Demon Slayer: The Flower Hashira Ate Your Lips

This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for the Noxian's outer ring hanging + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. In addition, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!

It's as if I've seen the next masterpiece in the Demon Slayer fandom. The protagonist is not invincible, and the native demon slayer has no cheats. It combines thunder and fire, and is powerful. The fighting part is very enjoyable. The story of the self-created ghost is also very eye-catching. The characterization is not OOC, and the portrayal of the protagonist is also impressive and vivid. The relationship line with Kanae is almost meaningless. The description of the process of falling in love and getting together is a bit sparse. The author could consider writing more daily details of the relationship line. Well, the kissing dialogue also gave me a sense of déjà vu in galagame. All in all, it is a good book. I hope the author will write more and write better and better.

It looks very good. The number of words in each chapter is basically around three to four thousand words. The fighting looks very comfortable, but the dialogue seems a bit inconsistent. There are many Internet memes and local dialects in it. I hope it can be improved in the future. Come on, author.

Demon Slayer is a pretty good book. The author's characters are all in line with the characters in the plot even if they are not OOC. The plot arrangement is also reasonable, and any typos will be corrected. The output is good [laughing]. The key is that the author switches between daily life and fighting very perfectly, and he is also very active. The emotional line is very easy to draw, and the daily battles are also well described. And didn't the author really eat the fruit of naming? [Facepalm] Both the self-created kata and the vampire technique are quite perfect, just like those created by the crocodile himself.

Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌

It's okay. It's a good book. The reason why I gave it 4 stars is that I think there are still some problems. That is, some book friends said before that the protagonist can always arrive and then end it, as if the ghosts can't be killed without the protagonist. I won't say anything about the female ghost. After all, she is an original supporting character who goes on a mission with the protagonist. It doesn't matter if the protagonist is highlighted. However, Purgatory Makijuro did not kill Pei Lang in the original work because after his wife died, he lost control of his emotions and did not cut off Pei Lang's neck. But since he was chopped into pieces by Pei Lang, there is definitely no need to protect civilians. But in the novel, you added the setting of protecting civilians out of thin air, just to show the highlight of the protagonist. There is also the plot of Qiang Rabbit. First of all, let me say that I am very happy to be able to save him in the novel. But in the selection in the original book, no one died except him. In this book, several people died despite being saved by the protagonist. This makes me a little uncomfortable to watch. I feel that this book weakens the shining characters in the original work, and then highlights how powerful the protagonist is. Therefore, I can't give it five stars. It's okay, I won't follow up on the comment, I read it wrong

It's a very good novel. The rating is definitely low. It could be at least 9.0. The design of the ghosts is very clever. Whether it is the consumption ghost that can make people age dozens of years instantly or the consumptive ghost that uses three kinds of poisons, it can make people shine. The author's design for the ghosts is beyond the standard. As for "death", it has just appeared. Let's not talk about the three ghosts of old age and illness. Each one has at least the potential to be played. It can be seen that the author has worked hard on the ability to conceive ghosts. I hope the author can continue to work hard. Of course, the author's art can only be said to be too advanced, just like the scene where Kanae opens her stripes [eating melon] Today I have caught up with the big team. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not stop updating, or add a few more updates every day [laughing] It's good to read. If you like it, write more.

In the past two years, I personally think it is the best-looking Demon Slayer fanfic I have read. The emotional line is delicate and the protagonist is not brainless and invincible. Overall, including the portrayal of ghosts, it is also very three-dimensional. I hope the author can keep writing. The data is getting better and better. Can you update it four times a day [smile][smile]

As long as you like Demon Slayer's original work, you will most likely like the story in this one. The author's character creation is relatively restorative. In terms of plot, everything that needs to be lived is survived, and everything that is damned is done. The author is also very lively. The most imaginative episode is when the heroine opens her stripes. In addition, during the current serialization period, the author's daily updates are 7,000+ and sometimes 8,000+, without any trace of using AI. Although there are some places where using two or three exclamation points is suspected of trying to make up the word count, this number of words is really unbeatable on Tomato, and many authors on paid platforms cannot do it.

I'll give you a suggestion, don't write long paragraphs. Many people nowadays can't read very long sentences. Two or three sentences put together are really long. Many people, including me, focus 80% of their attention on conversations while reading. Very long sentences give me the feeling of picking gold in the sand, which is very tiring. I read novels to escape reality and relax, not to sort sentences online.