Saintess, Your Name Is Known Across the Land

The first half of the chapter focuses on Lilith and the deep relationship with her "mother", while the second half of the chapter crowns the saint and begins to write the prologue of the era, and uses the inhuman training of Link, the brave man from another world, to show us the legendary epic that an ordinary person can compose. (Some people may think that the heroine's behavior towards Link is in huge contrast with the previous article and that it is unreasonable. However, judging from the heroine's life, this is the inevitable direction of the plot. The huge pressure and the pain of losing her mother have made her character distorted and cannot be viewed by ordinary people; and Link should be said to be playing tricks on others and having a good hand in self-attack. Of course, I think the greatest possibility is that the world is the same. Well, subtly, because the heroine seems to be the daughter of heaven, no one should be hostile to her. When faced with the heroine's almost inhuman abuse, Link always finds the heroine's bright spots or tragic points and attacks himself. This unusual brain circuit should be the reason why he, as an ordinary person, can compose this legendary epic.)

It was okay when the Saint was there, but the heroine's transformation was not smooth enough after that. This is equivalent to a lightning point. The portrayal of the Pope is weak. It can be seen that the Pope is not a bad person when the saint adopts the heroine. However, the saint's queen has basically no guidance as an elder (several people have). Basically, it is written in memory of the previous heroine. This memory is usually followed by (some people's) ideological guidance of the heroine and added to be more natural. This is also a lightning point (it is too awkward, people who watch it will easily give up, it is too deliberate). Then there is the time traveler. This part of the system is actually not very recommended. There have been too many systems in recent years, so it would be better to simplify it into a panel (). Later I saw the time traveler training to wear armor a little bit later, it's hard to say. It was really okay to read it as a short story before. 🍅Books are free+⭐️

The beginning of the book, the characterization and basic logic are good. There may be some problems with the events and character creation in the middle, and some readers may be disappointed, but the book is just getting started, and it may be used as foreshadowing later on. The overall reading so far is pretty good. It is a good work among new authors.

Lilith, she is so cute

The description is delicate, the character's emotions are perfect, the thinking is clear, and the plot is good. It's a very good sword and magic theme, but the two unnatural speeches made by the time traveler in the beginning of Chapter 25 should not be done. Even if the novel he wrote was so well portrayed in the past, when Ilala died, the time traveler made such a speech to his daughter, as if he was being controlled by a small head. Isn't it really disgusting? What do you think of life? But this is a novel with good writing and ideas on this software, so full marks💯

The shaping and growth of the characters are really good, with the conflicts and changes in consciousness between modern people and those in other worlds. There is also this interesting system design, which is indeed ingenious, and the complaints are also well-placed. (Pure system is really boring to fly.) The brave man is very easy to empathize with (although the previous one is indeed a blast, but modern people really have this kind of compromise of taking the soft and fearing the hard, and the different world thinking of playing games), it feels like the brave man is more like a spectator and witness than a participant. I just feel like the heroine is a bit too invincible. Looking forward to the follow-up

I guess AI is used for this. Physiological tears have not been changed yet.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I finished reading it, I really like Freya so much

The previous writing is very good, but I don't like the system aspect, and I don't like this type of writing. I would like to encourage you with 5 stars. I look forward to your next work.

Lovely Lilith (cross out) Great Lilith, lead us into the new century! Leaving the door (looking very pious)