Six-Yuan First-Timer Bonus: Conquer the Ghost Bride from the Start

A great book, quite funny. The biggest problem is that it's too short. I hope the author knows something [makes a face] I'm going to read your last book. Please hurry up and write this one [Cool]

What can I say? It's actually very interesting. If you like this subject, you can read it. There are indeed many shortcomings. It's too short. The collapse of combat power in the later part is probably intentional because the author couldn't continue writing. Only a small part of the ghost bride scene was written. It feels like a pity. This book has great potential for further development. Whether it is the continuation of the dungeon and the ghost bride's drama, or the protagonist's step-by-step completion of the dungeon to increase his strength, it can be continued. The connection between the middle dungeons is too fast. It might be better if there is a story about returning to one's own world in the middle. It may not be a very good book, but I think it is worth reading. The writing is also very good, even though it has a rushed ending that I couldn't finish, I read it word by word without skipping a chapter. To me, it is a very good novel. Come on, author. Please pay attention and look forward to it. It's just a personal opinion. Everyone's opinion is different.

I asked why it was so familiar. It turned out to be a ghost riding a bicycle. You call this the player's author. The author's previous book was all foreshadowing. The writing is quite good, keep up the good work with this one [Chigua]

I'm a long-time fan, and this book is pretty good. Just the name of the protagonist reminds me of another novel [laughing evilly]

The author is too short, can it be longer?

Is Xiaochuaner really dead? Can you let her live in ghost form😭😭😭 Hell has been established, so it's normal to receive souls. Bring the souls of Xiao Chuaner and the dead side of Double Face to hell and let them serve as ghost servants.

It's ok. It looks like a veteran at first glance. It's obviously different from what some new authors have written. It's ok. You can take a look when you're bored.

Very funny, hahaha

It is attractive and has the desire to explore logically. Each story is interesting and has an overall perspective.

It's really a bit brain-burning, and the writing is really good. It was a bit naive at first, but by the third copy, the writing suddenly became very good [Thoughts]