DNF: Hard Work Pays Off, and One Punch from Me Slays a God!

There are no problems with the plot, just a small suggestion. The harem is good, but don't turn it into a bulldozer. I understand the mentality of wanting to accept it, but some characters are dumped without any foreshadowing, such as Skadi, which is quite interesting. I will continue to pursue it and hope to write better and better in the future.

Very nice! Non-toxic and edible! The writing is also very good without stressing the strength of the battle!

A very good dnf fanfic. There are fewer and fewer dnf writers these days, and this is a story with multiple female protagonists, which is very good. Who hasn't fantasized about those beautiful female NPCs and their cool skills? I just feel that although the male protagonist's strength can be improved quickly, he is still waiting for the plot to follow the original work, and the plot has not changed much. The male protagonist's strength has not shown much, and he is not famous enough. Many people still look down on the adventurer male protagonist. But it is also understandable that writing slowly according to version events means that it is more stable to have a built-in outline. It is my personal hope that, if possible, the male protagonist can show off his strength a little more, and he can also take the initiative to change the plot in advance, change a little more, and be more pretentious, so that there will no longer be a situation where passers-by will look down on the protagonist. Then the source of the male protagonist's information has not been explained. I think it can be said that the male protagonist was reborn in the apocalypse and was sent back to the past by the lion head, so he acted around. It would be okay to directly talk to the female protagonists about the situation, which can spoil the future for others. But it all depends on the author's ideas, as long as it can be kept updated and it doesn't explode. Good luck to you.

The only thing that dissatisfied me about this book is Chapter 12. Celia, because the protagonist accidentally broke her fur and said, "I'm going to kill you." I'm very satisfied. It would be better to replace this sentence with "you idiot". Starting a harem is a way I'm familiar with. It's very comfortable to read.

Noble big guy, I have practiced all the routes of the Paladin, including telekinesis, guns, swords, and all those other messy things. I have practiced all the professions. Oh, it will blow your mind.

I wish it was more focused on the protagonist's perspective. Since going to heaven, there have been too many chapters describing other people's perspectives.

It's okay, maybe it's because the fandom is relatively unpopular, and there are too many girls in it, which may be a bit toxic. Others are okay. After all, there are very few DNF fans, and those who understand it are all old players. It's not surprising that old players basically have a few favorite NPCs and have many female fans.

It looks good and makes people feel like replaying the initial DNF. Especially the protagonist is a priest, the only profession that I would never touch in normal play [face covering]

Quantomato may be the only DNF fan that is basically still updated and can be read, and it is 99% rare.

Not bad, the last time I read a DNF novel was The Ghost Swordsman