I Transmigrated into a Scumbag Dad with a Sign-In System

Overall, it's okay, the writing is good, and the characters are quite unique. At least the narration of the story is relatively complete so that you know what is going on. Unlike some novels that directly write the story without mentioning black and white, which makes you feel confused. At least the relationship between the characters is explained clearly to you, so that it will not make people confused. Looking forward to the follow-up, I personally recommend it!

Wow, it's so beautiful and so short. I'm worried to death. When will it be finished? Please update it soon! [Crying] Why did I fall into the trap before it was finished! Don't sleep, author, there are 10 updates every day! ! ! ! It was okay at the beginning, but later on the plot was stuck in the tug-of-war between the father and his second son, endlessly struggling with the question of whether dad has gotten better or not. The second son kept doubting his father, and the two of them went back and forth on this issue of trust, which was really annoying and very boring. I just want to see some substantive plot advancement, instead of just watching this kind of inner drama that stands still. Can't this repetitive paragraph be skipped or simplified? I ran out of patience and gave up.

A good book with flesh and blood, the warmth and warmth of human relationships, and the happiness of family are well written. The creation of characters, the fluctuations of interactive emotions, and the verbal dialogue are all very delicate and down-to-earth. The direction of the plot is very natural and not abrupt. The protagonist's change in human kindness makes readers feel the warmth. All kinds of bullshit say this book is not good, but have you read it carefully? It is much better than a stupid and sweet text that is mindless. I saw that the author was writing sincerely, and the water always flowed, and the more he wrote, the more interesting it became!

Come on, author, keep up with the progress. It's not good enough. We need to seize the high ground before AI follows suit. Don't add anything like princes and princesses at the end.

Let me leave a good review first and see if it can appear on it [face covering] I really want to ask the author, don't you read so many comments? I read Chapter 240 intermittently, and I kept pulling and talking. Can't we leave this village? Goldfinger gave him such a powerful ability, so you just let him stay in the village? There are more than 200 chapters. Do you know how I got here? Besides feeling aggrieved, I am still aggrieved! ! Can you talk less? I read novels just for fun and enjoyment, but you made me feel frustrated till the 240th chapter! Chapter 240! ! ! You may say that if you want to experience pure and refreshing writing, you should go to other places, but you should also read the comments. Not to mention that Chapter 240 can separate one side, but now you don't even dare to say a word in front of a small officer and soldier? ! I feel so useless! ! ! I rarely comment, I don't like to say anything good or bad. But your book is the one I have posted the most comments on. Do you think there are fewer and fewer paragraphs of comments in your articles? (The above is all written by me when Shen Jingbing was having an attack. If there is any offense, it is all my fault. I apologize to you first! I will continue to read. I hope I won't be so cowardly in the future.)

It's a very interesting system. What attracts me to watching it is to know what will be released tomorrow. The more I watch, the more I get. The reason for the low score is probably that the best game has been jumping around for too long. These days, everyone loves to read cool articles. The faster the best game dies, the higher the score.

The writing is very good and the story flows smoothly. I really like the male protagonist. There is no holy father or guardian, and there is basically no sloppy plot! But... It's over a hundred chapters. You can fight against the best, but you can't always fight against the best! Looking forward to the male lead's career in the future!

Actually, when writing online articles, "story" and "writing style" can be completely independent and have complementary effects. But if you use extremely beautiful writing to write a boss article... It will still be a boss article. You write "alive" in poor writing style, but it is still "alive". This is almost the case here. The story is not bad, but the writing style is not very good, and it is not that the writing style is not good at all. It is mainly because of the poor grasp of the rhythm. The first dozens of chapters are really breathless, and the later chapters are better, but... It is not much better at the moment. For example, things that should be released are deliberately suppressed, and things that should be ignored are written a little crookedly. Fortunately, it can make people feel that it is constantly getting better, otherwise it would really be at a level of 6.0 Or so. And this is not a bad story line. If it is only about six o'clock, you can imagine how uncomfortable it would be to watch... It's possible to keep it. Gold fingers in farming articles are actually more attractive to readers. It has nothing to do with whether they are cool or brainless. Just like why people are generally disgusted with CP but not with golden fingers. [Laughing and crying] Because basically those who have CP can't write CP well, and everyone feels uncomfortable watching it. And if there is a cheat, it means that the author knows his own shortcomings and chooses a setting that can reconcile with the readers. This actually respects the readers. The author really plans to stay in the village and never go out. It's already over 200 chapters, and he's still pushing the word count over and over again.

Nice! ! ! I am decisive in situations and do not procrastinate. I have found many such books to read. This is the only one I have added to the bookshelf to keep up with. The other books have become like old men and old ladies. I basically gave up after reading a few chapters. If it is not the Holy Father and the Holy Mother, the plot is poor. This one is okay, although it is also It's about using the things from space to raise a big family, but as I continued reading, I didn't feel like the Holy Father. Maybe it's because the book dealt with the vampire parents and brothers properly at the beginning, so that people wouldn't be disgusted. Later on, it doesn't matter if I use some things to support my own children and grandchildren.

This novel gives people an eye-opening feeling. The plot is ups and downs, full of surprises and surprises. From the suspense setting at the beginning to the subsequent advancement, readers always maintain a high level of interest in reading. The characters are distinct and each has its own unique personality and backstory, which is impressive. The author's writing skills are solid and his descriptions are delicate and vivid, allowing readers to immerse themselves in the story scenes. Overall, it is a masterpiece worth reading and highly recommended!