Dragon Raja: I Started with Heavenly Restriction, Mistaken for an S-Rank

The plot is smooth and the emotional lines are described delicately. Generally speaking, there are no problems. The heroine should have Xiaotiannu, Zero, Eri, Xia Mi, Nono, and the other two nannies who have a good impression. However, the author said that there are only five heroines at present, so it is hard to say whether there will be changes.

It feels ok, but the emotional scene with Su Xiaoqiang is a bit difficult to break down. The protagonist's perfect Tianyu Tyrant, with some enhancements, can't react to some of Su's actions, let alone deliberately letting her bite other parts of the body. There's no problem, even if he kisses her on the mouth, you can't react? Isn't this contradictory to the previous unwillingness to accept Su? Maybe he wanted to express Su's persistence and love, but Lin Ye is the protagonist, and the foil is a bit reversed, making the protagonist a bit indecisive. At this time, wouldn't it be possible to change it to better reflect the protagonist's personality? The changes come bit by bit, and there is no emotional plot in the middle. The direct changes are a bit abrupt. Also, Lu Mingze and his small group of drunkards were so angry that they didn't teach her a lesson or give her a hard time. They made the protagonist feel like a noob. It felt like everyone wanted to take advantage of the protagonist, which was really a bit frustrating. Being a fan of salted fish money is a kind of character, but you can't force the protagonist to be a fan of salted fish money. The main character's strength, not to mention becoming an ancestor and being an ancestor, also makes some people who are not very strong (Jiu De...) Dare not easily provoke him. I feel like it doesn't matter whether it's a nanny story. Whether it's the protagonist becoming a real king alone or taking a bad boy with him, I feel it will arouse some emotions in everyone's heart. When watching Dragons, I also hope that someone can save this world full of regrets and sorrows. Sometimes I also fantasize about someone being able to change this world. I just want to express my personal sentiments, I still like some of the plots @_@.

Yes, the author did a good job. He just wanted to portray the feeling of the tyrant Tianyu, who can throw sticks and catch bullets. The fighting scenes are good, and the character portrayal is also good. He is an ordinary person who is not familiar with the world and just wants to make money. An ordinary person who can kill the first generation. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss], Su Xiaoqiang's writing is also good. Judging from what you wrote, I guess you will join the nanny group after this.

Harry Potter: My parents are dead. Lu Mingfei: Me too. Harry Potter: I grew up living with relatives. Lu Mingfei: Me too. Harry Potter: I was admitted to an extraordinary school hidden in the ordinary world. Lu Mingfei: Me too. Harry Potter: The school I went to by train. Lu Mingfei: Me too. Harry Potter: The Headmaster favors me. Lu Mingfei: Me too. Harry Potter: I defeated the villain again and again under the principal's arrangement. Lu Mingfei: Me too. Harry Potter: I still have a soul inside me. Lu Mingfei: Me too. Harry Potter: After going through hardships, I tore apart the villain and became the savior. Lu Mingfei: Me too... I've been through five books and I'm still a loser.

I like this kind of cold, handsome, and straightforward protagonist. The author just doesn't spoil people when flirting with girls. I don't know why I can't stand most of the hot-blooded novels now. The last time I was hot-blooded was watching the early "Slaying God". The protagonist is very good, really invincible, not dragging

No kidding, there's a pretentious, stuffy, bourgeois, youthful air to it.

OK, I am also King Akaishi and I have shown you that the writing is better than Jiangnan, Gao Ran is more invincible than Chen Dong, and the sugar is sweeter than the Third Young Master of the Tang Family.

In fact, the author does not need to make such a reluctant excuse to make money, but can use "My parents are the beacon between me and the world. My parents are gone, and I need an important beacon to determine my position in the world. Money is a concept, it can be anything, I choose it to be a beacon."

Tomato does not have the copyright of Dragon Family The higher the score, the faster you die. Su Xiaoqiang's part poisoned me I am reincarnated into the dirt to take revenge

A cup of coffee with a strong aroma, but if it continues to be strong, it will only be sour. I want to see a bad boy stop being a bad boy, not another bad boy, especially the reason why the bad boy is bad is not whether he is strong or not. Very powerful and extremely weak, there is a precedent.