The Unfortunate Ones: Does the Xuanming Cult Have to Be the Villain?

Fully loaded, very beautiful, recommended. I have long disliked Zhang Zifan, and Junior Sister Zui Jian deserves to be punished.

It's quite interesting to watch. The protagonist's route for hegemony is very clear, which is to use Li Xingyun's reputation as emperor to fight for world hegemony after taking Sichuan and Shu. But the existence of Yuan Tiangang ensures that this book will not be a novel about hegemony, so that the plot of the original work can be reflected (many bad people fan fiction is just novels about hegemony, and it is better to read historical texts). It's not good to watch. The chapters from the time the protagonist steals the Underworld Emperor's treasure house to the present are very boring. Although the author has deleted many boring chapters, it is still very boring. The story is very scattered. One is about the protagonist, another is about the bad guy, and another is about Zhu Youzhen. Since you wrote that Zhu Youzhen got through the fake news and caught the protagonist, you should write more about other people's reactions and actions instead of suddenly jumping to other places.

The writing is good, it can be considered a relatively good one. The author is very good at writing emotional plots. The friendship line with Li Xingyun and the love line with Lu Linxuan are both good. Moreover, the protagonist is not an idiot. The resourcefulness is well described. There is no digging or burying, and the turning description is quite smooth. Moreover, the integration into the plot is very natural and there is nothing far-fetched. The golden finger setting is very reasonable, it is not mindless and there is room for game. One star is deducted because of Lu Linxuan. The protagonist has an emotional scene with Lu Linxuan. The writing is quite good, but the cute Lu Linxuan in the article was actually beaten by the author! ! The protagonist deceives the little girl and gets her around, it's really abominable! And judging from the author's attitude in the comment area, there will be other heroines... Poor Xiao Xuanzi. .

It's really beautiful. The author put a lot of thought into it. It can only be difficult to play a tragic and positive role and still want high scores. The book is still good

This bad guy is written powerfully, the details of various animations are well written, and the male protagonist is not a random stud. Every detail is well written, the heroine is not a vase, the author is really awesome

This book is quite interesting. The setting of the undead cheat is very novel. The protagonist no longer simply follows the original plot, but will actively layout and change the plot. The overall pace is relatively comfortable, the character interactions are interesting, and it's a pleasure to read. If you like bad people fanfiction, you can check it out. Author, you have to take care of yourself😭 Write novels when you have a rest😇 When I'm hungry, I write a novel😭 When I'm full, I'll write a novel😇 When I'm tired, I write a novel😭 When you feel good, write a novel😇 When I'm sleepy, I write a novel😭 When you wake up, write a novel😇 Write a novel when you cry😭 When you feel excited, write a novel😇 If you lose followers, write a novel😭 After getting a haircut, I will write a novel😇 If you are angry with Party A, write a novel😭 Once Party A gets the rice, write a novel😇 When I stay up late and become bald, I write a novel😭 When you are radiant, write a novel😇 When you run out of inspiration, write a novel😭 After carrying the pot for initiation, write a novel😇 I suspect that I will write novels when I am born 😭 When you are free in this world, write novels😇 When I miss my family and friends, I write a novel😭 When relatives and friends come to visit, I write novels😇 Write a novel when you are besieged by keyboard warriors😭 The keyboard warrior writes a novel after being sanctioned😇 Write novels 24 hours a day [Salute]

The plot is good, and the protagonist is well established. As the first delinquent fanfic I have read, at least it allowed me to catch up to the latest chapter. However, there are two points that made me very uncomfortable reading it. One is the old problem of you authors, which is to start long talks when you are excited about writing, either with various explanations or all kinds of information. The second is that as a fantasy anime fanfiction, it must be based on real history. People who see these two points are particularly unhappy.

The overall character creation is very good. I have only read a little bit of the Bad Guy anime, but I feel that there is nothing wrong with it. Those who say that the plot is slow and the combat power is overwhelming do not feel that it is, and every chapter is not redundant. It does feel a bit watery now, and the author is not quick to update, which makes the plot progress very slowly.

The story is very interesting, it is approached from a very novel angle, and I like the character of the protagonist very much. The upgrade of the combat power is also very good, but will there be any secrets in the future? I like Ao Gu very much and hope there will be a good ending.

The author has a very thorough understanding of bad people, and the plot has a very unique style. The protagonist knows what to do and what he does will change accordingly with the original plot. It is a rare and excellent work in the fandom, but I feel it is not enough. I hope the author will update it soon.