My Younger Brother Is the Heavenly Principles, and He Gives Me the Four Shades of the Primordial One

The setting is good, but the characters feel a little biased. It's true that Wendy was worried when she saw her boss in Teyvat, but she shouldn't be shocked. After all, people who have been to Sky Island know the situation of the Four Shadows. As for Ruonava... How should I put it? In fact, I feel that her way of speaking is not very concise. Judging from Ruonava's performance in Nata and PV, she still feels like a "human", but the writing is more like a robot [laughter]

It was very well written, but I changed the character later

Delicious😋…🤢…🤮…😑…😋It's so delicious. If you haven't tried it before, you can try it😋

The writing is quite good. When I see the protagonist, I feel so helpless. It's quite interesting.

It feels pretty good, but those two are too scary. This made me run around everywhere

The subject matter is good, but it's a bit awkward. Just write normally and don't be surprised.

So far, the subject matter is good, but the author's grasp of the plot is a bit lacking. It is recommended to stop or skip the update for a few days to sort out the ideas and outline.

Why do I feel a little bit epileptic? It looks good. Thank you to the author.

The subject matter is novel, the plot is a bit procrastinating, and it's easy to talk about one thing many times, but overall it's not bad.

Has it been changed inside? I feel like some things are missing.