I’m the Blacksmith in the Starter Village, and All the Players Work for Me

It's very interesting. Carl gave Siren a tombstone, and Siren's soul survived. Siren also protected Carl. They are all good babies (●✿∀✿●) If you like the emotionless drama of the male protagonist, you can watch it. The main reason is that this author is too prolific. He really made me cry to death. I finished it in the morning and even more in the afternoon. I hope every author can learn this spirit.

It's a very novel angle, and the real questions are great when you look at them There is a feeling that I am taming the AI ( ͡°ᴥ ͡° ʋ)( ͡°ᴥ ͡° ʋ)

It's a very novel feeling. I've never seen the protagonist be an NPC in the game before, but they are basically despicable foreigners. This is the first time I've seen the protagonist being an NPC. The writing is great. Come on, author.

The idea is very novel, and the plot of the confrontation between the male protagonist of Novice Village and the game system is also very good, but I don't understand why the previous settings were abandoned after the beginning of S1. It feels like all game NPCs have become creatures from another world, and the male protagonist's direction has changed from exploring his own emotions and the world to exploring technology. So in this worldview, everything in the game world is data. Is the male protagonist awakening to AI, or is he projecting from another world, and uses his big hands to summon the fourth natural disaster? The first part is what I think is novel, but the second part is not that interesting to me, and I feel that the novel is developing towards the latter world view. There are many exciting things I want to see that I haven't written about, such as players discovering that the male protagonist is more than a simple AI program, some special interactions between players and the male protagonist, etc.

The method of writing about the fourth natural disaster has never been seen before, and it is somewhat groundbreaking. Maybe this is the next rising branch. At present, it seems that the context is clear, the emotional descriptions of the characters are detailed, the main and supporting characters are vividly portrayed, and there are not too many lines that make people laugh. Since I have not seen similar articles, the proportion of my own comments is small. In order to prevent the author from stopping updating, I will give it a perfect score.

(Not human-machine) If this book is out of ten, I would give it 9 points. It is a very good online game novel. The novel not only has the excitement of traditional online game novels, but also has unique elements such as will, void, and laws. The aborigines, NPCs, and players have distinctive personalities. However, maybe because the author is not particularly experienced, there are some slightly clichéd plots and fun moments in the article. A little bit, but the flaws are still intact, it's worth watching👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

1. Innovation is very good, but I feel that the author has not decided how to explain the protagonist's awakening, because currently it can be said that it is an NPC created by the core of the world, and the protagonist is digitized, and the awakening is an accidental factor. 2. The world view is not too strong, just a small part. The foreshadowing is also average, with three job transfer fragments and it ends hastily. 3. There is also a little bit of trouble. It can be seen that the author writes the novel based on emotion. Some parts are repeated two or three times, such as the protagonist's perception of the void and his conjecture about his life experience. The two chapters before and after are almost the same. 4. The beginning is innovative, but the writing skills are still a bit lacking. The novelty and curiosity of the audience are not very high. The story of the first chapter is completed (version update), and it is not particularly big. The shocking event ends with flowers being given to the dead boss, and the world is updated (it has already been described once, so it is not new), so the score is probably quite low at the beginning. Let's get rid of the problem of repetitive lyricism (or the word count) first, this book is still worth reading.

The subject matter is relatively new and creative, and the storyline is good. However, I personally think there are some shortcomings. The details are not handled well. For example, there is no detailed follow-up on the job transfer clues. In addition, the outpost feels like a military outpost of a kingdom, but the scale is quite large, with various divisions. Also, why not just call it Dawn City? Agricultural production is not mentioned, nor is it related to other areas. Some people think that some scenes are not well written. The victory in the void siege should be very epic. The narrative in the book is relatively bland. Overall, this book has more potential.

As a bookworm for more than ten years, I highly recommend this novel. It is very logical and contagious. Friends who click in can look back. The front part is a relatively dull transition, and it gradually begins to exert force. Various foreshadowings and plot layers are endless. If you are a player who loves to play games, you will experience two different perspectives. You will find that we are so invincible in the "eyes" of NPCs. Or in the "eyes" of players, NPCs can communicate independently and would rather believe that they are AI than think that they really have souls! All in all, this is a very good novel. After reading it, this is the author's first book. It's great for a newcomer to write so well. I wish the author every day to be inspired.

Conclusion: I think it's okay. It's a very novel novel, but you can't use the cool introduction of the assembly line as the main text. The main text is about growing up from a data that I don't know anything about, and the strength is a bit average. The focus at the beginning was the forging ability and "genius" in the introduction. After reading it, I found that the content is a bit sparse. Up to now, it is the early and middle stages of the second picture (it feels like there is still a lot of content that has not been added) and it does not match the content in the introduction, so I can't give it a 5⭐️. This is a bit novel, so I give it a 4⭐️. I hope this slow-burning book can survive.