One Piece: I Took a Wrong Turn on the Path to Immortality and Ended Up on a Pirate Ship

It's a pirate fanfic that's very suitable to my taste, it's delicious and I love to eat it😋! Moreover, the author is super hard-working and updates every time! The relationship between Aqing and his friends is very heart-warming, and the emotional line is also very delicate. It is a pity that it is almost finished. [Sending my heart], will the author publish a new book about One Piece fans?

This is the only novel that I have read hundreds of chapters. The content written by Master Lao is very interesting to me. The emotional line is so subtle. I like the feeling of finding a piece of candy by myself from time to time. She should be regarded as a career-oriented heroine. I'm not good at evaluation. I can only evaluate based on my own liking. I usually don't write [face covering] if you like it, you can read it [love]

I want to see the interaction between the heroine and Ace and Luo. It's super sweet. I especially love the interaction with Luo. I can't hold the corner of my mouth down. Extra chapters, definitely extra chapters, about life with husbands, daily life with children, interesting things about the heroine's pregnancy... I want to see a chapter where everyone envy Luo for having a daughter, and Luo is also a daughter slave. After all, out of a dozen boys, only one is a girl, and it is Luo, the heroine's first man.

The overall idea is very good! However, after reading more than 60 chapters, I feel that except for the main characters, the character creation is relatively flat due to the fast pace of the plot, but overall it is a good author, so cheers!

Very beautiful, I like it 💕

I have been looking for a book of this type. This one is very well written. Come on.

It's pretty good. Overall, I prefer the emotional lines of Luo, Kidd, and Shamrock. Really good. However, at the end, I discovered that there were more than a dozen babies. Even though he is cultivating immortality, he can use the pregnancy spirit stone. Yes, there are still a dozen more to come. Make a good word. But the ones that were born are really cute, and they all have their own characteristics. But I'm still a little confused, it's too much.

It's very interesting to watch, I like the emotional interaction between the characters, keep it up.

I like it so much, I really want to read it all in one go [crying] [crying] I'm so crazy and fainted [admiration]

Author, who is the cp [crying][crying]