
The Down-and-Out Second Male Lead in a Redemption Romance
救赎言情文里的落魄反派男二
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Oh my god, the writing is so good. The plot is smooth. Watching Xu Wen step into Lu Qingrang's world, watching Lu Qingrang gradually realize that this is more than a brother's relationship, watching Xu Wen being fooled by the system and carefree, everything is touching. I am looking forward to the development of their relationship in the future. I want to see what other methods our Green Tea Lu Qingjang will use to make Xu Wen unable to live without him? All in all, this book is awesome! I hope it won't stop updating🥹. When you're confused about writing, read the book reviews from our readers. You must stick to it! I will also insist on reading your books! ! 😘😚 This book is really good [crying] Recommended!
It's very interesting to watch, and the psychological changes of the two protagonists are very relatable and heart-wrenching. The male protagonist's sensitivity and despair were slowly cured by Xu Wen. Maybe as Shi Tiesheng said, a person who wants to die just longs for love, so he cherishes it so carefully.
The writing is very good, and I kept reading. There was no boring part in the middle, and there was no place that made me embarrassed (except for the supporting character named "Chen", which really made me laugh to death. The male and female protagonists of the original book are simply amazing. If you have a brain problem, you can read it for fun). The relationship between the protagonists is very natural, and the feeling of family makes people feel warm in their hearts. Sometimes the possessiveness and wet thoughts of green tea that spread out from the attack make me feel sour and refreshed at the same time, which is a good comment. Being particularly well-liked by others, being straight means falling directly in love with a man, being extremely doting on him, feeling a little in love without realizing it, but it's harmless, and living the same life as a married couple. In short, this book is well written, both of them have a lot to say, and the content is of high quality. I highly recommend it. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]
A loves to eat fried skewers. Who are you? ! [Angry] [Love], I suddenly came to the tomato market and wrote such a shocking and delicious article, which made me think about the young couple Lu and Xu day and night! ! I only read half of it and couldn't wait to write a review! I loved the writing! The emotional line is written very smoothly! Especially the description of psychological activities is also very natural. An empathy that makes people unable to help themselves. The description of the early escape process is also very vivid. The writing is so good! [Angry] [Love] [Love] I'm stupid, but I really like this book! I hope the plot will get better and better in the future. That's it for now, Lu Xu is 99! I rarely write reviews on Tomato. After reading so many books, this is the second time I have attached a review. I highly recommend it! Show them all to me! ! [Love][Love][Anger]
Excellent. In addition to being well-written, it is beautiful and realistic. Many novels written about reality make me feel powerless and disgusted from the bottom of my heart, making me unable to stand it. I am realistic for the sake of reality. It stands to reason that this is the case, but it's amazing. I won't feel depressed after reading this article, because apart from the reality, Xiaowen and Xiaoqingrang's rational but positive attitude makes me feel warm and powerful. Even if reality is a little dark, life can be beautiful. Other novels are so dark that they paralyze me, but this one felt like a shining light in the gray. After watching it, I became more positive. Xiaowen is like the sun, lovable, and Xiaoqing is sensible and cute, like a kitten that has been exposed to the rain and is full of vigilance but whose fur has been dried by the sun. All in all, cute (๑>ڡ<)☆
It's like finding gold out of shit. The rhythm is so cool and it doesn't drag out at all. The emotional line is so cool that it makes me mouth-watering. The setting feels quite novel. Anyway, it makes my eyes shine. The psychological journey of the attack is so good. It's just this green tea that's so cool. The feeling is like a little sun. It melts people. It's like that, the two strong characters are very cool. The two-way redemption between them and the two-way rush are really good-looking. This is the real redemption. Let's clear it up. It's serialized but very good-looking. It's more popular with straight men. Of course, I saw this as a joke. The plot in the article needs to have some filth. Of course, the words are insulting to women - if scolding a woman who sells her sex for illegitimate gains can be considered insulting to women, apart from these feelings, there are no other big red flags. Personally, I think, no matter what you think, the protagonist is definitely not perfect. If it doesn't look good, just quit. Sister cp can read it, sister cp can be more aggressive or more accepting, and extreme control can go away. The young couple has a good relationship, and the author's writing style is also very good. In short, you still have to try it yourself to see if it suits your taste. Personal evaluations are subjective. I hope this book will get better and better.
