, but this one is really different. Each world will be more exciting and beautiful than the last one! And every world is related and connected. The author works harder!

It's very interesting. It would be better if the ending of each small world is happy and not the kind of detachment. It turns out that it was all the director's fault in the end. I hope the male and female protagonists will have more sweet side stories. In each of the previous small worlds, the male protagonist's possessiveness is really poignant. I felt my heart swell while watching it, and the female protagonist is also very good at coaxing him. Both of them are very sweet. System 999 is also a little boy with a rough life experience. He is very cute. And I think the setting of this novel is very novel. I have never read this kind of novel. Although there have been quick travel stories before, it is very different from this one. It would be better if the male and female protagonists can have more sweet scenes. I don't know why there is no way to reward this book because it doesn't seem to be updated on Tomato. I don't know if the author can see the comments. It is really good. I hope the author can write more and better books.

I finished reading it in one go, and overall it is quite interesting. Those who like to watch the heroine can just quit, and those who like to watch the domineering girl can come in and have a taste. However, the heroine is too abusive. Every plane is so miserable that it hurts to watch. It feels too pitiful... The ending seems a bit rushed. Well, in fact, the ending of each plane ends a bit abruptly, which makes people a little unfinished, but overall it is worth watching! Because it really breaks out of the routine, and I have read too many template novels. This one is really refreshing, and the main plot is also very novel. I support everyone to read it! [Full] [full] [full]

I like this book very much. After reading it, I sighed that the two protagonists finally had a happy ending. It was not easy. I used to like to read fast-travel stories with two male protagonists similar to this kind of plot, but I always couldn't stand it after halfway through? I have been reading this book carefully for a long time. I will take notes and underline the passages I like when I see them, and I am impressed by the author's delicate writing style. I'll come back to read it again in the future when I'm short of books. Maybe after two nights when I can't sleep, I'll read it again and listen to it hahahaha Looking forward to the author's next work

This book is not bad, the structure is quite compact, but the ending feels a bit abrupt. I think one of the points of debate with such a low score may be about the issue of abusing the male protagonist or the female protagonist. I don't think the abuse of the female protagonist is miserable. It's not that I don't love women. It's mainly because of the background. It is true that the female protagonist has done very bad things. You can't expect the male protagonist to be a holy father. In my opinion, the male and female protagonists torture each other, but they are both happy. I can only say that one is willing to fight and the other is willing to suffer. Anyway, I think it's okay. The emotional portrayal is quite vivid. If you don't mind the male and female protagonists torturing each other, you can watch it. Although the two of them had misunderstandings, they ended up getting together, which is not considered a be. After seven hours of speedrunning, I actually became a true fan. Thank you for the love.

This book is indeed very well written and plotted, especially the part about the male protagonist's forced lovemaking. Everything is very good. Why is the score so low? I think it should be 9.0+, I'm really an old bookworm. The author has written this book very well. I am still looking forward to the future direction. Please update more soon ~ I will keep following you hahahaha