Reborn: Yingying's Road to a Comeback

Mainly because it's very abrupt! The main thread seems to have always been around coffee, tit for tat, but I don't know why. The emotional line is inexplicable, but the friendship line is only Andy. There must be a reason for the business war between the two. It started inexplicably. He started out as an online coffee shop. They had no connections and resources. How big of a storm could he make? People started targeting him, and then they started to figure out what the subsequent work would be. Then, people suddenly appeared, and then I felt it was very abrupt. Personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't spray it. There's nothing you can do about it, but you can spray it if you want. I can only rate it as average.

The structure is unclear and confused.