Host! I’ve Never Seen This Kind of Redemption Before

Baozi's thesis felt like it was soaked in flavor, like a college student who has suffered a lot. The writing style of Tomato is really good, but the essay-style narrative is too bland. The content is good, and the theoretical propositions are good, but it cannot write anything attractive. Based on my experience in reading novels, the factors of a good novel lie in five aspects: writing, plot, concept, characterization, and expression (narration). If any one of them fails, it will be awkward, and if any one of them is obviously deficient, it will make people look into it. What's more, the author has almost no characterization, his expressions are rigid and flat, and the plot is like a template with no ups and downs. The impression the protagonist gave me was: a somewhat ambitious robot. Give me a five-star encouragement and keep up the good work! The characters can be gradually fleshed out, and there is a good foundation of writing. As long as the plot and narrative style are developed, there will be no worries about good results [Blow a kiss] (There are very few people in Tomato who are as good in writing as the author)

It's really cool, but I've always had the character of a boss who is unfazed and expressionless. No matter which world I go to, it doesn't matter what my original character is. It's just a sudden change. I don't really like it.

It's smooth, direct, straightforward, and refreshing. There is the possibility of AI participating in co-writing. In the two chapters of the traditional Chinese medicine part, two English words that are not used in daily life appear respectively. One is "although" and the other is "occupational disease". After much thought, I can't think of any reason why these two words should be expressed in English.

Highly recommended. The cool thing about this book is that the male protagonist is really powerful. It can be understood as the type of story about a big boss coming to the novice village. Although it is a whitewash, it is not the traditional type that only changes the unworthy person. The male protagonist is a person with a big picture. Every time, every profession must reach the extreme instead of just completing the task. Generally speaking, it is a cool male protagonist with a big heart and ability [Adore]

I read it based on the title of the novel, and thought it was a unique way of whitewashing. The protagonist is particularly smart or charming and does not lick the whitewash. But maybe the author wanted to show this, but unfortunately he failed to do it. Come on.

The story is very attractive, but after reading it, I felt that it was too far from what I imagined. The protagonist walks in like a robot and is as innocent as a robot, without any emotions, and no one suspects it even if his character is ruined. This kind of whitewashing seems like a different person, but others can't see anything wrong, and it's hard to see it with a clear mind. The male protagonist just used his own strength to cover up his previous mistakes. I feel that the cleansing has not been completed, and the previous stains are still there. The title originally attracted me, but after reading it I felt like it was a waste of time.

Three points are given to the first and second stories. The direction of the third story becomes strange. It is clear that the character of the first story is an omnipotent boss, the third story is about sacrifice in exchange for trust, and the subsequent stories are even more like a newcomer in time travel. The seventh story and the eighth story are especially strange and jerky. In the seventh story, the male protagonist's approach and strategy are like a newcomer who has just traveled through time. He is extremely jerky, like a new recruit, and his decisions are all wrong. Wrong, I can't see the strategizing of the first two worlds at all. The eighth world is even more powerless. It has been threatened and invaded many times and cannot effectively fight back. It only owes 15 taels but has to pay 50 taels and then asks the other party to establish a character. It is said that they will not have the idea of ​​the male protagonist's sister. It starts to be strange. The plot is far-fetched and not forced. I really can't understand it. Unless the author is changed, how can the short 100 chapters seem to be written by a different person?

Under normal circumstances, the male protagonist will keep a little bit of his personality and clean up his character. He likes to do it all at once. Some of the clean-up stories I read before took a long time. It's really cool to return to the novice village as a max-level boss. The author is a bit awkward in some places, but I still want to read it with my toes on the ground. That's part of the charm. When the last world is completed, the daily life of the host is over. Looking at the table of contents, I thought it was a eunuch novel. In fact, it's good that at least that world is completed, otherwise I would be scratching my head and wondering what will happen next. I wish Ye Ran all the best in his whitewashing career, and I also hope that the author's future updates will go well and live a healthy life.

The front part is actually quite dull, but I can still read it. I recommend starting from the seventh small world (because it is a bit like having two male protagonists from the beginning). I have read this book before. I am originally a book lover, but I happened to see this book, and I was thinking about the back part, and then I started to be shocked. Was this written by a different person? It really feels like a novel with two male protagonists, the kind where the older brother is gentle and the younger brother is very dependent on him. I have been looking for this type for a long time, but I finally found it 👁👄👁I won't say anything else. This book is deeply loved by me. I would like to give it a five-star rating.

The story is okay, but the male protagonist is a monk, a eunuch, a super tool man, and does nothing except tasks. So, is the male protagonist a god? If yes please inform