I, Hongjun, schemed against the Demon Gods, the Wu and Yao clans, and all living beings. I wanted everyone to be equal and the Primordial World to stop being destroyed. In the end, I merged with the Dao and lost myself.
The Way of All Beings: Fight heaven, fight earth, fight people, and be happy every day.
Tongtian cried, "Teacher, you're playing favorites! My Second Senior Brother and I are both your disciples. Why do you only pick on me?"
Hongjun asked, "What kind of sect did you create?"
Tongtian... replied, "The Jie Sect."
Hongjun smiled. "I'm Heaven. What do you think? Before your teacher took human form, he had your father cut you in half."
Then Hongjun added gravely, "I've seen the Primordial World collapse and all living beings perish. Cultivation will only hasten the world's destruction. I want a Primordial World without immortals."
After battle upon battle, the Primordial World shattered, and all living beings had no choice but to move to Pangu's cells to live.
Countless years later, an old man said, "After the founding of the nation, no one is allowed to become a spirit."
Hongjun said, "I am not alone in my Dao."
A child asked his grandfather, "Grandpa, I read that in ancient times our country was called the Celestial Empire, and its envoys were called angels. Were they the angels people worshipped?"
The grandfather chuckled. "It's better to have no books than to believe everything in them."
It looks like the writing style is pretty good, I just have to wait and see how my writing goes in the future.
The writing is good, but the paragraphs are too long which affects the perception.