I captured a very sweet young couple who really appreciate my xp💕My wife's writing is very good, the narrative structure is clear and the rhythm is comfortable. In the early stage, Xiao Xu was like an alien object (fog) from the sky, so vibrant, messy and savage, stirring someone into a pool of deathly silence, and the image stood up instantly. The little sun with strong energy is a little reckless, but sincere and kind. From the moment he got rid of the pursuit, the focus of shaping was shifted from Xiao Xu to Brother Lu - Brother Lu is like this, his brain is in the country. Being penetrated bit by bit, the living dead he met for the first time slowly revived, and after some ideological struggle, he took the initiative to hand over the chain to Xiao Xu. A psychological description that is completely different from the original male protagonist is a plus! Look at this realization, you deserve to have a wife:-D [What he wants is the vivid appearance of Xu Wen at this moment, the unpolished purity, the eyes that will light up because of him and become angry because of injustice. What he wants is Xu Wen's complete self that has not been distorted by anyone. Any attempt to erase this trait, even if it stems from the darkest possessiveness in his own heart, is the greatest blasphemy against Xu Wen. Su Xia's ending is a warning. And Xu Wen must always be himself. From the current point of view, this book is very friendly to the protagonist. The highlight is on the young couple. The growth line is very clear, and the control group is not unexpected. If Xiao Xu's charm value is 10, these two are probably negative, and there is nothing to discover about them hahhh Come on, madam💕 My wife wrote it so delicately, and the simple and warm daily love story in the later period is particularly healing. It's like after the curtain is removed, the originally noisy stage suddenly becomes quiet. Only the two protagonists are in love with each other in their own little world. Where their eyes linger is the embodiment of love. The whole audience comes with curiosity and leaves with blessings🥰Pure natural cookies, we sincerely invite you to try them!
Fairy!!, The two little ones fill each other's wounds, Xu Wen seeps into Lu Qingrang's life little by little, making Lu Qingrang rely on him, and even fall in love with him. The relationship between the two people grew from far away to close, they trusted and cared for each other, and finally felt their love for each other, fairy tale! After the difficulties and bitterness, they finally lived a stable life, and they came closer to each other and cherished each other in this warm daily life. Just like the pothos in the article, it goes from withered to fresh, unfolding a new life. The writing is very good and makes people feel comfortable to read🥳
Evaluation Type: Pure love between two male protagonists, two-way redemption, two strong counterattacks, time-travel system Perception: The writing is vivid and delicate, the emotions are touching, the plot is smooth and touching, and the story is well written! Personal Amway Friends who like to watch the pure love between two male protagonists can jump right in! This book is really amazing - the interaction between the young couple is so sweet so far. If it were a perfect 10, I would give it a 100. I highly recommend everyone to read it! The road of love between Gong (Lu Qingrang) and Shou (Xu Wen) has no industrial saccharine. Every step is delicate and reasonable. This is what two-way redemption should look like! First of all, the heartbeat of Gong is never a moment of excitement, but is built up by sincerity and preference day after day. It's not the moment when Shou saved his life, but the sense of belonging every time Shou said "go home" seriously, the care when Shou firmly said "for you", and the companionship when Shou said tenderly "I'm listening"... Shou's care is never deliberately to please, but silent companionship and patient guidance. After reading this delicate and firm tenderness, you will really be struck by Shou's charm. Looking at Shou's temptation, he probably fell in unconsciously when he saw Gong Cong's fragile and pitiful body slowly showing his soft and lovely appearance. Shou's wish at the beginning was very simple, that is, to find a wife and children, and after being bound to the system, he just wanted to complete the task well. At first, the attack was more out of sympathy for his tragic experience, and he couldn't help but be accommodating and take care of him at all times. But the longer he got along, the more he discovered the gentleness in his heart, the thoughtfulness in every detail, and the strength hidden behind his vulnerability. This love took root and sprouted quietly, without even realizing it. On the other hand, Gong, who has always been cautiously pursuing love with a bit of inferiority, ended up being carefree and Shou broke the window paper first and took the initiative to confess his feelings. The contrast was full! Finally, I really want to praise the author! How could you write about two such vivid and beautiful people! This is the true counterattack + two-way redemption. No one is dependent on the other. Love is never a constraint, but supports each other and grows together. What's even more rare is that the system here finally doesn't deceive people. It adapts to the plot throughout the whole process, doesn't steal the show and doesn't drag on. It's sweet and refreshing to watch, and you won't lose money if you invest in it!
The redemption sequence is very well described, and I can feel the warmth of their little home, but the number of words is too few. But I really want to see Yinshi Green Tea reveal his true nature, so you two should get together as soon as possible——! Congratulations on the completion of the text! The experience of chasing me all the way was really great! I would like to thank the author for the sweetness from beginning to end, and also thank the author for not including any cruel scenes for no reason (it is a complete cookie, which is great), and the part where I fight the villain is also super fast, without any water. But the most important thing is that the author is really good at writing about beauty. The wife who is obsessed with beauty is so smitten that she can agree to do anything. The beloved 0 pet 1 is also performed every day, I really like it! Thank you to the author for such a lovely and sweet work! I'm really looking forward to the follow-up episodes and subsequent works! Congratulations again on the completion🎉🎉🎉