[Gap Moe + Inner Thoughts on Display + Raising a Yandere Empress]
Lin Mo is mute. He accidentally transmigrates to the world of immortal cultivation, with a “Divine Pen of Inner Thoughts” hidden in his soul. It needs no ink. With a mere thought, it turns whatever is on his mind into astonishing “bullet comments” that hang in the air, their power rivaling forbidden spells.
From the start, Lin Mo runs into the Nine Heavens Empress, Ye Qianning. She has been ambushed by her enemies, lost her cultivation, and been afflicted with the “Love-Struck Gu.” The Gu isn’t fatal, but it makes its victim develop an intensely yandere possessiveness toward their savior. When Ye Qianning wakes and sees Lin Mo’s innocent face, her red lips curl into a smile. “Little mute, from now on, your eyes, your hands, everything you have… belongs to me.”
Unable to speak, Lin Mo is frantic, sweating from head to toe as he screams inwardly, “Lady, who are you?! Don’t get so close! I’m just a kind passerby!”
The next second, golden light blazes above his head, and lines of cheeky bullet comments flood the sky:
[Seriously, sir, even getting scammed into a fake fall has made it to the cultivation world?]
[Danger ahead! Yandere Empress spotted. Fellow cultivators, bring your insulin!]
[Help! She looks like she wants to lock me in a room and keep me all to herself!]
Ye Qianning stares at the “bullet comments.” First she’s astonished, then she laughs out loud, her yandere possessiveness mixing with a thrill she’s never felt before. She decides she’s claiming this mute, no matter what!
The writing is okay, but I don't really like the male protagonist's character, like Jiahao who likes to show off.