Demon Slayer: Hanashira Ate Your Mouth

This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for the Noxian's outer ring hanging + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. In addition, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!

It looks very good. The number of words in each chapter is basically around three to four thousand words. The fighting looks very comfortable, but the dialogue seems a bit inconsistent. There are many Internet memes and local dialects in it. I hope it can be improved in the future. Come on, author.

It's as if I've seen the next masterpiece in the Demon Slayer fandom. The protagonist is not invincible, and the native demon slayer has no cheats. It combines thunder and fire, and is powerful. The fighting part is very enjoyable. The story of the self-created ghost is also very eye-catching. The characterization is not OOC, and the portrayal of the protagonist is also impressive and vivid. The relationship line with Kanae is almost meaningless. The description of the process of falling in love and getting together is a bit sparse. The author could consider writing more daily details of the relationship line. Well, the kissing dialogue also gave me a sense of déjà vu in galagame. All in all, it is a good book. I hope the author will write more and write better and better.

Demon Slayer is a pretty good book. The author's characters are all in line with the characters in the plot even if they are not OOC. The plot arrangement is also reasonable, and any typos will be corrected. The output is good [laughing]. The key is that the author switches between daily life and fighting very perfectly, and he is also very active. The emotional line is very easy to draw, and the daily battles are also well described. And didn't the author really eat the fruit of naming? [Facepalm] Both the self-created kata and the vampire technique are quite perfect, just like those created by the crocodile himself.

It's okay. It's a good book. The reason why I gave it 4 stars is that I think there are still some problems. That is, some book friends said before that the protagonist can always arrive and then end it, as if the ghosts can't be killed without the protagonist. I won't say anything about the female ghost. After all, she is an original supporting character who goes on a mission with the protagonist. It doesn't matter if the protagonist is highlighted. However, Purgatory Makijuro did not kill Pei Lang in the original work because after his wife died, he lost control of his emotions and did not cut off Pei Lang's neck. But since he was chopped into pieces by Pei Lang, there is definitely no need to protect civilians. But in the novel, you added the setting of protecting civilians out of thin air, just to show the highlight of the protagonist. There is also the plot of Qiang Rabbit. First of all, let me say that I am very happy to be able to save him in the novel. But in the selection in the original book, no one died except him. In this book, several people died despite being saved by the protagonist. This makes me a little uncomfortable to watch. I feel that this book weakens the shining characters in the original work, and then highlights how powerful the protagonist is. Therefore, I can't give it five stars. It's okay, I won't follow up on the comment, I read it wrong

Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌

It's a very good novel. The rating is definitely low. It could be at least 9.0. The design of the ghosts is very clever. Whether it is the consumption ghost that can make people age dozens of years instantly or the consumptive ghost that uses three kinds of poisons, it can make people shine. The author's design for the ghosts is beyond the standard. As for "death", it has just appeared. Let's not talk about the three ghosts of old age and illness. Each one has at least the potential to be played. It can be seen that the author has worked hard on the ability to conceive ghosts. I hope the author can continue to work hard. Of course, the author's art can only be said to be too advanced, just like the scene where Kanae opens her stripes [eating melon] Today I have caught up with the big team. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not stop updating, or add a few more updates every day [laughing] It's good to read. If you like it, write more.

In the past two years, I personally think it is the best-looking Demon Slayer fanfic I have read. The emotional line is delicate and the protagonist is not brainless and invincible. Overall, including the portrayal of ghosts, it is also very three-dimensional. I hope the author can keep writing. The data is getting better and better. Can you update it four times a day [smile][smile]

As long as you like Demon Slayer's original work, you will most likely like the story in this one. The author's character creation is relatively restorative. In terms of plot, everything that needs to be lived is survived, and everything that is damned is done. The author is also very lively. The most imaginative episode is when the heroine opens her stripes. In addition, during the current serialization period, the author's daily updates are 7,000+ and sometimes 8,000+, without any trace of using AI. Although there are some places where using two or three exclamation points is suspected of trying to make up the word count, this number of words is really unbeatable on Tomato, and many authors on paid platforms cannot do it.

I'll give you a suggestion, don't write long paragraphs. Many people nowadays can't read very long sentences. Two or three sentences put together are really long. Many people, including me, focus 80% of their attention on conversations while reading. Very long sentences give me the feeling of picking gold in the sand, which is very tiring. I read novels to escape reality and relax, not to sort sentences online.

It's a very well-written book. I've read more than 20 chapters so far. None of the characters are OOC. The training process of the protagonist on Momoyama is very interesting. The strict care of Mr. Kuwashima is a highlight. The protagonist speaking modern Internet language may affect the viewing experience, but once you get used to it, it makes the work more dynamic. Finally, I hope the author can grasp the issue of combat power [Blowing Kiss]

Yes, it can be considered a masterpiece, but the plot connection and scene jumps are too abrupt, which easily interrupts the imagination while reading the novel. In other aspects, the plot integration is good, there are no poisonous points, and the combat power does not increase unintentionally. Especially the description of the fight, if the full score is 💯, it would be about 80 points, which is considered excellent in Tomato. The writing is online, not bad writing.

