Primitive Survival: From the Start with a Dog to Becoming Lord of the Beasts

Needless to say, it looks good, except for the fast pace of gathering a small team, which makes the things you encounter feel too coincidental, and everything else is pretty good. I just feel that in order to take care of some young readers, the intentions and functions of actions, language, and micro-expressions are expressed through narration in many places, and there is a lack of some process of figuring it out on your own. But online novels are like this, and not many people stick to the meaning of words in the later stage. Writing directly is also a way of expression. In the later stage, it can be a little less, just a few hints. There is also a feeling of the animal world. Although it is systematic, it does not have too strong a sense of existence, which further shows this ancient world. Can be five stars

It's pretty good. It's considered good in Tomato. It breaks away from the routine and has its own system. The protagonist's ability reminds me of another Fire Dance Wolf Song: Legend of the Glacier Hunter.

Let me talk about my feelings first: So far, as long as you are interested in this subject, this book is still highly recommended. In terms of content, there are basically no major flaws that I have read so far. At most, there are only some minor flaws that need to be corrected, and the author corrected them very quickly. The characters are quite distinctly drawn (the author is a bad guy, huh), and the development of the plot has many variables and ups and downs, but the result is clear, which is very attractive. The writing style is simple, true, and very direct, with a little bit of jokes and jokes, and the foreshadowing is just right. Moreover, the book indirectly contains popular science content (the author will post paragraphs and comments), so it is relatively comprehensive. In terms of structure, the overall plot and the main line are very tightly tied. The author can loosen this point and make it more life-like. The author is a talkative person who often talks to readers and listens to advice. Summary: As a new author, the writing like this is quite good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and support it with five stars (some minor issues will not be discussed here, I hope the author will read them in the comments). One more thing, students with relatively high moral values ​​are not recommended to watch it. The protagonist... Belongs to Gu Yue Fang Yuan (pure villain) who succeeds Cao Cao's suspicion... Tsk, I have been thinking about it for a long time and I don't know how to describe it. It's too bad. Doge.[Face covering][face covering]

I saw Chapter 43. It's a book with great potential. It doesn't have any statistical content. It looks like a very grand and magnificent world so far. The protagonist has nothing to worry about and his physique is just like an ordinary person. It all depends on his mentality. I hope the protagonist's combat power can be higher. Now his talents and professions are auxiliary.

5⭐Good reviews, please give the author a higher rating. The advantages and disadvantages of this book are obvious. The pace is slow, and the details of the system and extraordinary power are deliberately blurred, which highlights the difficulty of survival. However, the vagueness of extraordinary power can sometimes make people a little confused. Another advantage is that the description of ancient creatures is really good, and the setting of extraordinary powers and flaws is also very good. For me, this pace is just right, but most of Tomato's readers like fast-paced novels, and the early data for this type of novel is bound to not be very good.

So far, the whole story line of the novel is complete and the logic is clear. But so far, there is no good emotional ignition point, and there is nothing that can cause emotional fluctuations. I hope we can work harder in this regard.

The pacing of the first volume was a bit problematic, but after some adjustments, the overall impression was good. I couldn't stand the transition between the first and second volumes and the subsequent development. I am willing to give 5 stars to the first volume. I can't stand the second volume. 0 Points overall. 4 Stars. I encourage you. After all, don't be too harsh on free books.

The writing is quite good, the description is very detailed, and the plot is very rigorous. It is less of the over-description and reliance on extraordinary powers in clichéd online novels, and more of a science popularization of ancient biological knowledge. It has elements of beast control, survival, and sequence. It can be considered a masterpiece among current online novels. Question: 1. The language is not refined enough. Detailed descriptions are allowed, but they must be appropriate. There is no need to describe every expression of each person in detail, as this will slow down the overall rhythm. 2. The description of the extraordinary system is not clear. Although I have summarized it once, I still feel confused. The author said that there will be changes after Chapter 100. I am very much looking forward to it. In short, this is an excellent book on survival and beast control. It is innovative and well-written. However, it may be a new book for a newcomer, so the response from readers is not very good. I hope the author can persevere.

A very good work, with reference to real animal prototypes. The pictures and text the author put in the comment area are very interesting. The special abilities are placed on animals, which is not as abrupt as other animal control stories. In terms of current sales, it is relatively new and unique, and it is worth a look [smile] It was mentioned in the supplementary narration that the side effect of the protagonist's ability is to gradually become indifferent to life. I think it is okay. I will add some "talent" settings later.

It's 170 chapters now, and I feel that the author's writing is really good, but from my personal point of view and personality, I don't like the one named Tian. I prefer Zhao Yanyan (not happy to spray)