From the start, all I had was a dilapidated village, a band of gaunt refugees, and a gang of bandits about to attack.
But I wasn’t worried, because my mind held a treasure trove of knowledge spanning thousands of years.
From black powder to flintlocks, from steam engines to ironclad warships.
With my steel legions, I crushed a rotten dynasty; with the fire of science, I set the lies of theocracy ablaze.
As nobles of the old era trembled beneath the iron hooves of the Longyuan Army, and Western fleets were reduced to wreckage before mighty battleships and cannons, I had already turned my gaze toward the stars and the sea.
This world needs a full-scale… Industrial Revolution!
At present, the writing seems to be mature, and the details focus on hard-core details to find interesting points. The pace of the plot seems to be faster in comparison (for example, the protagonist's acceptance speed in the first few chapters, and the formation of initial followers are too consistent). However, it is more in line with my tendency to read articles, which is not procrastinating and has content. I hope to keep the details when advancing the plot later. Highly recommended! Os: why? No one is watching this?
The writing is good, well written, and engaging.
It starts in the north, then why does it go to the south? I still didn't notice that detail.
Well written, enjoyable to read, keep up the good work