Basic sword type Type 1: Thunderbolt Flash: Infuses power into one leg, and performs a straight-line attack with a sword at super high speed. Type 2: Rice Soul: Instantly executes five lightning-like combos to deal with multiple enemies. Type Three·Gathering Mosquitoes into Thunder: High-speed rotation produces ring-shaped thunder pattern slashes, integrating attack and defense. Type of Four: Far Thunder: Thunder and lightning burst out of the body, then rush forward at high speed, and then slash after approaching the target. Type of Wu: Thermal World Thunder: Releases long-range slashes with high-heat thunder and lightning. Land Type·Electric Boom and Thunder Boom: Centering on itself, a large-scale lightning strike is erupted in all directions. Qi Type: Fire Thunder God: Rushes and slashes at super high speed, and the trajectory turns into a golden thunder dragon. One type derived variant Thunderbolt Flash·Sixth Consecutive: Six consecutive sudden changes of direction and slashing attacks. Thunderbolt Flash·Eighth Chain: Add two stages of advance on the basis of Sixth Chain. Thunderbolt Flash·Superior Speed: The ultimate secret of maximizing speed, but it consumes a lot of money. Fire Kagura Circle Dance: A basic move, using both arms to strike with circular flames. Blue Sky: Sends forward a flaming slash that burns like the sun. Blazing Sun Red Mirror: Swings out two arc-shaped horizontal slashes in succession, both offensive and defensive. Sun-Magic Rainbow: Creates an afterimage through high-speed rotation, used to dodge and lure enemies. Train: After somersaulting, it swings out a vertical flame slash, its movements are similar to the water wheel of Breath of Water. Bone-Scorching Sun: Releases a rotating flame slash, which can burn ghosts and inhibit their regeneration ability. Yang Hua Tu: launches a thrust attack, and the body produces a ring-shaped flame special effect. Flying Wheel Yang Yan: Shake the tip of the sword to create the illusion that the blade has become shorter for a surprise attack. Sunset Turn: Jump diagonally above and behind the enemy, and attack with a knife from the blind spot. Radiant Enlight: Swings out a spinning slash from top to bottom, with the effect of suppressing ghost regeneration. Halo Dragon·Head Dance: Quickly and continuously slashing to create the visual effect of a flying fire dragon. Flame Dance: An enhanced version of Round Dance, which performs two slashes in an instant, symbolizing the completion of the move cycle. Type 13: A complete cycle formed by continuously performing the previous twelve types, without a separate name.

This is the best novel with a single heroine, Kanae, that I have read. The author must update it soon.

I want to give it three points because the enemy's original blood ghost technique is extremely unbalanced and the emotional scenes... Are a bit tacky. It's not a bad thing, but I would give it a 4 points for a fast action fanfic that is written like a running account. There is no reason to give this a three points. Of course, other places are well written, especially the battle scenes. Kanae's battle was well written, and the previous chapters were very interesting, so I give it 5 stars.

It's pretty good. I'll adjust the timeline later and I think it'll be pretty good. Except for the timeline issue, all other points are in place. Please write more. Take the time to write, brother.

I think it's quite interesting, especially the description of battles, which is pretty good among other fan fictions. However, some dialects and Internet memes are a bit too much, which makes it difficult to immerse yourself in it. The most important thing is that the strength is improved step by step, unlike many fans who get Breath of the Sun + Transparent not long after the start. . . The rating shouldn't be so low. I feel that around 8.5 Is more reasonable. If it's right, it could go up to 9. Keep it for now, wait until it's over and then watch it [Blow a kiss]

The author is really good, but why did you stop updating? I really beg you, author

I was originally listening to the book. The writing is really good, especially the opening chapter. Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I'd like to support it by giving it a five-star rating. I must keep writing it [Love][Love][Love]

It's very relaxing and easy to watch, and the plot is relatively idealistic. It can be said that it incorporates everyone's good wishes for Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba. People like me who can't stand swords love to read this kind of sweet story. Five-star praise [like]

It has the potential to be on par with or even surpass the two top Tomato Demon Slayer fandoms, Iibashira and Shinsei Tan.

I finished reading this book in one go. The main character is my favorite Thunder Breath, and the self-created breath is also added to the fusion. The Cp is Kanae, and I have to eat it now. The plot and fighting scenes are very well written, especially the self-created ghost plots are very unique. Those who are difficult to calm down and need to be saved are all written, and the butterfly parents are also saved. I wonder if we can add a side story later, where the protagonist and Zenitsu fight against Yue Yue. Mainly because I didn't enjoy watching it [laughing evilly]

It's really good, has a plot, good intelligence, and decent combat power. Emotional dramas are also okay. There are a few words that can touch me. Looking forward to the development of the plot Concentrate a little, reach the peak, thunder's breath, ノ type, thunderbolt flash! ! ! !

I clicked on it when I saw Thunder Fire Sword in the introduction, but after reading it, I didn't see anything below the neck.

I don't know why it only has a score of 7.5. It is obviously a standard 9:00-ish Demon Slayer fanfic. The writing style and plot are similar to those of the 9:00-ish Demon Slayer fanfic, or even worse. I highly recommend it. I hope the author will continue to persevere and be sure to finish it!

It's pretty good, just a little short. I wish I had a million words when I found this book.

It's very interesting. There are a lot of words in each chapter. Except for the slow relationship line, everything else is very good. As long as you keep updating, you will definitely get a 9.0. Come on.

Become one of my favorite demon slayer foods, how can you cultivate it!

Not bad. The only thing I want to complain about is the old lady ghost. I thought Qiantu and Yiyong could take care of them, but I didn't expect that the protagonist would have to rush to the rescue in the end [face covering]

Yes, she's pretty pretty. The heroine is probably Kanae.