From the Start, the Princess Pledged Her Loyalty to Me, the Demon King

It's pretty good. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is pretty good, and the Demon King's B character is okay, but the personality difference is a bit different. Before, he was still aloof, but soon he started to make fun of the female protagonist. The personality change happened a little too quickly. The description of the characters outside of the main protagonist group is quite similar to Bone King. I like the description of the marshal very much (some people may not have watched Bone King, which is to describe a character in two or three chapters, but not too much and not too little. In the end, the protagonist's men come to the rescue). But what is the purpose of that school principal's description? It didn't appear in the end, and so much pen and ink was spent. Maybe it was just a character who came out to stir up tension. But if it only played this role, then the pen and ink should not be spent too much. And although it was said to be concealing the rear, the turn was too abrupt. I knew that it would be a bit long to wait too long for the protagonist's subordinates to arrive, so I There was such a quick turn, but it was still too fast. We should also write about the feeling of war atmosphere in the aristocratic school, but we should not write about the heavy feeling of life and death in the school. We only need to show that the lower students also know that there is war. The senior students who joined the army went out to exercise on the grounds of special group training. In this way, when writing the turning point, it won't be too sudden, and it will feel like a train suddenly turning 90 degrees. Overall a good book, highly recommended.

It's still a five-star review ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧. If you have any plots or comments, please give me feedback!

After enrolling in school, it's very much like the unfolding of the school battle in the city [face covering]

Yeah, yeah, yeah, the author has been following me for so long and still he only wrote this little content?

Tell me why no one is watching? What is the author doing? No one recommends it? I will not allow such a good book to be buried! ! !

Looks good, but updates are a bit slow

So far, the pacing of more than 30 chapters is pretty good, I hope it can be adapted into a manga

The characters are well created, with flesh and blood, and the plot is also interesting. I hope the author will update it as soon as possible.

The story is quite interesting, but I still hope to write more stories about demons and not just about the human world.

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good